March 3, 2021
Journal 1
1. Last night, I had this very strange dream about a person I used to hang out with. These days, my dreams are so vivid as if I am watching a movie. Why has my subconsciousness suddenly become so vivid? Maybe I should attempt writing a scenario or something out of them haha.
2. I’m starting to learn English again. (Brushing up memories)
It’s funny how I never felt I was proficient at English despite the fact that I had spent almost 7 years in the US... Always feel like English expressions cannot contain all the meanings of the things I intend to say.
Languages we use often shape our thoughts or the ways we view the world. I haven't used English for such a long time, so I must have forgotten how to ‘think’ or conceive in English. (Plus chatting with friends and writing a journal are such different things)
Anyhow I hope someday using English will come to me as naturally as using Korean.
3. Indoor climbing is my new hobby. Too bad that right now I can’t afford to go to the climbing gyms as often as I like to haha. The gyms that I like are so expensive. Plus doing indoor climbing takes up a lot of time from my precious day.
Journal 1
1. Last night, I had this very strange dream about a person I used to hang out with.
These days, my dreams are so vivid, as if I am watching a movie.
Comma needed: separate phrase.
Why has my subconsciousness suddenly become so vivid?
Maybe I should attempttry writing a scenario or something out of them, haha.
No reason to have "a scenario or": we already know that from something. Try sounds less formal than attempt, though attempt would work. You need a comma after "haha" because it's a add-on.
2. I’m starting to learn English again.
(Brushing up and memories)
Two different thoughts: you could brush up on your English or think of memories.
It’s funny how I never felt I was proficient at English despite the fact that I had spent almost 7 years in the US...
AI always feel like English expressions cannot contain all the meanings of the things I intend to say.
You always need pronouns before a verb.
Languages we use oftenWe often use languages shape our thoughts or the ways we view the world.
You don't need languages first: it's a direct object. Put "often" in between we and use.
I haven't used English for such a long time, so I must have forgotten how to ‘think’ or conceive in English.
(Plus chatting with friends and writing in a journal are such different things)
Put "in" because you put a writing in the journal.
Anyhow, I hope someday using English will come to me as naturally as using Korean.
3. Indoor climbing is my new hobby.
Too bad that right now I can’t afford to go to the climbing gyms as often as I like to, haha.
The gyms that I like are so expensive.
Plus, doing indoor climbing takes up a lot of time from my precious day.
March 3, 2021
It messed it up so I couldn't put my comment after that. Great job!! I've been having weird quarantine dreams and I think that's a thing now. Good job, felt like it was advanced! :)
March 3, 2021
Thank you for your comments ^^ Yes, it really must be a thing, then,, perhaps due to this abnormal pandemic situation, haha
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Journal 1 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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1. Last night, I had this very strange dream about a person I used to hang out with. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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These days, my dreams are so vivid as if I am watching a movie. These days, my dreams are so vivid, as if I am watching a movie. Comma needed: separate phrase. |
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Why has my subconsciousness suddenly become so vivid? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Maybe I should attempt writing a scenario or something out of them haha. Maybe I should No reason to have "a scenario or": we already know that from something. Try sounds less formal than attempt, though attempt would work. You need a comma after "haha" because it's a add-on. |
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2. I’m starting to learn English again. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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(Brushing up memories) (Brushing up and memories) Two different thoughts: you could brush up on your English or think of memories. |
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It’s funny how I never felt I was proficient at English despite the fact that I had spent almost 7 years in the US... It’s funny how I never felt I was proficient at English despite the fact that I |
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Always feel like English expressions cannot contain all the meanings of the things I intend to say.
You always need pronouns before a verb. |
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Languages we use often shape our thoughts or the ways we view the world.
You don't need languages first: it's a direct object. Put "often" in between we and use. |
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I haven't used English for such a long time, so I must have forgotten how to ‘think’ or conceive in English. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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(Plus chatting with friends and writing a journal are such different things) (Plus chatting with friends and writing in a journal are such different things) Put "in" because you put a writing in the journal. |
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Anyhow I hope someday using English will come to me as naturally as using Korean. Anyhow, I hope someday using English will come to me as naturally as using Korean. |
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3. Indoor climbing is my new hobby. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Too bad that right now I can’t afford to go to the climbing gyms as often as I like to haha. Too bad that right now I can’t afford to go to |
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The gyms that I like are so expensive. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Plus doing indoor climbing takes up a lot of time from my precious day. Plus, doing indoor climbing takes up a lot of time from my precious day. |
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