Nov. 23, 2020
Journal 11/23/20
I am on a high speed train that is from Zhengzhou to Fuzhou now. I got on the train at Fuyang station, and will get off at Hefei station. The high speed railway that I take is called Shanghang high speed railway. The railway starts from Shangqiu, and ends in Hangzhou. This is the first time I have taken this line, so I am kind of excited. Yingshang County is a stop on this line, and it is 55 kilometers away from Fuyang. Usually we drive to Yingshang for more than one hour, but by the high speed train today, it only takes 12 minutes. The development of society and technology is too fast. I wonder what will happen in a few decades.
Journal 11/23/20
I am on a high speed train that is from Zhengzhou to Fuzhou now.
"That is" can be omitted here.
I got on the train at Fuyang station, and will get off at Hefei station.
The high speed railway that I take is called Shanghang high speed railway.
The railway starts from Shangqiu, and ends in Hangzhou.
This is the first time I have taken this line, so I am kind of excited.
Yingshang County is a stop on this line, and it is 55 kilometers away from Fuyang.
Usually we drive to Yingshang for more than one hourif takes more than one hour to drive to Yingshang, but by the high speed train today, it only takes 12 minutes.
The development of society and technology is too fast.
I wonder what will happen in a few decades.
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I wish Germany had high speed rail! I hope you're journey was fun.
Nov. 23, 2020
Thank you for your corrections and best wishes. Germany is a developed country. Germany can build high-speed railway quickly.
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I am on a high speed train that is from Zhengzhou to Fuzhou now. I am on a high speed train "That is" can be omitted here. |
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I got on the train at Fuyang station, and will get off at Hefei station. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The high speed railway that I take is called Shanghang high speed railway. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This is the first time I have taken this line, so I am kind of excited. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Yingshang County is a stop on this line, and it is 55 kilometers away from Fuyang. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Usually we drive to Yingshang for more than one hour, but by the high speed train today, it only takes 12 minutes. Usually |
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The development of society and technology is too fast. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I wonder what will happen in a few decades. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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