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Journal #11: "How I'm learning English".

I want to tell you how I watched animation film "Shrek" 2001. This film showed a lot of time ago. It's so strange to realize. Men from DreamWorks Animations made a lot of work. If you want to watch modern animation films, "Shrek" didn't look like old animation. Humor is relevant today. Maybe story was simple, but in 2001 it was new for indastry: mix story, humor, animation etc. I forgot to tell you, I saw in original with subtitles and voices Mike Mayers, Eddie Merphy, Cameron Diaz etc. I understood maybe 60% or 70% of dialogs. I think it isn't bad for my English level. I saw this movie at movie theater when I was young. For me man (his name is Alexey Kolgan) who voiced Shrek was better than voice of Mike Mayers, because voice of Alexsey Kolgan fit to image of Shrek. You can cheak it if you want. I don't hate Mike Mayers. Voice of donkey was best choose. Eddie Merphy was amazing. Hat's off to Eddie!!!!! What about Cameron Diaz? Well, she was good, beacuse her voice was tipical in this movie. Sorry if I hurt someone. I will must see next chapters "Shrek" in a future.

Thanks for reading mu journals.
P.S.
Oh, I forgot to tell you. Alexsey Kolgan voiced a lot of characters. For example, Vernon Dursley from Harry Potter, Viktor Navorski from The Terminal, Jack Torrance from The Shining etc.

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Journal #11: "How I'm learning English".

I want to tell you how I watched the animationed film "Shrek", from 2001.

This film showed a lot ofcame out a long time ago.

It's so strange to realize.think about that.

MenThe people from DreamWorks Animations madedid a lot of work.

If you want to watchcompare it to modern animationed films, "Shrek" didn'oesn´t look like old animation.

HThe humor is relevant today.

Maybe the story was simple, but in 2001 it was new for the indaustry: a mixed story, with humor, animation etc.

I forgot to tell you, I saw inthe original with subtitles and voices from Mike Mayers, Eddie Meurphy, Cameron Diaz etc.

I understood maybe 60% or 70% of the dialogues.

I think it isn't bad for my English level.

I saw this movie at a movie theater when I was young.

For me, the man (his name is Alexey Kolgan) who voiced Shrek was better than the voice of Mike Mayers, because the voice of Alexsey Kolgan fit to image of ShrekShrek's image.

You can cheack it if you want.

I don't hate Mike Mayers.

VThe voice of the donkey was the best choosice.

Eddie Meurphy was amazing.

Hat's off to Eddie!!!!!

What about Cameron Diaz?

Well, she was good, beacause her voice was tiypical in this movie.

Sorry if I hurt someone's feelings.

I will must see next chapters "Shrek" in ashould watch the next movies in the "Shrek" series in the future.

Thanks for reading muy journals.

P.S.

Oh, I forgot to tell you.

Alexsey Kolgan voiced a lot of characters.

For example, Vernon Dursley from Harry Potter, Viktor Navorski from The Terminal, Jack Torrance from The Shining etc.

I want to tell you how I watched the animation film "Shrek" in 2001.

This film was showedn a lot of time ago.

It's so strange to realize.

Men from DreamWorks Animations madedid a lot of work.

If you want to watch modern animation films, "Shrek" didoesn't look like old animation.

Maybe the story was simple, but in 2001 it was new for indaustry: a mix story, humor, animation etc.

I forgot to tell you, I saw inthe original with subtitles and voices Mike Mayers, Eddie Merphy, Cameron Diaz etc.

I understood maybe 60% or 70% of dialogs.

I think it isn't bad for my English level.

I saw this movie at the movie theatere when I was young.

For me man (his name is Alexey Kolgan) who voiced Shrek was better than the voice of Mike Mayers, because the voice of Alexsey Kolgan fit to image of Shrek.

You can cheack it if you want.

VThe voice of the donkey was the best choosice.

Eddie Meurphy was amazing.

Hat's off to Eddie!!!!!

What about Cameron Diaz?

Well, she was good, beacause her voice was tiypical in this movie.

Sorry, I'm not sure what you meant my tipical, where you trying to say typical?

I will must see the next chapters of "Shrek" in athe future.

Thanks for reading muy journals.

P.S.

Oh, I forgot to tell you.

Alexsey Kolgan voiced a lot of characters.

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Very good work! Just make sure to remember your 'the' before some words! Good job!

Journal #11: "How I'm learning English".


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I want to tell you how I watched animation film "Shrek" 2001.


I want to tell you how I watched the animation film "Shrek" in 2001.

I want to tell you how I watched the animationed film "Shrek", from 2001.

This film showed a lot of time ago.


This film was showedn a lot of time ago.

This film showed a lot ofcame out a long time ago.

It's so strange to realize.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's so strange to realize.think about that.

Men from DreamWorks Animations made a lot of work.


Men from DreamWorks Animations madedid a lot of work.

MenThe people from DreamWorks Animations madedid a lot of work.

If you want to watch modern animation films, "Shrek" didn't look like old animation.


If you want to watch modern animation films, "Shrek" didoesn't look like old animation.

If you want to watchcompare it to modern animationed films, "Shrek" didn'oesn´t look like old animation.

Humor is relevant today.


HThe humor is relevant today.

Maybe story was simple, but in 2001 it was new for indastry: mix story, humor, animation etc.


Maybe the story was simple, but in 2001 it was new for indaustry: a mix story, humor, animation etc.

Maybe the story was simple, but in 2001 it was new for the indaustry: a mixed story, with humor, animation etc.

I forgot to tell you, I saw in original with subtitles and voices Mike Mayers, Eddie Merphy, Cameron Diaz etc.


I forgot to tell you, I saw inthe original with subtitles and voices Mike Mayers, Eddie Merphy, Cameron Diaz etc.

I forgot to tell you, I saw inthe original with subtitles and voices from Mike Mayers, Eddie Meurphy, Cameron Diaz etc.

I understood maybe 60% or 70% of dialogs.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I understood maybe 60% or 70% of the dialogues.

I think it isn't bad for my English level.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I saw this movie at movie theater when I was young.


I saw this movie at the movie theatere when I was young.

I saw this movie at a movie theater when I was young.

For me man (his name is Alexey Kolgan) who voiced Shrek was better than voice of Mike Mayers, because voice of Alexsey Kolgan fit to image of Shrek.


For me man (his name is Alexey Kolgan) who voiced Shrek was better than the voice of Mike Mayers, because the voice of Alexsey Kolgan fit to image of Shrek.

For me, the man (his name is Alexey Kolgan) who voiced Shrek was better than the voice of Mike Mayers, because the voice of Alexsey Kolgan fit to image of ShrekShrek's image.

You can cheak it if you want.


You can cheack it if you want.

You can cheack it if you want.

I don't hate Mike Mayers.


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Voice of donkey was best choose.


VThe voice of the donkey was the best choosice.

VThe voice of the donkey was the best choosice.

Eddie Merphy was amazing.


Eddie Meurphy was amazing.

Eddie Meurphy was amazing.

Hat's off to Eddie!!!!!


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What about Cameron Diaz?


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Well, she was good, beacuse her voice was tipical in this movie.


Well, she was good, beacause her voice was tiypical in this movie.

Sorry, I'm not sure what you meant my tipical, where you trying to say typical?

Well, she was good, beacause her voice was tiypical in this movie.

Sorry if I hurt someone.


Sorry if I hurt someone's feelings.

I will must see next chapters "Shrek" in a future.


I will must see the next chapters of "Shrek" in athe future.

I will must see next chapters "Shrek" in ashould watch the next movies in the "Shrek" series in the future.

Thanks for reading mu journals.


Thanks for reading muy journals.

Thanks for reading muy journals.

P.S.


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Oh, I forgot to tell you.


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Alexsey Kolgan voiced a lot of characters.


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For example, Vernon Dursley from Harry Potter, Viktor Navorski from The Terminal, Jack Torrance from The Shining etc.


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