Oct. 30, 2020
I like eating oranges, especially kinds of no seeds, not sour, and honey sweet tasting ones. I don’t like eating strawberries, because I always think it is not natural growing, and I am not very into its flavor. As for the figs, I didn’t even eat them at all, because I think they had a bad taste. I saw a kind of orange named jelly orange, and I had never heard of it before. The pictures below are about it, and there are also two pictures of strawberries and figs. I hope they can bring you some new fresh feelings.
I like eating oranges, especially kinds of no seeds, not sour, and honey sweet tasting onethe sweet, seedless kinds.
I don’t like eating strawberries, because I always think it is not natural growing, and I am not very into its flavor. when they aren't in season. I also don't like their taste overall.
As for the figs, I didn’t evenon't eat them at all, because I think they had a bad taste bad.
I sawrecently learned about a kind of orange namedcalled a jelly orange, and. I had never heard of it before.
The pictures below are about it, and there are also two pictures ofshow all of these: jelly oranges, strawberries, and figs.
I hope they can bring you some new fresh feelings.Do you like to eat any of these fruits?
Your sentence was grammatically correct, but not anything a native speaker would ever say.
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Journal 10/30/20
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"the kinds with no seeds" could also be described as "the seedless kinds"
I don’t like eating strawberries, because I always think it is not natural growing, and I am not very into its flavorthat they don't grow naturally, and I don't really like their taste.
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I like eating oranges, especially kinds of no seeds, not sour, and honey sweet tasting ones. I like eating oranges, especially the kinds "the kinds with no seeds" could also be described as "the seedless kinds" I like eating oranges, especially |
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I don’t like eating strawberries, because I always think it is not natural growing, and I am not very into its flavor. I don’t like eating strawberries, because I always think I don’t like eating strawberries |
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As for the figs, I didn’t even eat them at all, because I think they had a bad taste. As for the figs, I didn’t even eat them at all, because I As for |
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I saw a kind of orange named jelly orange, and I had never heard of it before. I saw a kind of orange named Since it's a name, it probably would be more clear if it was capitalized, although it may be ambiguous since Jelly Orange is also an item, meaning it's not necessarily a proper name... You could also put it in quotation marks, "jelly orange", and that would also give it a bit of emphasis of being new and strange. I |
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The pictures below are about it, and there are also two pictures of strawberries and figs. The pictures below The pictures below |
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I hope they can bring you some new fresh feelings. I hope they can bring you some new, fresh
Your sentence was grammatically correct, but not anything a native speaker would ever say. |
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