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floria3949

Jan. 26, 2023

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jounal

I have been thought a lot about the children education recently。why I do that even though I don’t have kid. Because I associate my experience of education. I always believe that the life and temper and habits we have ,it all because our experience or original family .





I still remember , When I was a kid in the school, some classmate the are bully. Those people we all more or less know some. I though I could simply told my parents, they will help me or encourage me or something. But my parents they just ignored me .they didn’t believe that’s a problem. Since then when I met the same situation I wouldn’t tell my parents . My subconscious told me it wouldn’t help me to inform my parents .
Meanwhile I began getting kind of envious about other classmate who’s parents alway understand them and stand on their side.




When I was in the high scholl , like the most teenager we all have own crush. But I strongly want to get his attention. Even if I wasted a lot of time for that and got a bad note in the examination .

And now I’m an adult, I begin understanding that kind of psychology . Not only I tried to get attention from my parents but also from the boy I liked. human beings always want to get love from our family or friends . That is already in our gene .

At the office we all hope to have a good relationship between colleagues, and so many research reported , the most important factor for employee is salary ,second is work atmosphere.




If you have a fight with your family at the morning , can you still have a good mood in the rest of the day?

If your boss don’t respect you and shout at you sometimes , you definitely want to resign or look for a new job , right ?

So the relationship between us is so important . It has impact on our daily mood and will change our mindset . in addition it will also effects our behaviour .

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journal

I have been thoughtinking a lot about the children's education recently。why do I do that even though I don’t have kid.?

Or "the education of children"

I always believe that the life and temper and habits we have ,itis all because of our experience or original family .

I still remember , Wwhen I was a kid in the school, some classmate the are was a bully.

I though I could simply toldell my parents, they willould help me or encourage me or something.

Hypotheticals in past tense still use future tense... it's confusing I know, sorry.

But my parents they just ignored me .t. They didn’t believe that’it was a problem.

Since then when I met the same situation I wouldn’t tell my parents .

My subconscious told me it wouldn’t help me to inform my parents .

Meanwhile I began getting kind of envious about of another classmate who’s parents always understand them and stanood on their side.

When I was in the high schooll , like the most teenager we all have owns I had a crush.

But I strongly wanted to get his attention.

Even if I wasted a lot of time for that and got a bad notgrade in the examination .

"Note" could be corrent if you mean a teacher wrote down that you were misbehaving. A "bad grade" would mean you didn't study enough and didn't score well.

And now I’m an adult, I've begiun to understanding that kind of psychology .

Not only did I triedy to get attention from my parents, but also from the boy I liked.

Oh, I see! Very interesting connection to make!

human beings always want to get love from our family or friends .

That is already in our gene s.

Or "in our DNA."

If you have a fight with your family atin the morning , can you still have a good mood infor the rest of the day?

If your boss don’t respect you and shouts at you sometimes , you definitely want to resign or look for a new job , right ?

So the relationship between us is so important .

It has an impact on our daily mood and will change our mindset .

in addition it will also eaffects our behaviour .

Affect is usally a verb, effect is usually a noun.

jJournal

I have been thoughtinking a lot about the children’s education recently。why I do. Why have I been doing that even though I don’t have a kid.?

Because I associate my experience of educationducational experience with my adult life.

I’m guessing this is what you mean. The verb “associate” requires two objects: you associate one thing WITH another.

I always believe that the life and, temper and habits we have ,itare all because of our experience or original family .

I still remember , Wwhen I was a kid in the school, some classmate the as were bullyies.

Those people wWe all more or less know some. of those people.

I thought I could simply toldell my parents, and they willould help me or encourage me or something.

But my parents they just ignored me .t. They didn’t believe that’it was a problem.

Since then when I met the same situation I wouldn’t tell my parents .

My subconscious told me it wouldn’t help me to inform my parents .

Meanwhile I began getting kind of envious aboutof other classmates whose parents always understanood them and stanood on their side.

When I was in the high schooll , like the most teenager we all have owns I had a crush.

But I strongly wanted to get his attention., even…

E…even if I wasted a lot of time foron thatis and got a bad note in the/on an examination .

Merge this with the previous sentence.

And now I’m an adult, I begin to understanding that kind of psychology .

Not only I tried[did I try | was I trying] to get attention from my parents but also from the boy I liked.

hHuman beings always want to get love from our family or friends .

That is already in our gene s.

At the office we all hope to have a good relationship betweenwith colleagues, and so manyuch research has reported ,that the most important factor for employee is salary ,satisfaction/happiness is salary, and the second is work atmosphere.

If you have a fight with your family atin the morning , can you still have a good mood in the rest of the day?

If your boss doesn’t respect you and shouts at you sometimes , you definitely want to resign or look for a new job , right ?

Delete the spaces before the punctuation.

So the relationships between us isare so important .

ItThey hasve impacts on our daily mood and will change our mindset .

iIn addition it will also eaffects our behaviour .

In the US, we spell “behavior” without a “u”.

When “affect” is a verb, it is almost always spelled with an “a”. (“Effect” with two E’s can also be a verb, but it has an obscure meaning that we rarely use except in academic writing.)

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Be careful of the spacing around commas and full-stops (periods). In English, we do NOT insert a space in front of the comma or period, but we do insert one after it:

+ correct: I love cake, cookies, and pie. They all taste good to me.
- incorrect: I love cake , cookies , and pie . They all taste good to me .
- incorrect: I love cake,cookies,and pie.They all taste good to me.

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floria3949

Jan. 26, 2023

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thank you so much for your correction,
i really appreciate it.

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JoeTofu

Jan. 26, 2023

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jounal


jJournal

journal

I have been thought a lot about the children education recently。why I do that even though I don’t have kid.


I have been thoughtinking a lot about the children’s education recently。why I do. Why have I been doing that even though I don’t have a kid.?

I have been thoughtinking a lot about the children's education recently。why do I do that even though I don’t have kid.?

Or "the education of children"

Because I associate my experience of education.


Because I associate my experience of educationducational experience with my adult life.

I’m guessing this is what you mean. The verb “associate” requires two objects: you associate one thing WITH another.

I always believe that the life and temper and habits we have ,it all because our experience or original family .


I always believe that the life and, temper and habits we have ,itare all because of our experience or original family .

I always believe that the life and temper and habits we have ,itis all because of our experience or original family .

I still remember , When I was a kid in the school, some classmate the are bully.


I still remember , Wwhen I was a kid in the school, some classmate the as were bullyies.

I still remember , Wwhen I was a kid in the school, some classmate the are was a bully.

Those people we all more or less know some.


Those people wWe all more or less know some. of those people.

I though I could simply told my parents, they will help me or encourage me or something.


I thought I could simply toldell my parents, and they willould help me or encourage me or something.

I though I could simply toldell my parents, they willould help me or encourage me or something.

Hypotheticals in past tense still use future tense... it's confusing I know, sorry.

But my parents they just ignored me .they didn’t believe that’s a problem.


But my parents they just ignored me .t. They didn’t believe that’it was a problem.

But my parents they just ignored me .t. They didn’t believe that’it was a problem.

Since then when I met the same situation I wouldn’t tell my parents .


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My subconscious told me it wouldn’t help me to inform my parents .


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Meanwhile I began getting kind of envious about other classmate who’s parents alway understand them and stand on their side.


Meanwhile I began getting kind of envious aboutof other classmates whose parents always understanood them and stanood on their side.

Meanwhile I began getting kind of envious about of another classmate who’s parents always understand them and stanood on their side.

When I was in the high scholl , like the most teenager we all have own crush.


When I was in the high schooll , like the most teenager we all have owns I had a crush.

When I was in the high schooll , like the most teenager we all have owns I had a crush.

But I strongly want to get his attention.


But I strongly wanted to get his attention., even…

But I strongly wanted to get his attention.

Even if I wasted a lot of time for that and got a bad note in the examination .


E…even if I wasted a lot of time foron thatis and got a bad note in the/on an examination .

Merge this with the previous sentence.

Even if I wasted a lot of time for that and got a bad notgrade in the examination .

"Note" could be corrent if you mean a teacher wrote down that you were misbehaving. A "bad grade" would mean you didn't study enough and didn't score well.

And now I’m an adult, I begin understanding that kind of psychology .


And now I’m an adult, I begin to understanding that kind of psychology .

And now I’m an adult, I've begiun to understanding that kind of psychology .

Not only I tried to get attention from my parents but also from the boy I liked.


Not only I tried[did I try | was I trying] to get attention from my parents but also from the boy I liked.

Not only did I triedy to get attention from my parents, but also from the boy I liked.

Oh, I see! Very interesting connection to make!

human beings always want to get love from our family or friends .


hHuman beings always want to get love from our family or friends .

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That is already in our gene .


That is already in our gene s.

That is already in our gene s.

Or "in our DNA."

At the office we all hope to have a good relationship between colleagues, and so many research reported , the most important factor for employee is salary ,second is work atmosphere.


At the office we all hope to have a good relationship betweenwith colleagues, and so manyuch research has reported ,that the most important factor for employee is salary ,satisfaction/happiness is salary, and the second is work atmosphere.

If you have a fight with your family at the morning , can you still have a good mood in the rest of the day?


If you have a fight with your family atin the morning , can you still have a good mood in the rest of the day?

If you have a fight with your family atin the morning , can you still have a good mood infor the rest of the day?

If your boss don’t respect you and shout at you sometimes , you definitely want to resign or look for a new job , right ?


If your boss doesn’t respect you and shouts at you sometimes , you definitely want to resign or look for a new job , right ?

Delete the spaces before the punctuation.

If your boss don’t respect you and shouts at you sometimes , you definitely want to resign or look for a new job , right ?

So the relationship between us is so important .


So the relationships between us isare so important .

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It has impact on our daily mood and will change our mindset .


ItThey hasve impacts on our daily mood and will change our mindset .

It has an impact on our daily mood and will change our mindset .

in addition it will also effects our behaviour .


iIn addition it will also eaffects our behaviour .

In the US, we spell “behavior” without a “u”. When “affect” is a verb, it is almost always spelled with an “a”. (“Effect” with two E’s can also be a verb, but it has an obscure meaning that we rarely use except in academic writing.)

in addition it will also eaffects our behaviour .

Affect is usally a verb, effect is usually a noun.

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