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Nov. 16, 2020

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Journal 11/16/20

And the main idea of this song is to tell the un-easy and the difficulties of being a person. We all have beautiful wishes, but reality is usually so hard. No matter how you try your best, you can’t do it. We felt deep helplessness from the song.

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And the main idea of this song is to telldescribe the un-easyiness and the difficulties of being a person.

We all have beautiful wishes, but the reality is usually so hard.

NSometimes, no matter how hard you try and give your best, you can’t do it.

We felt deep helplessness from the song.

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I hope you listened to a happier song to brighten your mood :)

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Nov. 16, 2020

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Thank you for your corrections.

Journal 11/16/20


And the main idea of this song is to tell the un-easy and the difficulties of being a person.


And the main idea of this song is to telldescribe the un-easyiness and the difficulties of being a person.

We all have beautiful wishes, but reality is usually so hard.


We all have beautiful wishes, but the reality is usually so hard.

No matter how you try your best, you can’t do it.


NSometimes, no matter how hard you try and give your best, you can’t do it.

We felt deep helplessness from the song.


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