Jan. 26, 2023
I have been thought a lot about the children education recently。why I do that even though I don’t have kid. Because I associate my experience of education. I always believe that the life and temper and habits we have ,it all because our experience or original family .
I still remember , When I was a kid in the school, some classmate the are bully. Those people we all more or less know some. I though I could simply told my parents, they will help me or encourage me or something. But my parents they just ignored me .they didn’t believe that’s a problem. Since then when I met the same situation I wouldn’t tell my parents . My subconscious told me it wouldn’t help me to inform my parents .
Meanwhile I began getting kind of envious about other classmate who’s parents alway understand them and stand on their side.
When I was in the high scholl , like the most teenager we all have own crush. But I strongly want to get his attention. Even if I wasted a lot of time for that and got a bad note in the examination .
And now I’m an adult, I begin understanding that kind of psychology . Not only I tried to get attention from my parents but also from the boy I liked. human beings always want to get love from our family or friends . That is already in our gene .
At the office we all hope to have a good relationship between colleagues, and so many research reported , the most important factor for employee is salary ,second is work atmosphere.
If you have a fight with your family at the morning , can you still have a good mood in the rest of the day?
If your boss don’t respect you and shout at you sometimes , you definitely want to resign or look for a new job , right ?
So the relationship between us is so important . It has impact on our daily mood and will change our mindset . in addition it will also effects our behaviour .
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I have been thoughtinking a lot about the children's education recently。why do I do that even though I don’t have kid.?
I have been thinking a lot about children's education recently。why do I do that even though I don’t have kid?
Or "the education of children"
I always believe that the life and temper and habits we have ,itis all because of our experience or original family .
I always believe that the life and temper and habits we have is all because of our experience or original family .
I still remember , Wwhen I was a kid in the school, some classmate the are was a bully.
I still remember when I was a kid in the school, some classmate there was a bully.
I though I could simply toldell my parents, they willould help me or encourage me or something.
I though I could simply tell my parents, they would help me or encourage me or something.
Hypotheticals in past tense still use future tense... it's confusing I know, sorry.
But my parents they just ignored me .t. They didn’t believe that’it was a problem.
But my parents just ignored me. They didn’t believe it was a problem.
Since then when I met the same situation I wouldn’t tell my parents .
My subconscious told me it wouldn’t help me to inform my parents .
Meanwhile I began getting kind of envious about of another classmate who’s parents always understand them and stanood on their side.
Meanwhile I began getting kind of envious of another classmate who’s parents always understand them and stood on their side.
When I was in the high schooll , like the most teenager we all have owns I had a crush.
When I was in the high school, like most teenagers I had a crush.
But I strongly wanted to get his attention.
I strongly wanted to get his attention.
Even if I wasted a lot of time for that and got a bad notgrade in the examination .
I wasted a lot of time for that and got a bad grade in the examination .
"Note" could be corrent if you mean a teacher wrote down that you were misbehaving. A "bad grade" would mean you didn't study enough and didn't score well.
And now I’m an adult, I've begiun to understanding that kind of psychology .
And now I’m an adult, I've begun to understand that kind of psychology .
Not only did I triedy to get attention from my parents, but also from the boy I liked.
Not only did I try to get attention from my parents, but also from the boy I liked.
Oh, I see! Very interesting connection to make!
human beings always want to get love from our family or friends .
That is already in our gene s.
That is in our genes.
Or "in our DNA."
If you have a fight with your family atin the morning , can you still have a good mood infor the rest of the day?
If you have a fight with your family in the morning , can you still have a good mood for the rest of the day?
If your boss don’t respect you and shouts at you sometimes , you definitely want to resign or look for a new job , right ? If your boss don’t respect you and shouts at you sometimes , you definitely want to resign or look for a new job , right ?
So the relationship between us is so important .
It has an impact on our daily mood and will change our mindset . It has an impact on our daily mood and will change our mindset .
in addition it will also eaffects our behaviour .
in addition it also affects our behaviour .
Affect is usally a verb, effect is usually a noun.
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I have been thoughtinking a lot about the children’s education recently。why I do. Why have I been doing that even though I don’t have a kid.?
I have been thinking a lot about children’s education recently. Why have I been doing that even though I don’t have a kid?
Because I associate my experience of educationducational experience with my adult life.
Because I associate my educational experience with my adult life.
I’m guessing this is what you mean. The verb “associate” requires two objects: you associate one thing WITH another.
I always believe that the life and, temper and habits we have ,itare all because of our experience or original family .
I always believe that the life, temper and habits we have are all because of our experience or original family.
I still remember , Wwhen I was a kid in the school, some classmate the as were bullyies.
I still remember, when I was a kid in school, some classmates were bullies.
Those people wWe all more or less know some. of those people.
We all more or less know some of those people.
I thought I could simply toldell my parents, and they willould help me or encourage me or something.
I thought I could simply tell my parents and they would help me or encourage me or something.
But my parents they just ignored me .t. They didn’t believe that’it was a problem.
But my parents just ignored me. They didn’t believe it was a problem.
Since then when I met the same situation I wouldn’t tell my parents .
My subconscious told me it wouldn’t help me to inform my parents .
Meanwhile I began getting kind of envious aboutof other classmates who’se parents always understanood them and stanood on their side.
Meanwhile I began getting kind of envious of other classmates whose parents always understood them and stood on their side.
When I was in the high schooll , like the most teenager we all have owns I had a crush.
When I was in high school, like most teenagers I had a crush.
But I strongly wanted to get his attention., even…
But I strongly wanted to get his attention, even…
E…even if I wasted a lot of time foron thatis and got a bad note in the/on an examination .
…even if I wasted a lot of time on this and got a bad note in/on an examination.
Merge this with the previous sentence.
And now I’m an adult, I begin to understanding that kind of psychology .
And now I’m an adult, I begin to understand that kind of psychology .
Not only I tried[did I try | was I trying] to get attention from my parents but also from the boy I liked.
Not only [did I try | was I trying] to get attention from my parents but also from the boy I liked.
hHuman beings always want to get love from our family or friends .
Human beings always want to get love from our family or friends.
That is already in our gene s.
That is already in our genes.
At the office we all hope to have a good relationship betweenwith colleagues, and so manyuch research has reported ,that the most important factor for employee is salary ,satisfaction/happiness is salary, and the second is work atmosphere.
At the office we all hope to have a good relationship with colleagues, and so much research has reported that the most important factor for employee satisfaction/happiness is salary, and the second is work atmosphere.
If you have a fight with your family atin the morning , can you still have a good mood in the rest of the day?
If you have a fight with your family in the morning, can you still have a good mood the rest of the day?
If your boss doesn’t respect you and shouts at you sometimes , you definitely want to resign or look for a new job , right ?
If your boss doesn’t respect you and shouts at you sometimes, you definitely want to resign or look for a new job, right?
Delete the spaces before the punctuation.
So the relationships between us isare so important .
So the relationships between us are so important.
ItThey hasve impacts on our daily mood and will change our mindset .
They have impacts on our daily mood and will change our mindset.
iIn addition it will also eaffects our behaviour .
In addition it will also affect our behaviour.
In the US, we spell “behavior” without a “u”.
When “affect” is a verb, it is almost always spelled with an “a”. (“Effect” with two E’s can also be a verb, but it has an obscure meaning that we rarely use except in academic writing.)
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Be careful of the spacing around commas and full-stops (periods). In English, we do NOT insert a space in front of the comma or period, but we do insert one after it:
+ correct: I love cake, cookies, and pie. They all taste good to me.
- incorrect: I love cake , cookies , and pie . They all taste good to me .
- incorrect: I love cake,cookies,and pie.They all taste good to me.
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I have been thought a lot about the children education recently。why I do that even though I don’t have kid.
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Because I associate my experience of education.
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I always believe that the life and temper and habits we have ,it all because our experience or original family .
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I always believe that the life and temper and habits we have |
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I still remember , When I was a kid in the school, some classmate the are bully.
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Those people we all more or less know some.
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I though I could simply told my parents, they will help me or encourage me or something.
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But my parents they just ignored me .they didn’t believe that’s a problem.
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My subconscious told me it wouldn’t help me to inform my parents . This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Meanwhile I began getting kind of envious about other classmate who’s parents alway understand them and stand on their side.
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Meanwhile I began getting kind of envious |
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When I was in the high scholl , like the most teenager we all have own crush.
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When I was in the high school |
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But I strongly want to get his attention.
But I strongly wanted to get his attention
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Even if I wasted a lot of time for that and got a bad note in the examination .
Merge this with the previous sentence.
"Note" could be corrent if you mean a teacher wrote down that you were misbehaving. A "bad grade" would mean you didn't study enough and didn't score well. |
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And now I’m an adult, I begin understanding that kind of psychology .
And now I’m an adult, I begin to understand
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Not only I tried to get attention from my parents but also from the boy I liked.
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Not only did I tr Oh, I see! Very interesting connection to make! |
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human beings always want to get love from our family or friends . This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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That is already in our gene .
That is already in our gene
That is Or "in our DNA." |
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At the office we all hope to have a good relationship between colleagues, and so many research reported , the most important factor for employee is salary ,second is work atmosphere.
At the office we all hope to have a good relationship |
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If you have a fight with your family at the morning , can you still have a good mood in the rest of the day?
If you have a fight with your family
If you have a fight with your family |
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If your boss don’t respect you and shout at you sometimes , you definitely want to resign or look for a new job , right ?
If your boss doesn’t respect you and shouts at you sometimes Delete the spaces before the punctuation. If your boss don’t respect you and shouts at you sometimes , you definitely want to resign or look for a new job , right ? If your boss don’t respect you and shouts at you sometimes , you definitely want to resign or look for a new job , right ? |
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So the relationship between us is so important .
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It has impact on our daily mood and will change our mindset .
It has an impact on our daily mood and will change our mindset . It has an impact on our daily mood and will change our mindset . |
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in addition it will also effects our behaviour .
In the US, we spell “behavior” without a “u”. When “affect” is a verb, it is almost always spelled with an “a”. (“Effect” with two E’s can also be a verb, but it has an obscure meaning that we rarely use except in academic writing.)
in addition it Affect is usally a verb, effect is usually a noun. |
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