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Nov. 25, 2020

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Journal 11/26/20

Our training this time lasts four days in total. Five teachers have taught five classes, and these teachers are all university professors. Most of them have PhD qualifications. They are all good at teaching, and students concentrate on listening. Theory teaching is finished. We will hold field training this morning, and this is the last lesson of this training. After field training, we will have lunch at the hotel. After lunch I will return to my hometown, and this training is over.

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OThis time our training this timehas lastsed four days in total.

Five teachers have taught five classes, and these teachers are allIt has consisted of five classes in total, each taught by a university professors.

Most of them professors have PhD qualifications and are very good at teaching.

They are all good at teaching, and studentsis means that the students have been fully concentrate oning and listening throughout the classes.

Theory teachWith the theory classes completed, we will move onto the field training this finishedmorning, the final session of training.

We will hold field training this morning, and this is the last lesson of this training.

see above

After field training, we will have lunch at the hotelead back to the hotel for lunch before saying goodbye and heading home, thus concluding the training.

After lunch I will return to my hometown, and this training is over.

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Just a few improvements to make it flow a bit better. It is unclear whether the person talking is taking the course themself or not.

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Jack

Nov. 26, 2020

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I learned some words and some usages from your corrections. Thank you very much.

Journal 11/26/20


Our training this time lasts four days in total.


OThis time our training this timehas lastsed four days in total.

Five teachers have taught five classes, and these teachers are all university professors.


Five teachers have taught five classes, and these teachers are allIt has consisted of five classes in total, each taught by a university professors.

Most of them have PhD qualifications.


Most of them professors have PhD qualifications and are very good at teaching.

They are all good at teaching, and students concentrate on listening.


They are all good at teaching, and studentsis means that the students have been fully concentrate oning and listening throughout the classes.

Theory teaching is finished.


Theory teachWith the theory classes completed, we will move onto the field training this finishedmorning, the final session of training.

We will hold field training this morning, and this is the last lesson of this training.


We will hold field training this morning, and this is the last lesson of this training.

see above

After field training, we will have lunch at the hotel.


After field training, we will have lunch at the hotelead back to the hotel for lunch before saying goodbye and heading home, thus concluding the training.

After lunch I will return to my hometown, and this training is over.


After lunch I will return to my hometown, and this training is over.

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