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Oct. 26, 2020

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Journal 10/26/20

Tonight, I had a lesson with a Philippine teacher. This teacher is so young and he doesn't seem to approach his thirties. I think he is a very skilled teacher; he was good at guiding me to speak. When I learnt with him, I had a desire to speak. But when I speak, I often forget the tense and singular or plural. And I was too eager to speak well. I assume l must have made many mistakes, but fortunately he would give me some corrections in text. Speaking is very different from writing: when you write, you have time to think to correct and no need in a hurry. For example, you can take five minutes to write a sentence, and you don't need to feel stressed. When you speak, you are probably eager to speak out because you know that there is a person who is waiting for you. So you will be in a hurry. I think if in the current situation, it will continue to take one to two years for me to speak English fluently. But I still want to put the writing in top place nowadays because I assume that if I can write quickly and correctly, then I can speak quickly and fluently.

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Tonight, I had an English lesson with a PhFilippineo teacher.

You can say someone is from the Philippines, but to describe their nationality, you would use Filipino. I don't know why this is the case, but it just is.

This teacher is so young andthat he doesn't seem to approach hiseven look thirtiesy.

I think he is a very skilled teacher; as he was good at guiding me to speak.

When I'm learnting with him, I had ave the desire to speak.

But when IWhile I'm speaking, I often forget the verb tense and singular or plural nouns.

And I was too eager to speak well.

I'm assumeing that l must have made many mistakes, but fortunately he would give me some corrections in text.corrected me in writing.

Speaking is very different from writing: w. When you write, you have time to think to correct and no needand make corrections without being in a hurry.

For example, you can take five minutes to write a sentence, and you don't need to feel stressed.

I do not think this sentence is necessary. You for only give examples when something is not perfectly clear, but in your case, the ability to think in advance without any stress was made very clear.

When you speak with someone, you are probably eager to speak out because you know that there is a person who is waiting for you., which makes you want to speed up the conversation.

So you will be in a hurry.

I think if in the current situation, it will continue toat my level, it could take one to two more years befor me to speak English fluently.e I am fluent in English.

But I still want to put the writing in top place nowadays because I assume thatAs for writing, I want to place a higher priority on it, because I believe if I canould write quickly and correctly, then I canwould be able to speak quickly and fluently also.

Journal 10/26/20

Tonight, I had a lesson with a teacher from the Philippine teachers.

Or "a Filipino teacher."

This teacher is so young and he doesn't seem to approach his thirties. He barely looks 30.

I think he is a very skilled teacher; he was good at guidhelping me to speak.

When I learnted with him, I had a desire to speakwanted to speak English.

But when I speaktart talking, I often forget the tenses and the difference between the singular orand the plural.

And I was too eager to speak well.

I assume l must have made many mistakes, but fortunately, he would give merote down some corrections in textfor me.

For example, you can take five minutes to write a sentence, and you don't need to feel stressed.

When you speak, you are probably eager to speak out because you know that there is a person who is waiting for youmight feel pressured to start talking immediately because you know that someone is waiting for you, so you'll be in a hurry.

So you will be in a hurry.

This sentence is a fragment, so I combined it with the previous sentence.

I think if in the current situation, it will continue to takI keep going at this rate, it will take me one tor two years for me to speak English fluently.

But I still want to put thrioritize writing in top place nowadaysright now, because I assume that if I can write quickly and correctly, then I can speak quickly and fluently.

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Jack

Oct. 26, 2020

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Thank you very much. I have rewritten it according your corrections.

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Aviva

Oct. 26, 2020

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You're welcome :)

Journal 10/26/20


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Tonight, I had a lesson with a Philippine teacher.


Tonight, I had a lesson with a teacher from the Philippine teachers.

Or "a Filipino teacher."

Tonight, I had an English lesson with a PhFilippineo teacher.

You can say someone is from the Philippines, but to describe their nationality, you would use Filipino. I don't know why this is the case, but it just is.

This teacher is so young and he doesn't seem to approach his thirties.


This teacher is so young and he doesn't seem to approach his thirties. He barely looks 30.

This teacher is so young andthat he doesn't seem to approach hiseven look thirtiesy.

I think he is a very skilled teacher; he was good at guiding me to speak.


I think he is a very skilled teacher; he was good at guidhelping me to speak.

I think he is a very skilled teacher; as he was good at guiding me to speak.

When I learnt with him, I had a desire to speak.


When I learnted with him, I had a desire to speakwanted to speak English.

When I'm learnting with him, I had ave the desire to speak.

But when I speak, I often forget the tense and singular or plural.


But when I speaktart talking, I often forget the tenses and the difference between the singular orand the plural.

But when IWhile I'm speaking, I often forget the verb tense and singular or plural nouns.

And I was too eager to speak well.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And I was too eager to speak well.

I assume l must have made many mistakes, but fortunately he would give me some corrections in text.


I assume l must have made many mistakes, but fortunately, he would give merote down some corrections in textfor me.

I'm assumeing that l must have made many mistakes, but fortunately he would give me some corrections in text.corrected me in writing.

Speaking is very different from writing: when you write, you have time to think to correct and no need in a hurry.


Speaking is very different from writing: w. When you write, you have time to think to correct and no needand make corrections without being in a hurry.

For example, you can take five minutes to write a sentence, and you don't need to feel stressed.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

For example, you can take five minutes to write a sentence, and you don't need to feel stressed.

I do not think this sentence is necessary. You for only give examples when something is not perfectly clear, but in your case, the ability to think in advance without any stress was made very clear.

When you speak, you are probably eager to speak out because you know that there is a person who is waiting for you.


When you speak, you are probably eager to speak out because you know that there is a person who is waiting for youmight feel pressured to start talking immediately because you know that someone is waiting for you, so you'll be in a hurry.

When you speak with someone, you are probably eager to speak out because you know that there is a person who is waiting for you., which makes you want to speed up the conversation.

So you will be in a hurry.


So you will be in a hurry.

This sentence is a fragment, so I combined it with the previous sentence.

So you will be in a hurry.

I think if in the current situation, it will continue to take one to two years for me to speak English fluently.


I think if in the current situation, it will continue to takI keep going at this rate, it will take me one tor two years for me to speak English fluently.

I think if in the current situation, it will continue toat my level, it could take one to two more years befor me to speak English fluently.e I am fluent in English.

But I still want to put the writing in top place nowadays because I assume that if I can write quickly and correctly, then I can speak quickly and fluently.


But I still want to put thrioritize writing in top place nowadaysright now, because I assume that if I can write quickly and correctly, then I can speak quickly and fluently.

But I still want to put the writing in top place nowadays because I assume thatAs for writing, I want to place a higher priority on it, because I believe if I canould write quickly and correctly, then I canwould be able to speak quickly and fluently also.

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