Nov. 14, 2020
Journal 11/14/20
Some problems with leather coats: first of all, the general question is that it’s too short and small. For some middle-aged and elderly people, they prefer to wear wider and longer clothes, which will make them feel more comfortable. Secondly, their flat collar’ two sides will stick to your neck, even if they are famous brands and look beautiful, like Joeone and Septwolvs. You feel really uncomfortable if you are a sensitive person when you wear it. Third, their design seems not fashionable, especially their leather texture is all the same: thick and hard, it brings bad feelings when you touch it. Fourth, those produced in northern areas, like in Beijing, almost have the same style: big flat collar and big buttons. I think it looks ugly and out of fashion. Of course, different people have different opinions on this issue and my opinion is not necessarily correct. After choosing it many times, I finally bought one. Although I think it is overpriced, it has thin and soft leather, and a simple but fashionable design. In short, I just like it.
SI have some problems with leather coats: f. First of ally, the general question is that it’design is too short and small.
I think this is what you meant to say?
For sSome middle-aged and elderly people, they prefer to wear wider and longer clothes, which will make them feel more comfortable.
Secondly, their flat collar’ two sides will stick to your neck, even if they are famous brands and look beautiful, like Joeone and Septwolvs.
You feel really uncomfortable if you are a sensitive person when you wear it.
Third, their design seemis not fashionable, especially t. Their leather texture is all the same: thick and hard, it brings bad feelings. It doesn't feel nice when you touch it.
Fourth, those produced in northern areas, like in Beijing, almost always have the same style: big flat collar and big buttons.
I think it looks ugly and out of fashion.
Of course, different people have different opinions on this issue and my opinion is not necessarily correct.
After choosingthinking about it many times, I finally bought one.
Although I think it is overpriced, it hasis made of thin and soft leather, and has a simple but fashionable design.
In short, I just like it.
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Nov. 17, 2020
Thank you very much.
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Journal 11/14/20 |
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Some problems with leather coats: first of all, the general question is that it’s too short and small.
I think this is what you meant to say? |
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For some middle-aged and elderly people, they prefer to wear wider and longer clothes, which will make them feel more comfortable.
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Secondly, their flat collar’ two sides will stick to your neck, even if they are famous brands and look beautiful, like Joeone and Septwolvs. Secondly, the |
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You feel really uncomfortable if you are a sensitive person when you wear it. You feel really uncomfortable if you are a sensitive person |
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Third, their design seems not fashionable, especially their leather texture is all the same: thick and hard, it brings bad feelings when you touch it. Third, their design |
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Fourth, those produced in northern areas, like in Beijing, almost have the same style: big flat collar and big buttons. Fourth, those produced in northern areas, like in Beijing, almost always have the same style: big flat collar and big buttons. |
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I think it looks ugly and out of fashion. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Of course, different people have different opinions on this issue and my opinion is not necessarily correct. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After choosing it many times, I finally bought one. After |
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Although I think it is overpriced, it has thin and soft leather, and a simple but fashionable design. Although I think it is overpriced, it |
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In short, I just like it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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