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Jack

Nov. 26, 2020

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Journal 11/26/20

I can’t remember how long it has been since the last time I took a bus. This afternoon when I went out at a high speed train station, I decided to take the bus home. Because we didn’t use cash for many years, l had to use my phone to pay. But I don’t know how to use the phone to pay. A lady standing by me helped me to make it. I know how to use Wechat and Alipay to pay for usually pay, but paying for the bus tickets is not the usual way, and it needs a series of operations. Anyway, the helpful lady helped me to make it. There were not many passengers on the bus, and the bus went slowly, so I could take sight of the streets. All in all, it is not a bad journey. I enjoy it pretty much.

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Journal 11/26/20

I can’t remember how long it has been since the last time I took a bus.

This afternoon when I went out ato a high -speed train station, I decided to take the bus home.

High-speed is meant to be connected by a hyphen, when used as an adjective.

Because we dihadn't used cash for many years, l had to use my phone to pay.

But I don’idn't know how to use the phone to pay.

using I don't after the last sentence, makes it confusing as to whether or not you're speaking about then or now.

A lady standing by me helped me to make itpay.

I know how to use Wechat and Alipay to pay for usually paythings, but paying for the bus tickets is not the usual way, andsomething I'm familiar with, because it needs a series of operations.

When saying usually pay I guess you're meaning things in general.
You don't want to say "the bus tickets" because you're talking about bus tickets in general

Anyway, the helpful lady helped me to make ithe payment.

instead of "it" you should classify what you're talking about. And "make it" can also mean "reaching something in time"

There were not many passengers on the bus, and the bus wentdrove slowly, so I could take sight of thewatch streets.

All in all, it iwas not a bad journey.

Past tense

I enjoyed it pretty muchquite a lot.

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Jack

Nov. 26, 2020

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Thank you very much.

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circular

Nov. 27, 2020

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Of course :)

Journal 11/26/20


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I can’t remember how long it has been since the last time I took a bus.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This afternoon when I went out at a high speed train station, I decided to take the bus home.


This afternoon when I went out ato a high -speed train station, I decided to take the bus home.

High-speed is meant to be connected by a hyphen, when used as an adjective.

Because we didn’t use cash for many years, l had to use my phone to pay.


Because we dihadn't used cash for many years, l had to use my phone to pay.

But I don’t know how to use the phone to pay.


But I don’idn't know how to use the phone to pay.

using I don't after the last sentence, makes it confusing as to whether or not you're speaking about then or now.

A lady standing by me helped me to make it.


A lady standing by me helped me to make itpay.

I know how to use Wechat and Alipay to pay for usually pay, but paying for the bus tickets is not the usual way, and it needs a series of operations.


I know how to use Wechat and Alipay to pay for usually paythings, but paying for the bus tickets is not the usual way, andsomething I'm familiar with, because it needs a series of operations.

When saying usually pay I guess you're meaning things in general. You don't want to say "the bus tickets" because you're talking about bus tickets in general

Anyway, the helpful lady helped me to make it.


Anyway, the helpful lady helped me to make ithe payment.

instead of "it" you should classify what you're talking about. And "make it" can also mean "reaching something in time"

There were not many passengers on the bus, and the bus went slowly, so I could take sight of the streets.


There were not many passengers on the bus, and the bus wentdrove slowly, so I could take sight of thewatch streets.

All in all, it is not a bad journey.


All in all, it iwas not a bad journey.

Past tense

I enjoy it pretty much.


I enjoyed it pretty muchquite a lot.

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