March 11, 2021
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It's been cloudy and rainy in the past few days. I usually feel depressed these days. I don't know how to change my mood; I just stay silent and let these days go.
It's been cloudy and rainy in these past few days.
It usually makes me feel depressed these days.
What you wrote is technically correct, I just think it sounds a bit more natural to reorder the words.
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It sounds great otherwise, very poetic! keep it up.
March 11, 2021
Thank you very much.
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It's been cloudy and rainy in the past few days. It's been cloudy and rainy |
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I usually feel depressed these days. It usually makes me feel depressed What you wrote is technically correct, I just think it sounds a bit more natural to reorder the words. |
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I don't know how to change my mood; I just stay silent and let these days go. |
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