Nov. 2, 2020
Journal 11/2/20
I am not a tea person, so I rarely drink tea. Green tea has beautiful colors and it's very attractive when you see it. But every time I drink it I feel nauseated, so I rarely drink it. I once tried Pu 'er Tea. It's hard to say whether it is good or not, but I am a bit refusing their shape because I always think that as a tea it should not be squeezed into a cake. Plus, it's hard to separate. However, I often hear people say that it is very beneficial for our health to drink tea, so I still want to drink some tea more often and I have learned about black tea. It is said that black tea can warm you up and won't cause you stomach nausea. Then I bought it online and the brand is Keemun Black Tea. I just made a cup of it and it had a color the same as Pu'er tea’s. Also, it was very fragrant. I hope the Keemun Black tea will suit me to drink for the long run.
It's hard to say whether it is good or not, but I am a bit refusingunsure of their shape because I always think that as a tea it should not be squeezed into a cake.
“I am a bit refusing of their shape” doesn’t quite flow in English. It would be better to say you are “hesitant”, ”wary” or “unsure” of their shape instead. Or simply that you dislike it 😊
I just made a cup of it and it had a color the same as Pu'er tea’s.
I hope the Keemun Black tea will suitbe better suited for me to drink forin the long run.
What you’ve written makes sense but this is a better way of phrasing it. We also tend to say “in the long run” rather than “for the long run”.
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Very well written, only a few minor changes 😊
Nov. 3, 2020
Thank you very much and you are very helpful.
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Journal 11/2/20 |
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I am not a tea person, so I rarely drink tea. |
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Green tea has beautiful colors and it's very attractive when you see it. |
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But every time I drink it I feel nauseated, so I rarely drink it. |
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I once tried Pu 'er Tea. |
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It's hard to say whether it is good or not, but I am a bit refusing their shape because I always think that as a tea it should not be squeezed into a cake. It's hard to say whether it is good or not, but I am a bit “I am a bit refusing of their shape” doesn’t quite flow in English. It would be better to say you are “hesitant”, ”wary” or “unsure” of their shape instead. Or simply that you dislike it 😊 |
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Plus, it's hard to separate. |
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However, I often hear people say that it is very beneficial for our health to drink tea, so I still want to drink some tea more often and I have learned about black tea. |
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It is said that black tea can warm you up and won't cause you stomach nausea. |
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Then I bought it online and the brand is Keemun Black Tea. |
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I just made a cup of it and it had a color the same as Pu'er tea’s. I just made a cup of it and it had a color the same as Pu'er tea |
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Also, it was very fragrant. |
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I hope the Keemun Black tea will suit me to drink for the long run. I hope the Keemun Black tea will What you’ve written makes sense but this is a better way of phrasing it. We also tend to say “in the long run” rather than “for the long run”. |
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