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jolishe

Nov. 12, 2020

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How often do you use a computer?
I would say I use it a lot. I work online and as a result I am constantly connected. I don't enjoy spending long hours in front of a computer that much, to be honest, but that's what I've signed up for. I usually spend about 12 hours a day on my computer, and in my opinion, that's insane. Moreover, I'm afraid I might develop some eye problems in the future.
When I am not using my computer for work, I enjoy watching movies and series online. It's really entertaining.

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How often do you use a computer?

I would say I use it a lot.

I work online and as a result I am constantly connected.

I don't enjoy spending long hours in front of a computer that much, to be honest, but that's what I've signed up for.

I usually spend about 12 hours a day on my computer, and in my opinion, that's insane.

Moreover, I'm afraid I might develop some eye problems in the future.

When I am not using my computer for work, I enjoy watching movies and TV series online.

It's really entertaining.

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How often do you use a computer?

I would say I use it a lot.

I work online and as a result I am constantly connected.

I don't enjoy bespending long hours in front of a computer that much, to be honest, but that's what I've signed up for.

I usually spend about 12 hours a day on my computer, and in my opinion, that's insane.

Moreover, I'm afraid I might develop some eye problems in the future.

When I am not using my computer for work, I enjoy watching movies and series online.

It's really entertaining.

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I am also afraid of getting eye problems in the future :( good writing!

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jolishe

Nov. 12, 2020

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I hope we won't! Thank you so much for the feedback!
P.S.
Yes...I am still online :P

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I would say I use it a lot.


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I work online and as a result I am constantly connected.


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I don't enjoy being long hours in front of a computer that much, to be honest, but that's part of my job.


I usually spend about 10 hours on my computer, and in my opinion, that's insane.


Moreover, I'm afraid I will have some vision problems in the future.


When I am not using my computer for work, I enjoy watching movies and series online.


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When I am not using my computer for work, I enjoy watching movies and TV series online.

It's really entertaining.


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Moreover, I'm afraid I might develop some eye problems in the future.


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I don't enjoy being long hours in front of a computer that much, to be honest, but that's what I've signed up for.


I don't enjoy bespending long hours in front of a computer that much, to be honest, but that's what I've signed up for.

I usually spend about 12 hours a day on my computer, and in my opinion, that's insane.


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I don't enjoy spending long hours in front of a computer that much, to be honest, but that's what I've signed up for.


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