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Journal 11/16/20

Yesterday a foreigner on HelloTalk sent me a message and said he wanted to set up a language exchange group and invite me to join. I checked his profile and found out that he is living in Hefei now. Hefei is the capital city of my province. When I found out about these, I felt he was very kind, so I joined the WeChat group. Many of the group members are foreigners and they come from all over the world. Some of them are from South Africa, some are from Brazil, and some are from Myanmar. The group owner is from the US and yesterday he walked Shu mountain with a few of the group members in Hefei. I always read the words that the group owner wrote seriously because I want to learn more from him. I find that there is really something different from what I usually learn. For example, I used to write climb mountains, but he just says walk mountains. There are still many more. After all, I think I learned a lot from him.

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Journal 11/16/20

Yesterday, a foreigner on HelloTalk sent me a message and said he wanted to set up a language exchange group and invited me to join.

I checked his profile and found out that he is living in Hefei now.

Hefei is the capital city of my province.

When I found out about these two facts, I felt that he was very kind, so I joined the WeChat group.

You can also say, "When I found out about this, I felt that he was very kind, so I joined the WeChat group".

Many of the group members are foreigners, and they come from all over the world.

Some of them are from South Africa, some are from Brazil, and some are from Myanmar.

The group owner is from the US, and yesterday, he walhiked up Shu mMountain with a few of the group members in Hefei.

You can also say, "The group owner is from the US, and yesterday, he climbed Shu Mountain with a few of the group members in Hefei".

I always read the words that the group owner wrote seriouscarefully because I want to learn more from him.

I find that there is really something different from what I usually learn.

For example, I used to write climb mountains, but he just says walk mountains.

I find it a bit odd that he says "walk mountains" because usually in American English, we say "climb mountains", and I've never heard anyone say "walk mountains".

There are still many more.

Afterll in all, I think I learned a lot from him.

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Jack

Nov. 16, 2020

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Thank you very much

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Jack

Nov. 16, 2020

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For example, I used to write climb mountains, but he just says walk mountains.

This is his original sentence: This wasn’t a formal get together but a few of us decide to walk the Shushan mountain. Thanks for coming out.

Journal 11/16/20


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Yesterday a foreigner on HelloTalk sent me a message and said he wanted to set up a language exchange group and invite me to join.


Yesterday, a foreigner on HelloTalk sent me a message and said he wanted to set up a language exchange group and invited me to join.

I checked his profile and found out that he is living in Hefei now.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Hefei is the capital city of my province.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I found out about these, I felt he was very kind, so I joined the WeChat group.


When I found out about these two facts, I felt that he was very kind, so I joined the WeChat group.

You can also say, "When I found out about this, I felt that he was very kind, so I joined the WeChat group".

Many of the group members are foreigners and they come from all over the world.


Many of the group members are foreigners, and they come from all over the world.

Some of them are from South Africa, some are from Brazil, and some are from Myanmar.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The group owner is from the US and yesterday he walked Shu mountain with a few of the group members in Hefei.


The group owner is from the US, and yesterday, he walhiked up Shu mMountain with a few of the group members in Hefei.

You can also say, "The group owner is from the US, and yesterday, he climbed Shu Mountain with a few of the group members in Hefei".

I always read the words that the group owner wrote seriously because I want to learn more from him.


I always read the words that the group owner wrote seriouscarefully because I want to learn more from him.

I find that there is really something different from what I usually learn.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

For example, I used to write climb mountains, but he just says walk mountains.


For example, I used to write climb mountains, but he just says walk mountains.

I find it a bit odd that he says "walk mountains" because usually in American English, we say "climb mountains", and I've never heard anyone say "walk mountains".

There are still many more.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After all, I think I learned a lot from him.


Afterll in all, I think I learned a lot from him.

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