Oct. 29, 2020
Journal 10/29/20
Dawan, a beautiful mountain village in Huashi township, Jinzhai county. On April 24, 2016, Xi Jinping, General Secretary of the CPC Central Committee, President of the People's Republic of China, Chairman of the Central Military Commission, visited it and held a forum at the home of Chen Zeshen, a poor household. Chen Zeshen's house is located at the entrance of the Dawan Group in Dawan Village. The house is composed of earthen tiles and brick tiles with an area of 160 square meters. There is a distributed photovoltaic power station in front of the house. In 2016, the villagers enjoyed the relocation.
Dawan, is a beautiful mountain village in Huashi tTownship, Jinzhai cCounty.
On April 24, 2016, Xi Jinping, General Secretary of the CPC Central Committee, President of the People's Republic of China, and Chairman of the Central Military Commission, visited ithis town and held a forum at the home of Chen Zeshen, a poor household.
The house is composedmade of earthen tiles and brick tiles withand has an area of 160 square meters.
There is a distributed photovoltaic power station in front of the house.
In 2016, the villagers enjoyed the relocation.
Not exactly sure what you're trying to say here.
Journal 10/29/20
Dawan, is a beautiful mountain village in Huashi township, Jinzhai county.
On April 24, 2016, Xi Jinping, General Secretary of the CPC Central Committee, President of the People's Republic of China, Chairman of the Central Military Commission, visited it and held a forum at the home of Chen Zeshen, a poor household.
Forum is a strange word choice here.
I would suggest a rephrasing to:
On April 24, 2016, Xi Jinping, General Secretary of the CPC Central Committee, President of the People's Republic of China, Chairman of the Central Military Commission, visited it met the townsfolk at the home of Chen Zeshen, a poor household.
Chen Zeshen's house is located at the entrance of the Dawan Group in Dawan Village.
The house is composed ofmade from earthen tiles and brick tiles with an area of 160 square meters.
composed is fine, this is just more natural to me
There is a distributed photovoltaicsolar power station in front of the house.
Photovoltaic is a pretty technical term. Everyone would just say solar power.
In 2016, the villagers enjoyed the relocationmeeting.
relocation is not the word you are looking for, but I am not certain what you mean.
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The house is composed of earthen tiles and brick tiles with an area of 160 square meters. The house is composed is fine, this is just more natural to me The house is |
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Dawan, a beautiful mountain village in Huashi township, Jinzhai county. Dawan Dawan |
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On April 24, 2016, Xi Jinping, General Secretary of the CPC Central Committee, President of the People's Republic of China, Chairman of the Central Military Commission, visited it and held a forum at the home of Chen Zeshen, a poor household. On April 24, 2016, Xi Jinping, General Secretary of the CPC Central Committee, President of the People's Republic of China, Chairman of the Central Military Commission, visited it and held a forum at the home of Chen Zeshen, a poor household. Forum is a strange word choice here. I would suggest a rephrasing to: On April 24, 2016, Xi Jinping, General Secretary of the CPC Central Committee, President of the People's Republic of China, Chairman of the Central Military Commission, visited it met the townsfolk at the home of Chen Zeshen, a poor household. On April 24, 2016, Xi Jinping, General Secretary of the CPC Central Committee, President of the People's Republic of China, and Chairman of the Central Military Commission, visited |
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Chen Zeshen's house is located at the entrance of the Dawan Group in Dawan Village. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There is a distributed photovoltaic power station in front of the house. There is a distributed Photovoltaic is a pretty technical term. Everyone would just say solar power. There is a |
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In 2016, the villagers enjoyed the relocation. In 2016, the villagers enjoyed the relocation is not the word you are looking for, but I am not certain what you mean. In 2016, the villagers enjoyed the relocation. Not exactly sure what you're trying to say here. |
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