Nov. 1, 2020
Journal 11/1/20
The pictures below are what I used to talk about in my former post. Is it bringing you some special feelings? Quiet, peaceful and warm, like you are in a small mountainous city in the south of the Yangtze River. I took a ten kilometer trip by bicycle this evening, and in the middle of the trip, I got even lost, but in the end, I came back home by the light on the top of the buildings in my community. No need to think about anything, I just gave it a ride on this autumn night freely until I got a bit sweaty. This kind of feeling is sooooo good.
The pictures below are what I used towas talking about in my formerlast post.
Is itDo they bringing you someany special feelings?
Quiet, peaceful, and warm, just like you a're in a small, mountainous city in the south of the Yangtze River.
I took a ten kilometer trip by bicycle trip this evening, and in the middle of the trip, I got even lost, but in the end, I came back home guided by the light on the top of the buildings in my community.
No need to think about anything, I just gave it a riderode freely on this autumn night freely until I got a bit sweaty.
This kind of feeling is sooooo good.
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Great Job! Just a few corrections!
Nov. 2, 2020
Thank you for your corrections, thank you very much.
Journal 11/1/20
The pictures below are what I used to talked about in my former post.
"Used to" + verb means you're talking about something that was done repeatedly in the nonrecent past.
Is it bringingDo they give you someany special feelings?
QPerhaps they make you feel quiet, peaceful and warm, like you are in a small mountainous city in the south of the Yangtze River.
A full sentence would be better after the previous question.
You can say "in the south of China". In that case, you're talking about the southern part of China. But you wouldn't say "in the south of" in connection with a physical landmark that divides areas. You're not really talking about being "in" the river.
I took a ten kilometer trip by bicycle this evening, and in the middle of the trip, I got even lost, but in the end, I came back home by the light on the top of the buildings in my community.
I'm not sure what you were trying to express with "even". If anything, it should have come before "got" ("I even got lost"), but I thought the sentence was better without the word.
What do you mean in the second part of the sentence? Do you mean that you saw the light on the top of familiar buildings, which helped you find your way back? "I came back home by the light..." suggests that it had gotten dark and that somehow you were relying on the light that was on top of the buildings in order to see at all. I think that's less likely.
No need to think about anything,. I just gave it atook a [free-spirited] ride on this autumn night freely until I got a bit sweaty.
This kind of feeling is sooooo good.
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That sounds like a great ride!
Nov. 1, 2020
I took a ten kilometer trip by bicycle this evening, and in the middle of the trip, I got even lost, but in the end, I came back home by the light on the top of the buildings in my community.
I got lost in the trip because it’s night, but I can recognize the light on the top of the buildings in my community, so they guided me to get home.
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The pictures below are what I used to talk about in my former post. The pictures below are what I "Used to" + verb means you're talking about something that was done repeatedly in the nonrecent past. The pictures below are what I |
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Quiet, peaceful and warm, like you are in a small mountainous city in the south of the Yangtze River.
A full sentence would be better after the previous question. You can say "in the south of China". In that case, you're talking about the southern part of China. But you wouldn't say "in the south of" in connection with a physical landmark that divides areas. You're not really talking about being "in" the river. Quiet, peaceful, and warm, just like you |
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I took a ten kilometer trip by bicycle this evening, and in the middle of the trip, I got even lost, but in the end, I came back home by the light on the top of the buildings in my community. I took a ten kilometer trip by bicycle this evening, and in the middle of the trip, I got I'm not sure what you were trying to express with "even". If anything, it should have come before "got" ("I even got lost"), but I thought the sentence was better without the word. What do you mean in the second part of the sentence? Do you mean that you saw the light on the top of familiar buildings, which helped you find your way back? "I came back home by the light..." suggests that it had gotten dark and that somehow you were relying on the light that was on top of the buildings in order to see at all. I think that's less likely. I took a ten kilometer |
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No need to think about anything, I just gave it a ride on this autumn night freely until I got a bit sweaty. No need to think about anything No need to think about anything, I just |
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