Oct. 27, 2020
Journal 10/27/20
Tomorrow, we will go to Jinzhai county to take field training. The people in this class are all rich leaders in our district. There are around 140 people in this class and we will separate them into three buses to go to Jinzhai. This field training will last four days and we will visit the tea base, tofu base, grape base and the new rural construction. According to the work organization, I will lead the team this time, so I feel a little pressured. I hope this training will be a complete success.
明天我们要去金寨县进行实训，这个班的学生都是我们区的致富带头人。这个班大约有140人，我们将分乘三辆车去金寨。这次实训将进行四天，我们会参观茶叶基地、豆腐基地、葡萄基地和新农村建设。按照工作安排，我是这次培训的带队，所以有点压力。我希望这次培训能圆满成功。
According to the work organization, I will lead the team this time, so I feel a little pressured.
Pressure would mean stressed and pressured means more forced to do something.
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Great work and have fun on the trip!
Oct. 27, 2020
Thank you very much.
Tomorrow, we will go to Jinzhai cCounty to take a field training.
The people in this class are all rich leaders in our district.
There are around 140 people in this class and we will separate them into three buses to go to Jinzhai.
This field training will last four days and we will visit the tea base, tofu base, grape base and the new rural construction.
I don't know what you mean by tea base, tofu base and grape base. What is a base in this context? I feel like there must be a better word. Could it be tea station, tofu station?
According to the work organizational structure, I will be leading the team this time, so I feel a little pressured.
I hope this training will be a complete success.
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Good luck.
Oct. 27, 2020
This field training will last four days and we will visit the tea base, tofu base, grape base and the new rural construction.
茶叶基地（茶叶种植生产集中区）
Oct. 27, 2020
Sorry, my Chinese is really bad. Let me see if I can use a translator.
Oct. 27, 2020
Maybe tea plantation and production center, or tofu production center, etc. For the grapes, is this where they grow the vines or where they produce wine?
Oct. 27, 2020
They grow grapes and also produce wine.
Oct. 27, 2020
Nice. maybe call it a vineyard?
Oct. 27, 2020
Nice. maybe call it a vineyard?
Ok, thank you very much.
Journal 10/27/20
Tomorrow, we will go to Jinzhai county to takefor field training.
The people who will be in this class are all rich leaders in our district.
There are around 140 people in thise class and we will separate them into three buses to go to Jinzhai.
This field training will last four days and we will visit the tea base, tofu base, grape base and the new rural construction.
According to the work organization, I will lead the team this time, so I feel a little pressured.
I hope this training will be a complete success.
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Nice work!
Oct. 27, 2020
Thank you for your corrections. Thank you very much.
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