Nov. 17, 2020
journal 11/17/20
I am from an intermediate city in Anhui province, China. There are about 2 million people living in the urban area of the city. Also, the city covers around 200 square kilometers. Our city is an agricultural city, and farmers mainly grow wheat, corn, soybean and rice. Our industry is not developed and has only a listed company. But our business is very developed: we have ten commercial complexes downtown because the total population of our city is more than 10,000,000. Before long, our city was rated as a national civilization city and the city environment was very nice, clean and tidy. People here are very happy.
I am from an intermediate medium sized city in Anhui province, China.
There are about 2 million people living in the urban area of the city.
Also,There are about 2 million people living in the urban area of the city which covers around 200 square kilometers.
Your sentence is grammatically correct, however I think that it sounds more natural to put these two sentences together. This is just my opinion, someone else might feel differently :)
Our city is an agricultural city, and farmers mainly grow wheat, corn, soybean and rice.
Our industry is not developed and has only has a listed company.
But our business is very developed: we have ten commercial complexes downtown because the total population of our city is more than 10,000,000ten million.
We usually write larger numbers as words.
Before long, our city was rated as a national civilization city and the city environment was very nice, clean and tidy.
People here are very happy.
Nov. 17, 2020
Thank you for your corrections and you are very helpful.
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journal 11/17/20 |
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I am from an intermediate city in Anhui province, China. I am from a |
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There are about 2 million people living in the urban area of the city. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Also, the city covers around 200 square kilometers.
Your sentence is grammatically correct, however I think that it sounds more natural to put these two sentences together. This is just my opinion, someone else might feel differently :) |
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Our city is an agricultural city, and farmers mainly grow wheat, corn, soybean and rice. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Our industry is not developed and has only a listed company. Our industry is not developed and |
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But our business is very developed: we have ten commercial complexes downtown because the total population of our city is more than 10,000,000. But our business is very developed: we have ten commercial complexes downtown because the total population of our city is more than We usually write larger numbers as words. |
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Before long, our city was rated as a national civilization city and the city environment was very nice, clean and tidy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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People here are very happy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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