Nov. 24, 2020
Journal 11/25/20
I woke up a little past 4 this morning again. There was nothing I could do at the time. I usually open some language apps and spend time on them. This morning, I checked all of my posted journals, and saw if anyone corrected them. If a journal is corrected by someone, I would carefully appreciate the changes. Most of the time, I will copy it again, because I think copying the correct passages is very beneficial for my writing. In the end, I said thanks sincerely to the person who corrected me. In recent days, as long as I had time, I would write, because it would not bother others. In fact, I also want to practice my listening, but it would bother other people, because I am not staying alone. So, almost all the time, I could write in any case.
I woke up a little past 4gain this morning againt a little past 4.
There was nothing I could do at the time.that early in the morning.
I usually open some language apps and spend time on them.learning.
This morning, I checked all of my posted journals, and saw to see if anyone had corrected them.
If a journal ishas been corrected by someone, I would carefully appreciatereview the changes.
Most of the time, I will copy it again, because I think copyrewriting the corrected passages is very beneficial for my writing.
In the end, I said thanks want to sincerely tohank the person who corrected mey journal.
In recent days, as long as I had time, I would write, because it wouldmy spare time these days, I would write, because writing is silent and will not bother others.
Can you please explain what you mean by "not bothering others". Do you live roommates? I made some assumptions in my correction.
In fact, I also want to practice my listening skills, but it wthe soulnd bother other people, because I am not staying alonof the speaker may bother other people.
It would be better if you can be specific who these people are? your co-workers? roommates? neighbors?
So, almost all the time, I could write in any case.Well, at least I can practice my writing.
Journal 11/25/20
I woke up a little past 4 this morning again.
There was nothing I could do at the time.
I usually open some language apps and spend time on them.
This morning, I checked all of my posted journals, and sawthe journals I'd posted to see if anyone had corrected them.
Iif a journal ishad been corrected by someone, I would carefully appreciate the changego through the edits.
What did you mean by appreciate here?
Most of the time, I willould copy ithe corrected passages again, because I think copying the correct passages isbelieve that to be very beneficial for my writing.
In the end, I said thanks sincerely tohank the person who corrected me.
In recent days, as long as I had time, I would write,These days, in my free time, I write a lot because it would nodoesn't bother others.
In factActually, I also want to practice my listening, but it would bother other people,s because I am not staying alone.
So, almost all the time, I could write in any casways, I just write.
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Nice work!
Nov. 24, 2020
Most of the time, I willould copy ithe corrected passages again, because I think copying the correct passages isbelieve that to be very beneficial for my writing.
Because I believe that to be very beneficial for my writing. I feel like this sentence is a bit off. Things maybe happened on “That to be”. If it is “that it will be” ?, but I am not sure.
Nov. 24, 2020
Thank you for your corrections.
Nov. 24, 2020
Because I believe that to be very beneficial for my writing. I feel like this sentence is a bit off. Things maybe happened on “That to be”. If it is “that it will be” ?, but I am not sure.
"I believe that to be beneficial" has a similar meaning to "I believe that it is beneficial", it's just a better-flowing way to write it here (in my opinion). I understand it can look a bit weird at first, but it's a pretty common phrase.
Nov. 25, 2020
That is be. I got it. Thank you very much.
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I woke up a little past 4 this morning again. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I woke up a |
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There was nothing I could do at the time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! There was nothing I could do |
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I usually open some language apps and spend time on them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I usually open some language apps and spend time |
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This morning, I checked all of my posted journals, and saw if anyone corrected them. This morning, I checked all of This morning, I checked all |
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If a journal is corrected by someone, I would carefully appreciate the changes.
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Most of the time, I will copy it again, because I think copying the correct passages is very beneficial for my writing. Most of the time, I w Most of the time, I will copy it again, because I think |
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In the end, I said thanks sincerely to the person who corrected me. In the end, I I |
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In recent days, as long as I had time, I would write, because it would not bother others.
In Can you please explain what you mean by "not bothering others". Do you live roommates? I made some assumptions in my correction. |
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In fact, I also want to practice my listening, but it would bother other people, because I am not staying alone.
It would be better if you can be specific who these people are? your co-workers? roommates? neighbors? |
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So, almost all the time, I could write in any case. So, almost al
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