Nov. 11, 2020
Journal 11/12/20
Fuyang is my hometown and it is in Anhui province, China. It has an urban population of 1.6 million and the center district covers 160 square kilometers. Among all prefecture cities in China, it doesn’t have anything special and I think it is only ranked as an ordinary city. The city’s transportation is very developed in my view because it has an airport, a high speed railway station and an ordinary railway station. Besides, it has at least four long distance bus stations. It is very convenient to go to any big city in China. For example, if you take planes to go to Beijing, it’s only an hour trip, and if you take the high speed railway, it only takes three hours. But the only disadvantage is that it hasn't had any international flights yet. Fuyang West High speed railway station opened on the 1st of last October, but I haven’t ever taken it once. After all, Fuyang is my hometown and I have lived here since I was fifteen. It has become bigger and more beautiful now. I love it.
Fuyang is my hometown and it is located in Anhui province, China.
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But tThe only disadvantage is that it hasn'we have is that Fuyang does not hadve any international flights yet.
Fuyang West High speed railway station opened on the 1st of last October, but I haven’t ever taken it once. not taken a train from there yet.
After all, Fuyang is my hometown and I have lived here since I was fifteen.
It has become bigger and more beautiful now.
I love it.
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Fuyang sounds nice and I wish I could go there when the pandemic is over. You are really improving. I think you should rate yourself as an intermediate writer now.
Nov. 12, 2020
Thank you for your corrections and compliments. I wish I could be ranked as an intermediate English learner.
Nov. 12, 2020
If you come to Fuyang, I will treat you.
Nov. 13, 2020
Let's see if we can make that happen. My husband and I will be traveling from Moscow to Vladivostok in 2021 on the Trans Siberian train, and from there, we might go to China for a week. I'm worried that the US will not have the virus under control by then.
Nov. 13, 2020
I hope that it can come true.
Journal 11/12/20
Fuyang is my hometown and it is in Anhui pProvince, China.
It has an urban population of 1.6 million and the centeral district covers 160 square kilometers.
Among all prefecture cities in China, it doesn’t have anything special and I think it is only ranked as an ordinary city.
The city’s transportation is very developed in my viewopinion because it has an airport, a high speed railway station and an ordinary railway station.
Besides, it has at least four long distance bus stations.
It is very convenient to go to any big city in China.
For example, if you take a planes to go to Beijing, it’s only an hour trip, and if you take the high speed railway, it only takes three hours.
But the only disadvantage is that it hasn't had any international flights yet.
This sentence is fine but I think this conveys your meaning better:
But the only disadvantage is that it doesn't offer any international flights yet.
Fuyang West High sSpeed rRailway sStation opened on the 1st of last October, but I haven’t ever taken it once.
Here I am capitalizing the entire proper name of the railway station
After all, Fuyang is my hometown and I have lived here since I was fifteen.
It has become bigger and more beautiful now.
I love it.
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Great work! What a nice town :)
Nov. 11, 2020
Thank you for your corrections, thank you very much.
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Fuyang is my hometown and it is in Anhui province, China. Fuyang is my hometown and it is in Anhui Fuyang is my hometown and it is located in Anhui province, China. |
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The city’s transportation is very developed in my view because it has an airport, a high speed railway station and an ordinary railway station. The city’s transportation is very developed in my
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But the only disadvantage is that it hasn't had any international flights yet. But the only disadvantage is that it hasn't had any international flights yet. This sentence is fine but I think this conveys your meaning better: But the only disadvantage is that it doesn't offer any international flights yet.
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