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Jack

Oct. 18, 2020

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Journal 10/19/20

I woke up at 4 o'clock this morning and I only slept for four hours. There is nothing to do for me staying at a hotel alone, so I am thinking about the LangCorrect site and the people on it. Since I started learning English last September, I've been using many websites and apps and using different ones in different periods. No matter whether big or small, they all have given me a lot of help. But LangCorrect is the one that helps me the most and I am really grateful. The design and the features of this site are very reasonable, efficient and thoughtful: it is very convenient to use and you can make progress quickly. People on the site are all serious and self motivated; as long as you are a person who pursues progress, you can improve yourself greatly with the site and the people on it. No matter who I will be, where I will go, I must remember this site and the people on this site forever. Thanks to this site, thanks to the people who have helped me. I love you all.

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I woke up at 4 o'clock this morning and I onlyfter having slept for only four hours.

There is nothing to do for mesince I'm staying at a hotel alone, so I am thinking about the LangCorrect site and the people onusing it.

Since I started learning English last September, I've been usingused many websites and apps and usingt different ones in different periodtimes.

No matter whether they are big or small, they all have given me a lot of help, but ....

I'm not sure what you mean by big or small. Do you mean if the company is big or small, or the content? I have combined your two sentences together.

But..... LangCorrect is the one that helps me the most and I am really grateful.

The design and the features of this site are very reasonablesensible (?), efficient and thoughtful: it is very convenient to use and you can make progress quickly.

You generally would not use the adjective "reasonable" to describe a website. It is typically reserved for a person, not a thing.

People on theis site are all serious and self motivated; a. As long as you are a person who pursues progress, you can improve yourself greatly with the site and the people on it.

I'm not sure what you mean by the people on it. Do you mean you can improve greatly with the help from the people on it, or do you mean other people are also improving?

No matter who I will bbecome, where I will go, I mustwill always remember this site and the people on this site forever.

Thanks to this site, thanks you to the people who have helped me.

I love you all.

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Jack

Oct. 20, 2020

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People on theis site are all serious and self motivated; a. As long as you are a person who pursues progress, you can improve yourself greatly with the site and the people on it.

The first meaning

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Jack

Oct. 20, 2020

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Thank you very much.

Journal 10/19/20

I woke up at 4 o'clock this morning and I only slept for four hours.

There is nothing to do for me staying at a hotel alone, so I am thinking about the LangCorrect site and the people on it.

Since I started learning English last September, I've been using many websites and apps and using different ones in different periodsfor various periods of time.

No matter whetherhow big or small, they all have giveneach helped me a lot of help.

The design and the features of this site are very reasonable, efficient and thoughtful: i. It is very convenient to use, and you can make progress quickly.

People on the site are all serious and self motivated; a. As long as you are a person who pursuesdetermined to make progress, you can improve yourself greatly language skills a lot with the site and the people on it.

No matter who I will be,become or where I will go, I mustwill remember this site and the people on this site forever.

Thanks you to this site, thanks and to the people who have helped me.

I love you all.

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This is such a kind message :) I appreciate this site and community, too. I hope my corrections were helpful.

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Jack

Oct. 18, 2020

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No matter who I will be,become or where I will go, I mustwill remember this site and the people on this site forever.

Could you please let me know why you delete the “will”, thank you very much.

I woke up at 4 o'clock this morning and. I only slept for four hours.

There is nothing to do for me to do staying atin a hotel alone, so I ambegan thinking about the LangCorrect site and the people on it.

Since I started learning English last September, I've been using many websites and apps and using different ones inover different periods.

No matter whether big or small, they all have givenhave all helped me a lot of help.

But LangCorrect is the one that has helpsed me the most, and I am really grateful.

The design and the features of this site are very reasonable, efficient and thoughtful: it is very convenient to use and you can make progress quickly.

People on the site are all serious and self motivated; as long as you are a person who pursues progress, you can improve yourself greatly with the site and the people on it.

No matter who I will bbecome, where I will go, I must remember this site and the people on this site forever.

Thanks to this site, thanks to the people who have helped me.

I love you all.

Feedback

I still remember people from the site similar to this that I used 10 years ago: Lang-8.
Actually, one of those people became my husband and we had one son together before divorcing.
Another is my lifelong best friend. He cares for me like a real brother, so I love him very much.

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Jack

Oct. 19, 2020

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I have checked the Lang-8, but it is not available now. You are telling a touching story and I feel deeply emotional. No matter whether your husband or your lifelong friend, they are such kind people and it was a fate to meet them. Their love is your fortune and you are worth that. Thank you for your help and I hope you have a happy and joyful life in the future. Thanks again.

Journal 10/19/20


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I woke up at 4 o'clock this morning and I only slept for four hours.


I woke up at 4 o'clock this morning and. I only slept for four hours.

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I woke up at 4 o'clock this morning and I onlyfter having slept for only four hours.

There is nothing to do for me staying at a hotel alone, so I am thinking about the LangCorrect site and the people on it.


There is nothing to do for me to do staying atin a hotel alone, so I ambegan thinking about the LangCorrect site and the people on it.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There is nothing to do for mesince I'm staying at a hotel alone, so I am thinking about the LangCorrect site and the people onusing it.

Since I started learning English last September, I've been using many websites and apps and using different ones in different periods.


Since I started learning English last September, I've been using many websites and apps and using different ones inover different periods.

Since I started learning English last September, I've been using many websites and apps and using different ones in different periodsfor various periods of time.

Since I started learning English last September, I've been usingused many websites and apps and usingt different ones in different periodtimes.

No matter whether big or small, they all have given me a lot of help.


No matter whether big or small, they all have givenhave all helped me a lot of help.

No matter whetherhow big or small, they all have giveneach helped me a lot of help.

No matter whether they are big or small, they all have given me a lot of help, but ....

I'm not sure what you mean by big or small. Do you mean if the company is big or small, or the content? I have combined your two sentences together.

But LangCorrect is the one that helps me the most and I am really grateful.


But LangCorrect is the one that has helpsed me the most, and I am really grateful.

But..... LangCorrect is the one that helps me the most and I am really grateful.

The design and the features of this site are very reasonable, efficient and thoughtful: it is very convenient to use and you can make progress quickly.


The design and the features of this site are very reasonable, efficient and thoughtful: i. It is very convenient to use, and you can make progress quickly.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The design and the features of this site are very reasonablesensible (?), efficient and thoughtful: it is very convenient to use and you can make progress quickly.

You generally would not use the adjective "reasonable" to describe a website. It is typically reserved for a person, not a thing.

People on the site are all serious and self motivated; as long as you are a person who pursues progress, you can improve yourself greatly with the site and the people on it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

People on the site are all serious and self motivated; a. As long as you are a person who pursuesdetermined to make progress, you can improve yourself greatly language skills a lot with the site and the people on it.

People on theis site are all serious and self motivated; a. As long as you are a person who pursues progress, you can improve yourself greatly with the site and the people on it.

I'm not sure what you mean by the people on it. Do you mean you can improve greatly with the help from the people on it, or do you mean other people are also improving?

No matter who I will be, where I will go, I must remember this site and the people on this site forever.


No matter who I will bbecome, where I will go, I must remember this site and the people on this site forever.

No matter who I will be,become or where I will go, I mustwill remember this site and the people on this site forever.

No matter who I will bbecome, where I will go, I mustwill always remember this site and the people on this site forever.

Thanks to this site, thanks to the people who have helped me.


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Thanks you to this site, thanks and to the people who have helped me.

Thanks to this site, thanks you to the people who have helped me.

I love you all.


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