Jan. 26, 2023
I have been thought a lot about the children education recently。why I do that even though I don’t have kid. Because I associate my experience of education. I always believe that the life and temper and habits we have ,it all because our experience or original family .
I still remember , When I was a kid in the school, some classmate the are bully. Those people we all more or less know some. I though I could simply told my parents, they will help me or encourage me or something. But my parents they just ignored me .they didn’t believe that’s a problem. Since then when I met the same situation I wouldn’t tell my parents . My subconscious told me it wouldn’t help me to inform my parents .
Meanwhile I began getting kind of envious about other classmate who’s parents alway understand them and stand on their side.
When I was in the high scholl , like the most teenager we all have own crush. But I strongly want to get his attention. Even if I wasted a lot of time for that and got a bad note in the examination .
And now I’m an adult, I begin understanding that kind of psychology . Not only I tried to get attention from my parents but also from the boy I liked. human beings always want to get love from our family or friends . That is already in our gene .
At the office we all hope to have a good relationship between colleagues, and so many research reported , the most important factor for employee is salary ,second is work atmosphere.
If you have a fight with your family at the morning , can you still have a good mood in the rest of the day?
If your boss don’t respect you and shout at you sometimes , you definitely want to resign or look for a new job , right ?
So the relationship between us is so important . It has impact on our daily mood and will change our mindset . in addition it will also effects our behaviour .
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I have been thoughtinking a lot about the children's education recently。why do I do that even though I don’t have kid.?
Or "the education of children"
I always believe that the life and temper and habits we have ,itis all because of our experience or original family .
I still remember , Wwhen I was a kid in the school, some classmate the are was a bully.
I though I could simply toldell my parents, they willould help me or encourage me or something.
Hypotheticals in past tense still use future tense... it's confusing I know, sorry.
But my parents they just ignored me .t. They didn’t believe that’it was a problem.
Since then when I met the same situation I wouldn’t tell my parents .
My subconscious told me it wouldn’t help me to inform my parents .
Meanwhile I began getting kind of envious about of another classmate who’s parents always understand them and stanood on their side.
When I was in the high schooll , like the most teenager we all have owns I had a crush.
But I strongly wanted to get his attention.
Even if I wasted a lot of time for that and got a bad notgrade in the examination .
"Note" could be corrent if you mean a teacher wrote down that you were misbehaving. A "bad grade" would mean you didn't study enough and didn't score well.
And now I’m an adult, I've begiun to understanding that kind of psychology .
Not only did I triedy to get attention from my parents, but also from the boy I liked.
Oh, I see! Very interesting connection to make!
human beings always want to get love from our family or friends .
That is already in our gene s.
Or "in our DNA."
If you have a fight with your family atin the morning , can you still have a good mood infor the rest of the day?
If your boss don’t respect you and shouts at you sometimes , you definitely want to resign or look for a new job , right ?
So the relationship between us is so important .
It has an impact on our daily mood and will change our mindset .
in addition it will also eaffects our behaviour .
Affect is usally a verb, effect is usually a noun.
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I have been thoughtinking a lot about the children’s education recently。why I do. Why have I been doing that even though I don’t have a kid.?
Because I associate my experience of educationducational experience with my adult life.
I’m guessing this is what you mean. The verb “associate” requires two objects: you associate one thing WITH another.
I always believe that the life and, temper and habits we have ,itare all because of our experience or original family .
I still remember , Wwhen I was a kid in the school, some classmate the as were bullyies.
Those people wWe all more or less know some. of those people.
I thought I could simply toldell my parents, and they willould help me or encourage me or something.
But my parents they just ignored me .t. They didn’t believe that’it was a problem.
Since then when I met the same situation I wouldn’t tell my parents .
My subconscious told me it wouldn’t help me to inform my parents .
Meanwhile I began getting kind of envious aboutof other classmates who’se parents always understanood them and stanood on their side.
When I was in the high schooll , like the most teenager we all have owns I had a crush.
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And now I’m an adult, I begin to understanding that kind of psychology .
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hHuman beings always want to get love from our family or friends .
That is already in our gene s.
At the office we all hope to have a good relationship betweenwith colleagues, and so manyuch research has reported ,that the most important factor for employee is salary ,satisfaction/happiness is salary, and the second is work atmosphere.
If you have a fight with your family atin the morning , can you still have a good mood in the rest of the day?
If your boss doesn’t respect you and shouts at you sometimes , you definitely want to resign or look for a new job , right ?
Delete the spaces before the punctuation.
So the relationships between us isare so important .
ItThey hasve impacts on our daily mood and will change our mindset .
iIn addition it will also eaffects our behaviour .
In the US, we spell “behavior” without a “u”.
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Be careful of the spacing around commas and full-stops (periods). In English, we do NOT insert a space in front of the comma or period, but we do insert one after it:
+ correct: I love cake, cookies, and pie. They all taste good to me.
- incorrect: I love cake , cookies , and pie . They all taste good to me .
- incorrect: I love cake,cookies,and pie.They all taste good to me.
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I have been thought a lot about the children education recently。why I do that even though I don’t have kid. I have been th I have been th Or "the education of children" |
Because I associate my experience of education. Because I associate my e I’m guessing this is what you mean. The verb “associate” requires two objects: you associate one thing WITH another. |
I always believe that the life and temper and habits we have ,it all because our experience or original family . I always believe that the life I always believe that the life and temper and habits we have |
I still remember , When I was a kid in the school, some classmate the are bully. I still remember I still remember |
Those people we all more or less know some.
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I though I could simply told my parents, they will help me or encourage me or something. I thought I could simply t I though I could simply t Hypotheticals in past tense still use future tense... it's confusing I know, sorry. |
But my parents they just ignored me .they didn’t believe that’s a problem. But my parents But my parents |
Since then when I met the same situation I wouldn’t tell my parents . This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
My subconscious told me it wouldn’t help me to inform my parents . This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Meanwhile I began getting kind of envious about other classmate who’s parents alway understand them and stand on their side. Meanwhile I began getting kind of envious Meanwhile I began getting kind of envious |
When I was in the high scholl , like the most teenager we all have own crush. When I was in When I was in the high school |
But I strongly want to get his attention. But I strongly wanted to get his attention
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Even if I wasted a lot of time for that and got a bad note in the examination .
Merge this with the previous sentence.
"Note" could be corrent if you mean a teacher wrote down that you were misbehaving. A "bad grade" would mean you didn't study enough and didn't score well. |
And now I’m an adult, I begin understanding that kind of psychology . And now I’m an adult, I begin to understand And now I’m an adult, I've beg |
Not only I tried to get attention from my parents but also from the boy I liked. Not only Not only did I tr Oh, I see! Very interesting connection to make! |
human beings always want to get love from our family or friends .
This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
That is already in our gene . That is already in our gene That is Or "in our DNA." |
At the office we all hope to have a good relationship between colleagues, and so many research reported , the most important factor for employee is salary ,second is work atmosphere. At the office we all hope to have a good relationship |
If you have a fight with your family at the morning , can you still have a good mood in the rest of the day? If you have a fight with your family If you have a fight with your family |
If your boss don’t respect you and shout at you sometimes , you definitely want to resign or look for a new job , right ? If your boss doesn’t respect you and shouts at you sometimes Delete the spaces before the punctuation. If your boss don’t respect you and shouts at you sometimes , you definitely want to resign or look for a new job , right ? |
So the relationship between us is so important . So the relationships between us This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
It has impact on our daily mood and will change our mindset .
It has an impact on our daily mood and will change our mindset . |
in addition it will also effects our behaviour .
In the US, we spell “behavior” without a “u”. When “affect” is a verb, it is almost always spelled with an “a”. (“Effect” with two E’s can also be a verb, but it has an obscure meaning that we rarely use except in academic writing.) in addition it Affect is usally a verb, effect is usually a noun. |
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