Nov. 17, 2020
Journal 11/17/20
Usually, I wake up around 4 to 5 am and get up at 7 am. During this time, I will study English. After I get up, I eat breakfast, and then go to work. After work in the morning, I eat box lunch outside, and then go home and take an afternoon nap. Around 2:30 pm, I will go to work again. I get off work around 5:30pm, and then go home. After dinner, I study English until 12pm or so. In fact, even at work, I still study English as long as I am free. This passage is written during work time. Although I think I have tried hard to learn it, I still think the progress is too slow.
After work in the morning, I eat my box lunch outside, and then go home and take an afternoon nap.
This passage iwas written during work time.
Although I think I have tried hard to learn it, I still think themy progress is too slow.
Usually, I wake up around 4 to 5 am and get up at 7 am.
During this time, I will study English.
After I get up, I eat breakfast, and then go to work.
After work in the morning, I eat a box lunch outside, and then go home and take an afternoon nap.
Around 2:30 pm, I will go to work again.
I get off work around 5:30 pm, and then go home.
After dinner, I study English until 12 pm or so.
This passage iwas written during my work time.
Or:
I wrote this passage at work.
Although I think I have tried hard to learn itEnglish, I still think themy progress is too slow.
"My progress" sounds more natural than "the progress."
Feedback
I think your English is progressing! I notice that you post a lot, which is great. When describing habitual actions, use the present tense ("I study") rather than the future tense ("I will study").
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Journal 11/17/20 |
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Usually, I wake up around 4 to 5 am and get up at 7 am. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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During this time, I will study English. During this time, I |
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After I get up, I eat breakfast, and then go to work. After I get up, I eat breakfast |
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After work in the morning, I eat box lunch outside, and then go home and take an afternoon nap. After work in the morning, I eat a box lunch outside After work in the morning, I eat my box lunch outside, and then go home and take an afternoon nap. |
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Around 2:30 pm, I will go to work again. Around 2:30 pm, I |
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I get off work around 5:30pm, and then go home. I get off work around 5:30 pm |
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After dinner, I study English until 12pm or so. After dinner, I study English until 12 pm or so. |
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In fact, even at work, I still study English as long as I am free. |
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This passage is written during work time. This passage Or: I wrote this passage at work. This passage |
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Although I think I have tried hard to learn it, I still think the progress is too slow. Although I think I have tried hard to learn "My progress" sounds more natural than "the progress." Although I think I have tried hard to learn it, I still think |
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