Nov. 12, 2020
Journal 11/12/20
I’m from the countryside and I lived there before fifteen. At the time, the countryside means poverty, backwardness and ignorance. The fact is this. People from rural areas usually feel embarrassed. Everybody wanted to leave the countryside and go to a city to find a job and this opinion was very popular then. After visiting a few villages in Anji County, I found I was behind The Times. Take the Yucun and Dazhuyuan for example: wide paved roads, beautiful houses in several rows, tidy trees and flowers, like a big garden in the farmland. Farmers’ living conditions are much better than citizens'. The countryside is no longer the countryside in the past; it has developed beyond our imagination.
I’m from the countryside and I lived there before I turned fifteen.
Nov. 12, 2020
Thank you very much!
I’m from the countryside and Ihave lived there beforeuntil I was fifteen.
At theat time, the countryside meanst poverty, backwardness and ignorance.
The fact is this.
People from rural areas usually feel embarrassed.
EverybodThey wanted to leave the countryside and go to a city to find a job and this opinion. This desire was very popular back then.
ABut after visiting a few villages in Anji County, I founrealized I was behind Tthe Ttimes.
Take the Yucun and Dazhuyuan for example: wide paved roadsthey have wide roads that are paved, beautiful houses in severalbuilt in rows, and tidy trees and flowers, just like a big garden in the farmland.
Not exactly sure what you mean by rows, so my correction may be off.
Farmers’ living conditions are much better than citizens'.y dwellers.
The countryside is no longer the countryside inof the past; i. It has developimproved beyond our imagination.
Journal 11/12/20
I’m from the countryside and I lived there before fifteen.since I wad fifteen (years old).
At the time, living in the countryside means poverty, backwardness and ignorance.
The fact is this.
People from rural areas usually feel embarrassed.
After visiting a few villages in Anji County, I found I was behind The Times.that my opinion was not up to date.
Be careful. Phrases in your mother language cannot be directly translated in English.
Those Farmers’ living conditions are much better than citizens'.
The countryside is no longertoday is different from the countryside inof the past; it has developed beyond our imagination.
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Nov. 12, 2020
I’m from the countryside and I lived there before fifteen.since I wad fifteen (years old).
I mean I live in the countryside until I was fifteen years old. 0-15 years old I live in the countryside. I leave the countryside when I was fifteen years old.
Nov. 12, 2020
Thank you for your corrections and suggestions. Thank you very much.
Nov. 12, 2020
I’m from the countryside and I lived there before fifteen.since I wad fifteen (years old).
I lived there until I was fifteen years old.
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I’m from the countryside and I lived there before fifteen. I’m from the countryside and I lived there I’m from the countryside and I’m from the countryside and I lived there before I turned fifteen. |
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At the time, the countryside means poverty, backwardness and ignorance. At the time, living in the countryside means poverty, backwardness and ignorance. At th |
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The fact is this. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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People from rural areas usually feel embarrassed. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Everybody wanted to leave the countryside and go to a city to find a job and this opinion was very popular then.
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After visiting a few villages in Anji County, I found I was behind The Times. After visiting a few villages in Anji County, I found Be careful. Phrases in your mother language cannot be directly translated in English.
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Take the Yucun and Dazhuyuan for example: wide paved roads, beautiful houses in several rows, tidy trees and flowers, like a big garden in the farmland. Take the Yucun and Dazhuyuan for example: Not exactly sure what you mean by rows, so my correction may be off. |
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Farmers’ living conditions are much better than citizens'. Those Farmers’ living conditions are much better than citizens'. Farmers’ living conditions are much better than cit |
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The countryside is no longer the countryside in the past; it has developed beyond our imagination. The countryside The countryside is no longer the countryside |
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