Oct. 18, 2020
Journal 10/18/20
Yesterday evening, I slept with a driver in the same room. He smokes and the whole room was filled with smoke. I feel very uncomfortable with it. I cannot even breathe, but I am embarrassed to tell him and I can only endure it. I will sleep in a single room tonight and I hope I can have a good sleep.
Yesterday evening, I slept with a driver in the same room as a driver.
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I cannoouldn't even breathe, but I am embarrassed to tell him and I can only endure it.
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I will sleep in a single room tonight and I hope that I can have a good sleep well.
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Great Job! Just a few corrections!
Oct. 18, 2020
Thank you for your corrections and comments. Thank you very much.
Yesterday evening, I slept with a driver in the same roomLast night, I shared a room with a driver.
"slept with" makes it seem like you shared a bed with him.
He smokes and caused the whole room wasto be filled with smoke.
I feelt very uncomfortable with it.
I cannoouldn't even breathe, but I amwas too embarrassed to tell him and I cancould only endure it.
I will sleep in a single room tonight and I hope I canthat I'll have a good night's sleep.
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Why do you need to share rooms with others? Are you still a student?
Oct. 18, 2020
A standard room has two bed, usually one room is for two people. If one person with one room, the cost will be doubled.
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Yesterday evening, I slept with a driver in the same room.
"slept with" makes it seem like you shared a bed with him. Yesterday evening, I slept |
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He smokes and the whole room was filled with smoke. He smokes and caused the whole room He smoke |
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I feel very uncomfortable with it. I fe I |
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I cannot even breathe, but I am embarrassed to tell him and I can only endure it. I c I c You can also say "I'm" instead of "I am". |
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I will sleep in a single room tonight and I hope I can have a good sleep. I will sleep in a single room tonight and I hope I will sleep in a single room tonight and I hope that I can |
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