Nov. 25, 2020
The hotel I checked in was Anhui Jinling Grand Hotel in Hefei city. The average price of a single room is around 500 CN yuan. The food they supply is plentiful. There are cold dishes, baked foods, fruits, stir fry dishes, pickles, hot pot, desserts, pastas, soup and so on. Although they offer many kinds of food, I only eat some that I prefer, because my appetite is limited. It’s a pity to see those plentiful foods, but you can’t eat them all.
Journal 11/25/20
The hotel I checked into was named "Anhui Jinling Grand Hotel" in Hefei city.
The average price of a single room is around 500 CN yuan.
The food they supply is plentifuly have plenty of food.
There are things like cold dishes, baked fgoods, fruits, stir fry dishies, pickles, hot pots, desserts, pastas, soups, and so on.
Although they offer many kinds of food, I only eat somthose that I preferwant, because my appetitediet is limited.
It’s a pity to see those plentiful foods, buall that food that you can’'t eat them all.
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Great Job! Just a few corrections!
The hotel I checked into was the Anhui Jinling Grand Hotel in Hefei city.
The average price of a single room is around 500 CN yuan.
The food they supply is plentiful.y offer a lot of food
This one sound more natural. Plentiful is sort of an outdated term, also the supply is used more in businesses and the military than in normal conversation
There are's cold dishes like , baked foods, fruits, stir fry dishes, pickles, hot pot, desserts, pastas, soup and so on.
Although they offer manyall kinds of food, I only eat somethe ones that I preferlike, because my appetite is limited.
It's more common for 'all' to be used in this situation
It’s a pity to see those plentifulshame to miss out on all that foods, but you can’t eat them all.
Shame, in this context, is better. You said it's a shame to see all that food, but you have to establish why that is, in the original that would mean you don't like seeing so much food
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Overall very good! Your grammar is great. Just focus on using more casual sounding verbs for casual conversations like this
Journal 11/25/20
The hotel I checked in wasat the Anhui Jinling Grand Hotel in Hefei city.
The average price of a single room is around 500 CN yuan.
The food they supply is plentiful.y have a lot of food to offer.
There are cold dishes, baked fgoods, fruits, stir fry dishes, pickles, hot pot, desserts, pastas, soup and so on.
Although they offer many kinds of food, I only eat some ta little of what I prefer, because my appetitediet is limited.
With "My appetite is limited" do you mean you aren't hungry?
Then you would say, I don't have much appetite.
My diet is limited, means there are some kinds of food that you can't eat because you are allergic to them or dislike them.
It’s a pity to see those plentifulso much foods, but you can’t eat ithem all.
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I heard there is a fish lantern parade in Anhui at the moment. Did you go? I hope you had a great trip!
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The hotel I checked in was Anhui Jinling Grand Hotel in Hefei city.
The hotel I checked into was the Anhui Jinling Grand Hotel in Hefei city. The hotel I checked into was named "Anhui Jinling Grand Hotel" in Hefei city. |
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The average price of a single room is around 500 CN yuan. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The food they supply is plentiful. The The This one sound more natural. Plentiful is sort of an outdated term, also the supply is used more in businesses and the military than in normal conversation The |
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There are cold dishes, baked foods, fruits, stir fry dishes, pickles, hot pot, desserts, pastas, soup and so on. There are cold dishes, baked There There are things like cold dishes, baked |
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Although they offer many kinds of food, I only eat some that I prefer, because my appetite is limited. Although they offer many kinds of food, I only eat With "My appetite is limited" do you mean you aren't hungry? Then you would say, I don't have much appetite. My diet is limited, means there are some kinds of food that you can't eat because you are allergic to them or dislike them. Although they offer It's more common for 'all' to be used in this situation Although they offer many kinds of food, I only eat |
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It’s a pity to see those plentiful foods, but you can’t eat them all. It’s a pity to see It’s a Shame, in this context, is better. You said it's a shame to see all that food, but you have to establish why that is, in the original that would mean you don't like seeing so much food It’s a pity to see |
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