Oct. 20, 2020
Journal 10/20/20
This trip of field training in fruit and vegetable production technology was completely successful. This morning we had our last lesson in He county and had lunch at 11am. We began to return to Fuyang at 12am. Now I am on my way home. It is expected to arrive in Fuyang at 5pm. I hope we have a safe and joyful trip.
This trip of field training in fruit and vegetable production technology was completely successful.
alternatively: "... was a total success"
This morning we had our last lesson in He county and (then) had lunch at 11am.
We began to returndeparted back to Fuyang at 12am.
Now I am on my way home.
It isWe expected to arrive in Fuyang at 5pm.
"it" is ambiguous here. Alternatively, can say "The bus is expected to arrive in Fuyang at 5pm"
I hope we have a safe and joyful trip.
Oct. 20, 2020
Thank you very much.
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Journal 10/20/20 |
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This trip of field training in fruit and vegetable production technology was completely successful. This trip of field training in fruit and vegetable production technology was completely successful. alternatively: "... was a total success" |
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This morning we had our last lesson in He county and had lunch at 11am. This morning we had our last lesson in He county and (then) had lunch at 11am. |
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We began to return to Fuyang at 12am. We |
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Now I am on my way home. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It is expected to arrive in Fuyang at 5pm.
"it" is ambiguous here. Alternatively, can say "The bus is expected to arrive in Fuyang at 5pm" |
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I hope we have a safe and joyful trip. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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