Nov. 2, 2020
Journal 11/2/20
Generally, I don't buy clothes until they are damaged. A couple of days ago, we were going to have an official business trip. A colleague was very unsatisfied with my clothes and said if I don't wear new clothing they will not go with me. Although my clothes are not in fashion, they are not worn out, so I am usually not willing to buy a new one. But in this kind of situation, it would be better to wear new clothes. Overall, this is an official business trip. This time, I bought a pair of leather shoes, trousers and a shirt with liner inside. At ordinary times, I only wear canvas shoes, jeans and a sweater. That is not very suitable on formal occasions. Because I have new clothes now so that those old clothes do not have many opportunities to wear, but they are not worn out yet, I can’t bear to throw them away.
Journal 11/2/20
Generally, I don't buy clothes until they areget damaged.
A couple of days ago, we were going to have an official business trip.
A colleague was very unsatisfied with my clothes and said if I doidn't wear new clothing, they willould not go with me.
Although my clothes are not in fashion, they are not worn out, so I am usually not willing to buy a new ones.
But in this kind of situation, it would be better to wear new clothes.
OvAfter all, this is an official business trip.
This time, I bought a pair of leather shoes, trousers and a shirt with liner inside.
At oOrdinary timesily, I only wear canvas shoes, jeans and a sweater.
That is not very suitable onfor formal occasions.
Because I have new clothes now so that, I don't wear those old clothes do not have many opportunities to wearvery often, but as they are not worn out yet, I can’t bear to throw them away.
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This is really good, nice job! I, too, have trouble throwing out clothes, even if I never wear them anymore.
Nov. 2, 2020
Thank you for your corrections, thank you very much. We should save, not waste.
Journal 11/2/20
Generally, I don't buy clothes until they are damaged.
A couple of days ago, we were going to have an official business trip.
A colleague was very unsatisfied with my clothes and said if I don't wear new clothing they will not go with me.
Although my clothes are not in fashion, they are not worn out, so I am not usually not willing to buy a new ones.
'Ones' because clothes is plural.
But in this kind of situation, it would be better to wear new clothes.
Overall, this is an official business trip.
This time, I bought a pair of leather shoes, trousers and a shirt with liner inside.
At ordinary timesUsually, I only wear canvas shoes, jeans and a sweater, which is not very suitable on formal occasions.
There's nothing wrong grammatically with 'at ordinary times', but it's not a commonly use expression.
I've combined your next sentence to make it sound more natural.
That is not very suitable on formal occasions.
Because I have new clothes now so that, those old clothes do not have many opportunities to wearbe worn, but they are not worn out yet, and I can’t bear to throw them away.
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Overall, really good job! I don't usually get new clothes until the old ones are completely worn out either :P
Nov. 2, 2020
Thank you for your corrections and I am happy to hear you have the same habits. We should save, not waste.
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A couple of days ago, we were going to have an official business trip. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A colleague was very unsatisfied with my clothes and said if I don't wear new clothing they will not go with me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! A colleague was very unsatisfied with my clothes and said if I d |
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Although my clothes are not in fashion, they are not worn out, so I am usually not willing to buy a new one. Although my clothes are not in fashion, they are not worn out, so I am not usually 'Ones' because clothes is plural. Although my clothes are not in fashion, they are not worn out, so I am usually not willing to buy |
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But in this kind of situation, it would be better to wear new clothes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Overall, this is an official business trip. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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This time, I bought a pair of leather shoes, trousers and a shirt with liner inside. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At ordinary times, I only wear canvas shoes, jeans and a sweater.
There's nothing wrong grammatically with 'at ordinary times', but it's not a commonly use expression. I've combined your next sentence to make it sound more natural.
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That is not very suitable on formal occasions.
That is not very suitable |
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Because I have new clothes now so that those old clothes do not have many opportunities to wear, but they are not worn out yet, I can’t bear to throw them away. Because I have new clothes now Because I have new clothes |
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