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The teacher teaching this afternoon's class is named Xiong Dibing, and the title of the class is "farming culture and rural revitalization". Teacher Xiong Dibing is a PhD and a professor and works at Huaibei Normal University.

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The teacher teaching this afternoon's class is named Xiong Dibing, and the title of the class is "fFarming cCulture and rRural rRevitalization".

Significant words in titles are most commonly capitalised - "and" is not a significant word, so it is not capitalised.

Teacher Xiong Dibing ihas a PhD and is a professor and worksing at Huaibei Normal University.

A PhD is a qualification and therefore the teacher HAS a PhD.
A professor is an occupation and therefore the teacher IS a professor.
"is a professor working at Huaibei Normal University" flows better - too many "and's" doesn't sound nice

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I hope this is helpful! I was able to easily understand it, however just some issues with flow and how its sounds - the difference between a native and non-native speaker! This will come with practice

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Jack

Nov. 25, 2020

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Thank you very much. The corrections are really helpful.

Journal 11/26/20

The teacher teaching this afternoon's class is named Xiong Dibing, and the title of the class is "fFarming cCulture and rRural rRevitalization".

In English, the nouns, verbs, adjetives, adverbs, pronouns, etc., are all capitalized in titles.

Teacher Xiong Dibing ihas a PhD and is a professor andwho works at Huaibei Normal University.

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Great Job! Just a few corrections!

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Jack

Nov. 25, 2020

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Thank you very much.

Journal 11/26/20


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The teacher teaching this afternoon's class is named Xiong Dibing, and the title of the class is "farming culture and rural revitalization".


The teacher teaching this afternoon's class is named Xiong Dibing, and the title of the class is "fFarming cCulture and rRural rRevitalization".

In English, the nouns, verbs, adjetives, adverbs, pronouns, etc., are all capitalized in titles.

The teacher teaching this afternoon's class is named Xiong Dibing, and the title of the class is "fFarming cCulture and rRural rRevitalization".

Significant words in titles are most commonly capitalised - "and" is not a significant word, so it is not capitalised.

Teacher Xiong Dibing is a PhD and a professor and works at Huaibei Normal University.


Teacher Xiong Dibing ihas a PhD and is a professor andwho works at Huaibei Normal University.

Teacher Xiong Dibing ihas a PhD and is a professor and worksing at Huaibei Normal University.

A PhD is a qualification and therefore the teacher HAS a PhD. A professor is an occupation and therefore the teacher IS a professor. "is a professor working at Huaibei Normal University" flows better - too many "and's" doesn't sound nice

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