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Journal 11/20/20

Our last field training trip was very unforgettable. On the 11th of this month, we held the training, and the trip was involved with Hefei, Lujiang and Anji. Our first destination was Anji County. But in the middle of our way to Anji, the receptionist of the other party repeatedly asked us if there were any people from Yingshang County. When she got our definite answer, she required all of us to give the healthy code of Zhejiang to her. Of course, we did this according to her requirements. Our next station is Lujiang County. When we arrived at the hotel, the front table receptionist required that all of us must pass the nucleic acid testing, otherwise, we were not allowed to check in. The whole process took about two hours to finish, and besides, the next day’s trip was reduced to half a day. They want us to leave quickly. All the troubles were caused by a COVID-19 case in Yingshang County, and the county and our district both belong to Fuyang City, so when people learned that we were from Fuyang, they all got nervous. In this way, our originally planned four-day trip ended in a hurry in three days.

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Our last field training trip was very unforgettable.

On the 11th of this month, we held the training, and the trip was involved withThe training was held on the 11th of this past month and took place in Hefei, Lujiang, and Anji.

Our first destination was Anji County.

But ion the middle of our way to Anji, the receptionist of the other party repeatedly asked us if there were any people from Yingshang County.

In the middle of our way makes sense, but on our way is much more natural.

When she got our definite answer, she required all of us to give the Zhejiang healthy code of Zhejiang to her.

Of course, we did this according to her requirements.

Our next station iwas Lujiang County.

When we arrived at the hotel, the front table receptionist required that all of us must pass thea nucleic acid testing, otherwise, we were not allowed to check -in.

The whole process took about two hours to finish, and besides,so the next day’s trip was reduced to half a day.

They wanted us to leave quickly.

All the troubles were caused by a COVID-19 case in Yingshang County, and the county and our district both belong to Fuyang City, so when people learned that we were from Fuyang, they all got nervous.

InFor this wayreason, our originally planned four-day trip ended in a hurry inied three days.

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Journal 11/20/20


Our last field training trip was very unforgettable.


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On the 11th of this month, we held the training, and the trip was involved with Hefei, Lujiang and Anji.


On the 11th of this month, we held the training, and the trip was involved withThe training was held on the 11th of this past month and took place in Hefei, Lujiang, and Anji.

Our first destination was Anji County.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But in the middle of our way to Anji, the receptionist of the other party repeatedly asked us if there were any people from Yingshang County.


But ion the middle of our way to Anji, the receptionist of the other party repeatedly asked us if there were any people from Yingshang County.

In the middle of our way makes sense, but on our way is much more natural.

When she got our definite answer, she required all of us to give the healthy code of Zhejiang to her.


When she got our definite answer, she required all of us to give the Zhejiang healthy code of Zhejiang to her.

Of course, we did this according to her requirements.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Our next station is Lujiang County.


Our next station iwas Lujiang County.

When we arrived at the hotel, the front table receptionist required that all of us must pass the nucleic acid testing, otherwise, we were not allowed to check in.


When we arrived at the hotel, the front table receptionist required that all of us must pass thea nucleic acid testing, otherwise, we were not allowed to check -in.

The whole process took about two hours to finish, and besides, the next day’s trip was reduced to half a day.


The whole process took about two hours to finish, and besides,so the next day’s trip was reduced to half a day.

They want us to leave quickly.


They wanted us to leave quickly.

All the troubles were caused by a COVID-19 case in Yingshang County, and the county and our district both belong to Fuyang City, so when people learned that we were from Fuyang, they all got nervous.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In this way, our originally planned four-day trip ended in a hurry in three days.


InFor this wayreason, our originally planned four-day trip ended in a hurry inied three days.

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