Oct. 18, 2020
Journal 10/18/20
I accidentally saw a video today and it was a duet that was shot in 1993. The performers are famous singer Maoamin and famous sketch actor Zhaobenshan, and the song they sing is Liuliudeni. I felt deeply after watching it. They were so young at that time, so was me. More than twenty years have passed, it seems besides we got old, we didn't get anything. We can't keep the past, let alone go back to the past. The only thing we can do is cherish the present and the future. So never waste time again, we cannot afford it. Do things we still can do and do things we like to do. Stay healthy and happy; make every minute meaningful.
I accidentally sawcame across a video today and it was a duet that was shot in 1993.
Saying accidentally makes me think you intended to see another video but opened up this video by accident instead. I assume "come across" fits your intended meaning better.
The performers arwere the famous singer Maoa Amin and the famous sketch actor Zhaob Benshan, and the song they siang iwas Liuliuden Liu De Ni.
They were so young at that time, aso was meI.
More than twenty years have passed, i. It seems that besides we gotgetting older, we didn't gethaven't done anything else.
The only thing we can do is cherish the present and the future.
Stay healthy and happy; make every minute meaningful.
I accidentally saw a video today and it was a duet that was shot in 1993.
The performers are famous singer Maoamin and famous sketch actor Zhaob Benshan, and the song they sing is Liuliudeni.
I felt deeply emotional after watching it.
It's not exactly wrong the way you wrote, it just sounds a bit off.
They were so young at that time, so was meI.
More than twenty years have passed, it seems that besides we gotgetting old, we didn't get anything.
"It seems that besides getting old, we didn't get anything."
This is such a good phrase, hah.
We can't keephold on to the past, let alone go back to the past.
The only thing we can do is cherish the present and the future.
So never waste time again, we cannot afford it.
Do things we still can do and do things we like to dodoing.
Stay healthy and happy; make every minute meaningful.
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Really good text, well done!
Oct. 18, 2020
Thank you for your encouragement. You are very kind and helpful, thank you very much.
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I accidentally saw a video today and it was a duet that was shot in 1993. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I Saying accidentally makes me think you intended to see another video but opened up this video by accident instead. I assume "come across" fits your intended meaning better. |
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The performers are famous singer Maoamin and famous sketch actor Zhaobenshan, and the song they sing is Liuliudeni. The performers are famous singer Maoamin and famous sketch actor Zhao The performers |
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I felt deeply after watching it. I felt deeply emotional after watching it. It's not exactly wrong the way you wrote, it just sounds a bit off. |
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They were so young at that time, so was me. They were so young at that time, so was They were so young at that time, as |
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More than twenty years have passed, it seems besides we got old, we didn't get anything. More than twenty years have passed, it seems that besides "It seems that besides getting old, we didn't get anything." This is such a good phrase, hah. More than twenty years have passed |
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We can't keep the past, let alone go back to the past. We can't |
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The only thing we can do is cherish the present and the future. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So never waste time again, we cannot afford it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Do things we still can do and do things we like to do. Do things we still can |
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Stay healthy and happy; make every minute meaningful. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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