Nov. 18, 2020
It has been raining these days, and it reminded me of those flooding days. One of those flooding days that impressed me the most took place many years ago when I was a child. In my memory, the whole village was covered with flooding, and our crops were all damaged, so we whole villagers became victims of the natural calamity. As disaster relief products, we were given a bag of rice. We never grow rice in our area, so I have never eaten rice before. I remember that my mom usually puts some rice in the hot-water bottle and then I can eat the rice porridge half a day late. I think it is the most delicious rice porridge I have ever eaten. Even now I can remember its taste clearly, but when I tried to do it once again, I found that it didn't taste as good as before.
Journal 11/18/20
One of those flooding days that impressed me the most took place many years ago when I was a child.
In my memory, remember that the whole village was covered withmpletely flooding,ed and our crops were all damaged, so we whole villagers becamein the eyes of the government, we villagers were considered victims of thea natural calamitydisaster.
Or "we were registered as victims of a natural disaster." "Calamity" is a synonym for "disaster," but it doesn't sound quite right (at least not to my ear).
As disaster relief products, we were given a bags of rice.
or "we were each given a bag of rice"
We never groew rice in our area, so I haved never eaten rice before.
I remember that my mom usually puts some rice in the hot-water bottle, and then I canould eat the rice porridge half a day latelater that day.
I know what you mean by "half a day late," but it doesn't sound natural.
I think it iwas the most delicious rice porridge I have ever eaten.
Even now, I can remember its taste clearly, but when I tried to do it once again, I found that it didn't taste as good as before when I tried to make it again.
As a side note - what you wrote is correct, except that you need a comma after "Even now." My version was a purely stylistic suggestion.
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It has been raining these days, and it reminded me of those flooding days. |
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One of those flooding days that impressed me the most took place many years ago when I was a child. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In my memory, the whole village was covered with flooding, and our crops were all damaged, so we whole villagers became victims of the natural calamity. I Or "we were registered as victims of a natural disaster." "Calamity" is a synonym for "disaster," but it doesn't sound quite right (at least not to my ear). |
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As disaster relief products, we were given a bag of rice. As disaster relief products, we were given or "we were each given a bag of rice" |
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We never grow rice in our area, so I have never eaten rice before. We never gr |
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I remember that my mom usually puts some rice in the hot-water bottle and then I can eat the rice porridge half a day late. I remember that my mom usually put I know what you mean by "half a day late," but it doesn't sound natural. |
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I think it is the most delicious rice porridge I have ever eaten. I think it |
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Even now I can remember its taste clearly, but when I tried to do it once again, I found that it didn't taste as good as before. Even now, I can remember its taste clearly, but As a side note - what you wrote is correct, except that you need a comma after "Even now." My version was a purely stylistic suggestion. |
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