Nov. 21, 2020
Journal 11/21/20
This weekend I was kind of busy. On Thursday I learned my older brother’s family returned to my village to attend the funeral of my older brother’s mom in law. According to our local tradition, I should attend the funeral and bring some money to show my sympathy as relevant, so I returned to the village on Friday. According to my older brother’s trip plan, I went to my hometown to pick them up to Fuyang to see my mom. After lunch at my mother’s house, I took them to my hometown again. When I returned to Fuyang, it was already dark. Today is Sunday, so far there are no planned things to do, but I need to go to my office once because I have an official business trip to Hefei tomorrow, and some stuff that the trip needed was left in the office.
Journal 11/21/20
This weekend I was kind of busy.
On Thursday I learned my older brother’s family returned to my village to attend the funeral of my older brother’s mom in law.
You could also say "his" mother in law to avoid repetition
According to our local tradition, I should attend the funeral and bring some money to show my sympathy as relevant, so I returned to the village on Friday.
According to my older brother’s trip plan, I went to my hometown to pick them up and bring them to Fuyang to see my mom.
After lunch at my mother’s house, I took them to my hometown again.
Or "back to my hometown"
When I returned to Fuyang, it was already dark.
Today is Sunday, s. So far there are no planned things to doI have nothing planned, but I need to go to my office once because I have an official business trip to Hefei tomorrow, and I left some stuff thatin the trip needed was left in the officeoffice that I need for the trip.
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I'm sorry about your brother's mother in law. Good writing
Nov. 22, 2020
Thank you for your corrections and your sympathy. Thank you very much.
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This weekend I was kind of busy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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On Thursday I learned my older brother’s family returned to my village to attend the funeral of my older brother’s mom in law. On Thursday I learned my older brother’s family returned to my village to attend the funeral of my older brother’s mom in law. You could also say "his" mother in law to avoid repetition |
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According to our local tradition, I should attend the funeral and bring some money to show my sympathy as relevant, so I returned to the village on Friday. According to our local tradition, I should attend the funeral and bring some money to show my sympathy |
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According to my older brother’s trip plan, I went to my hometown to pick them up to Fuyang to see my mom. According to my older brother’s trip plan, I went to my hometown to pick them up and bring them to Fuyang to see my mom. |
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After lunch at my mother’s house, I took them to my hometown again. After lunch at my mother’s house, I took them to my hometown again. Or "back to my hometown" |
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When I returned to Fuyang, it was already dark. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today is Sunday, so far there are no planned things to do, but I need to go to my office once because I have an official business trip to Hefei tomorrow, and some stuff that the trip needed was left in the office. Today is Sunday |
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