I fell asleep without taking off my clothes last night, and I woke up at 4 am this morning.

I tryied to fall asleep again, but I cannot makeould not do it.

Make sure your verb tenses are consistent :)

I didn't know what I shouldto do at the time, andso I just wrote some English sentences about what I thoughtwas thinking.

Because I won't be returning to the hotel at noon when I leave the hotelroom again after I leave in the morning, it would be betteras best to check my belongings before I check out. That way, in case some carryons are left because of carelessness, I will be able to notice them.

In fact, 5 hours of sleep is not enough for a person my age, and I feel a little sleepy right now, but I can't fall asleep anymore.

I removed the "In fact" part because it didn't feel quite right. Usually you would use that phrase when you're clarifying facts from a previous statement, but there's no clear connection in this case.

So that is it, and let meI will recheck my paragraph again.

I tryied to fall asleep again, but I cannot make iouldn't.

Since I didn't know what I should do at the time, andto do, I just wrote some English sentences about what Imy thoughts.

Because I won't returnbe coming back to the hotel at noon when I leave the hotelfter I leave in the morning, it would be better to check my belongings before I check out, in case some carryons are left because of carelessnesI forget some carry-ons.

In fact, 5 hours of sleep is not enough for a person my age, and. I feel a little sleepy right now, but I can't fall asleep anymore.

So, that is it, and l's all. Let me recheck my paragraph again.