Nov. 12, 2020
Journal 11/12/20
What is the lack of the countryside? In the past, it was definitely money, but now it is definitely not. It’s the culture, yes, the culture. Fortunately, many developed countryside are already aware of this. They are gathering and showing farming culture; They are advocating modern civilization and modern lifestyle; They are focusing on children’s quality education and cultural education. The countryside is like a poem and is full of cultural atmosphere everywhere. Culture is an amazing thing and, as long as anything is given culture, it will become more and more prosperous. bless the countryside, bless the peasants.
They are gathering and showing farming culture; They are, advocating modern civilization and modern lifestyle; They are, and focusing on children’s quality education and cultural education.
Could also replace ";" with ".".
The countryside is like a poem and is full of cultural atmosphere everywhere.
Culture is an amazing thing and, a. As long as anysomething is given culture, it will become more and more prosperous.
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bBless the countryside, bless the peasantsople who live there/in it.
Addressing people as "peasants" is quite rude unless you are speaking historically. Some other terms include "farmers" and "country folk/people" (USA mostly). I can't think of others
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Good work! I agree with Fabled lamb's other corrections
Nov. 12, 2020
Thank you very much.
Journal 11/12/20
What is the lack ofdoes the countryside lack?
In the past, it was definitely money, but now it is definitely not.
It’s the culture, yes, the culture.
Fortunately, many developed countryside areas are already aware of this.
They are gathering and showing farming culture; T, they are advocating modern civilization and modern lifestyle; Ts, and they are focusing on children’s quality education and cultural education.
The countryside is like a poem and is full of cultural atmosphere everywhere.
Culture is an amazing thing and, as long as anything is given culture, it will become more and more prosperous.
bBless the countryside, bless the peasants.
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Nice work!
Nov. 12, 2020
Thank you very much.
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In the past, it was definitely money, but now it is definitely not. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It’s the culture, yes, the culture. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Fortunately, many developed countryside are already aware of this. Fortunately, many developed countryside areas are already aware of this. |
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They are gathering and showing farming culture; They are advocating modern civilization and modern lifestyle; They are focusing on children’s quality education and cultural education. They are gathering and showing farming culture They are gathering and showing farming culture Could also replace ";" with ".". |
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The countryside is like a poem and is full of cultural atmosphere everywhere. This sentence has been marked as perfect! The countryside is like a poem and is full of cultural atmosphere |
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Culture is an amazing thing and, as long as anything is given culture, it will become more and more prosperous. Culture is an amazing thing and Culture is an amazing thing Alternate correction |
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bless the countryside, bless the peasants.
Addressing people as "peasants" is quite rude unless you are speaking historically. Some other terms include "farmers" and "country folk/people" (USA mostly). I can't think of others |
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