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Journal 11/21/20

This picture was shot in the front yard of my mother’s home. The plant in the picture in Chinese is called 朝天椒. In English, it may be called pod pepper. We hire a nanny to look after my mom, and in her free time, she likes planting some vegetables in the yard. As far as I can remember, she has planted tomatoes, cucumbers, radishes, green onions, Chinese cabbage and so on. Because they were planted for ourselves eating, not for sale, they have never been fertilized, and also never been sprayed with pesticides. Those vegetables just grow naturally. The majority of the vegetables we eat are all planted in the yard, we never need to worry about food safety, and we are very joyful while we eat the vegetables that are planted by ourselves.

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Journal 11/21/20

This picture was shot in the front yard of my mother’s home.

The plant in the picture in Chinese is calleds called in Chinese 朝天椒.

as written "in Chinese" refers to the picture

In English, it may be called pod pepper.

We hired a nanny to look after my mom, and in her free time, she likes planting some vegetables in the yard.

Have already hired the nanny or are you doing it right now?

As far as I can remember, she has planted tomatoes, cucumbers, radishes, green onions, Chinese cabbage and so on.

Because they were planted for ourselvesus to eating, not for sale, they have never been fertilized, and also never been sprayed with pesticides.

alternative "for our own eating" would be correct if a bit awkward. As written is almost sounds like you are eating yourselves.

Those vegetables just grow naturally.

The majority of the vegetables we eat are all planted in the yard, we never need to worry about food safety, and we are very joyful while we eat the vegetables that are planted by ourselves.

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We hired a nanny to look after my mom, and in her free time, she likes planting some vegetables in the yard.

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This picture was shot in the front yard of my mother’s home.


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The plant in the picture in Chinese is called 朝天椒.


The plant in the picture in Chinese is calleds called in Chinese 朝天椒.

as written "in Chinese" refers to the picture

In English, it may be called pod pepper.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We hire a nanny to look after my mom, and in her free time, she likes planting some vegetables in the yard.


We hired a nanny to look after my mom, and in her free time, she likes planting some vegetables in the yard.

Have already hired the nanny or are you doing it right now?

As far as I can remember, she has planted tomatoes, cucumbers, radishes, green onions, Chinese cabbage and so on.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Because they were planted for ourselves eating, not for sale, they have never been fertilized, and also never been sprayed with pesticides.


Because they were planted for ourselvesus to eating, not for sale, they have never been fertilized, and also never been sprayed with pesticides.

alternative "for our own eating" would be correct if a bit awkward. As written is almost sounds like you are eating yourselves.

Those vegetables just grow naturally.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The majority of the vegetables we eat are all planted in the yard, we never need to worry about food safety, and we are very joyful while we eat the vegetables that are planted by ourselves.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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