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Jack

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The first time I ate honey melon was in the early eighties. That was my aunt who brought it to us from Urumqi, but I never knew how they grew. There are some pictures of vegetables and fruits below, and I am wondering if you guys could recognize them.

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Journal 10/20/20

The first time I ate honey melon was in the early eighties.

That was mMy aunt who brought it to us from Urumqi, but I never knew how they grewwere grown.

There are some pictures of vegetables and fruitfruits and vegetables below, and I am wondering if you guys could recognize them.

Native speakers tend to say "fruits and vegetables" rather than "vegetables and fruits"

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I can't seem to see the pictures! But honey melon is one of my favourite fruits, even though I am slightly allergic!

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Jack

Oct. 20, 2020

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Thank you for your corrections. I really appreciate it. I like eating honey melon too, but I am not allergic.

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Jack

Oct. 20, 2020

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There are some pictures of vegetables and fruitfruits and vegetables below, and I am wondering if you guys could recognize them.

Why can’t use present continuous here?

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hotaru

Oct. 20, 2020

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In this case, "I am wondering" usually implies that there is some kind of choice you are thinking about but haven't decided on yet.
ex: I am wondering if I should go to the party tonight. (I'm thinking about it now and have not decided)

If it's not clear, please let me know!

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Jack

Oct. 20, 2020

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I got it, thank you very much.

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The first time I ate honey melon was in the early eighties.


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That was my aunt who brought it to us from Urumqi, but I never knew how they grew.


That was mMy aunt who brought it to us from Urumqi, but I never knew how they grewwere grown.

There are some pictures of vegetables and fruits below, and I am wondering if you guys could recognize them.


There are some pictures of vegetables and fruitfruits and vegetables below, and I am wondering if you guys could recognize them.

Native speakers tend to say "fruits and vegetables" rather than "vegetables and fruits"

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