Nov. 13, 2020
Journal 11/13/20
Nowadays, the straw of crops has become a big problem and the only way to deal with them is usually burning. This brings a lot of problems, such as polluting the environment, destroying the soil structure, causing fire. So far, there is not a good method yet. In the past, wheat straw could be fed to cattle, sweet potatoes straw and corn straw could be fed to pigs, the cotton straw and soybean straw could be used as firewood. Everything is so harmonious and natural. But now, farmers no longer breed livestock and they no longer cook in old cooking utensils, so the crop straw can’t be used. The development will bring some problems and everything is dialectical, but the crop straw problem is not a big deal because various departments are focusing on it and have made great progress in how to use them.
Nowadays, theexcess straw ofrom crops has become a big problem, and usually the only way to deal with them is usually burning.
"Straw of crops" I can understand, but it does not indicate why the straw is causing a problem. If it is too much, you can say "excess straw from crops"
SoThus far, there is not a good better method yet.
In the past, wheat straw could be fed to cattle, sweet potatoes straw and corn straw could be fed to pigs, the cotton straw and soybean straw could be used as firewood.
Everything iwas so harmonious and natural.
This sentence makes sense, but we don't really use the word "harmonious" to describe this kind of situation.
But now, farmers no longer breed livestock and they no longer cook in old cooking utensilswith firewood, so the crop straw can’t be used.
The dDevelopment will bringhas brought some problems and everything is dialectical (? I do not understand what you mean here), but the crop straw problem is not a big deal because various departments are focusing on it and have made great progress in how to use themcrop straw.
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This writing is really nice! It all makes sense, just some parts do not sound very natural.
Nov. 13, 2020
The dDevelopment will bringhas brought some problems and everything is dialectical (? I do not understand what you mean here), but the crop straw problem is not a big deal because various departments are focusing on it and have made great progress in how to use themcrop straw.
I mean that the development of society also brought some disadvantages. In other words, everything has its advantages and disadvantages, so I write that “everything is dialectical.”
Nov. 13, 2020
Everything iwas so harmonious and natural.
Please tell me which word is suitable here or how to rewrite this sentence.
Nov. 13, 2020
Maybe you can use "sustainable" instead or "harmonious"
Nov. 13, 2020
I mean that the development of society also brought some disadvantages. In other words, everything has its advantages and disadvantages, so I write that “everything is dialectical.”
Ah, I think that it may be appropriate then, I just have not seen that word before as a native speaker
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Nowadays, the straw of crops has become a big problem and the only way to deal with them is usually burning. Nowadays, "Straw of crops" I can understand, but it does not indicate why the straw is causing a problem. If it is too much, you can say "excess straw from crops" |
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This brings a lot of problems, such as polluting the environment, destroying the soil structure, causing fire. |
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So far, there is not a good method yet.
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In the past, wheat straw could be fed to cattle, sweet potatoes straw and corn straw could be fed to pigs, the cotton straw and soybean straw could be used as firewood. In the past, wheat straw could be fed to cattle, sweet potato |
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Everything is so harmonious and natural. Everything This sentence makes sense, but we don't really use the word "harmonious" to describe this kind of situation. |
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But now, farmers no longer breed livestock and they no longer cook in old cooking utensils, so the crop straw can’t be used. But now, farmers no longer breed livestock and they no longer cook |
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The development will bring some problems and everything is dialectical, but the crop straw problem is not a big deal because various departments are focusing on it and have made great progress in how to use them.
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