Oct. 28, 2020
Journal 10/29/20
The mountain areas usually have fewer people. I think the reason why this may be because the mountain area has fewer farmland, so it cannot support many people living there. But the mountain area is very quiet and the air is very fresh, so I think people living here can have a longevity. But as a person who is born and growing in the plain areas, if they occasionally visit mountain areas for a short time that is ok, but stay a little longer, they may feel bored. Overall, transportation in the mountain area is not developed and the mountains will block your vision. You can't see faraway. These are my points about the mountain areas, but I don't know if they are right.
The mountain areas usually have fewer people.
Although your sentence's not grammatically wrong, it sounds kinda odd. I'd say something like: "The areas are usuallz inhabited by fewer people" or "Fewer people tend to live in the mountain areas."
I think the reason why this may be is because the mountain area has fewerless farmland, so it cannot support too many people living there.
But the mountain area is very quiet and the air is very fresh, so I think people living there can have a longevityare more likely to live long lives.
But as a person who iwas born and growingew up in the plain areas, if theyyou occasionally visit the mountain areas for a short time that isyou'd be ok, but if you stayed a little longer, they may you may soon feel bored.
by plain do you mean the city or something like a prairie?
Overall, transportation in the mountain area is not very developed and the mountains will block your vision.
You can't see far away.
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I've always lived in big cities and although the rural life seems very relaxing and I could get used to it without feeling too bored, I would always yearn for the big city buzz.
Oct. 28, 2020
The mountain areas usually have fewer people.
The mountain areas usually inhabited by fewer people.
Oct. 28, 2020
I think the reason why this may be is because the mountain area has fewerless farmland, so it cannot support too many people living there.
Has less farmland.
Support too many people.
Oct. 28, 2020
But the mountain area is very quiet and the air is very fresh, so I think people living there can have a longevityare more likely to live long lives.
People living there are more likely to live long lives.
Oct. 28, 2020
But as a person who iwas born and growingew up in the plain areas, if theyyou occasionally visit the mountain areas for a short time that isyou'd be ok, but if you stayed a little longer, they may you may soon feel bored.
Plain area means 平原地区。but I don’t know exactly if it is a right translation.
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The mountain areas usually have fewer people. The mountain areas usually have fewer people. Although your sentence's not grammatically wrong, it sounds kinda odd. I'd say something like: "The areas are usuallz inhabited by fewer people" or "Fewer people tend to live in the mountain areas." |
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I think the reason why this may be because the mountain area has fewer farmland, so it cannot support many people living there. I think the reason why this may be is because the mountain area has |
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But the mountain area is very quiet and the air is very fresh, so I think people living here can have a longevity. But the mountain area is very quiet and the air is very fresh, so I think people living there |
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But as a person who is born and growing in the plain areas, if they occasionally visit mountain areas for a short time that is ok, but stay a little longer, they may feel bored. But as a person who by plain do you mean the city or something like a prairie? |
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Overall, transportation in the mountain area is not developed and the mountains will block your vision. Overall, transportation in the mountain area is not very developed and the mountains will block your vision. |
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You can't see faraway. You can't see far away. |
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These are my points about the mountain areas, but I don't know if they are right. |
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