Oct. 22, 2020
A colleague thinks that I am always wearing low price clothes and he thinks I should wear more expensive clothes. I do not agree with him. I think it is good as long as the clothes I wear are clean and not broken. I can't agree that a piece of clothes costs a lot of money and I think that a single piece of clothes costs 50-200 CNY will be reasonable. If a single piece of clothing costs more than 200 CNY, I would think it is very expensive. Plus, I buy new clothes until the old ones are broken.
A colleague thinks that I am always wearing low pricecheap clothes and he thinks I should wear more expensive clothes.
I think it is good as long as the clothes I wear are clean and not brokein good condition.
I can't agree that a piece of clothesing should costs a lot of money and I think that a single piece of clothesing costsing 50-200 CNY willould be reasonable.
Plus, I buy new clothes untilwhen the old ones are brokenworn out.
A colleague thinks that I am always wearing low pricecheap clothes and he thinks I should wear more expensive clothes.
"Cheap" sounds more natural than "low price".
I do not agree with him.
I think it is good as long as the clothes I wear are clean and not brokendamaged.
We wouldn't really describe clothes as "broken." Perhaps "damaged," or "torn" (if the clothes had a tear in them).
I cadon't agree that a piece of clothesing should costs a lot of money and. I think that a single piece of clothes costs 50-200 CNY will be reasonable50-200 CNY would be a reasonable price for a single piece of clothing.
Idiomatically, the term is "a piece of clothing." I rearranged the second part—it could also be written as "I think that a single piece of clothing should cost between 50-200 CNY."
If a single piece of clothing costs more than 200 CNY, I would think it is very expensive would not want to pay more than 200 CNY for a single piece of clothing.
The way you wrote it makes sense and isn't technically incorrect, but this re-write sounds more natural.
Plus, I only buy new clothes untilwhen the old ones are brokenworn out.
I added "only" to indicate that you do not buy new clothes if the old ones are still in good condition. Once again, "broken" isn't typically used for clothes.
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A colleague thinks that I am always wearing low price clothes and he thinks I should wear more expensive clothes. A colleague thinks that I am always wearing "Cheap" sounds more natural than "low price". A colleague thinks that I am always wearing |
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I do not agree with him. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I think it is good as long as the clothes I wear are clean and not broken. I think it is good as long as the clothes I wear are clean and not We wouldn't really describe clothes as "broken." Perhaps "damaged," or "torn" (if the clothes had a tear in them). I think it is good as long as the clothes I wear are clean and |
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I can't agree that a piece of clothes costs a lot of money and I think that a single piece of clothes costs 50-200 CNY will be reasonable. I Idiomatically, the term is "a piece of clothing." I rearranged the second part—it could also be written as "I think that a single piece of clothing should cost between 50-200 CNY." I can't agree that a piece of cloth |
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If a single piece of clothing costs more than 200 CNY, I would think it is very expensive. I The way you wrote it makes sense and isn't technically incorrect, but this re-write sounds more natural. |
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Plus, I buy new clothes until the old ones are broken. Plus, I only buy new clothes I added "only" to indicate that you do not buy new clothes if the old ones are still in good condition. Once again, "broken" isn't typically used for clothes. Plus, I buy new clothes |
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