June 29, 2021
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I remember I told you I was really poor in the early years and I thought I had to do something to change the situation. The first thought that came to me was to get a lawyer's qualification and to be a lawyer because I know that lawyers have high incomes. At that time, as long as you have an undergraduate degree, you can take the national judicial examination. But at that point, I didn't have an undergraduate degree. I had to study for it and it would take me three years to get a degree. It was my second year of studying that I decided to run some business because I didn't think it was a smart way to take an exam waiting for three years. Therefore, I did it. Two years later, when I got the degree, I took the exam immediately, and I passed it in the first shot, though it was very difficult to get.
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I remember I told you I was really poor in the early years and I thought I had to do something to change the situation.
The first thought that came to me was to get a lawyer's qualification and to be a lawyer because I know that lawyers have high incomes.
At that time, as long as you haved an undergraduate degree, you canould take the national judicial examination.
At that time, as long as you had an undergraduate degree, you could take the national judicial examination.
But at that point, I didn't have an undergraduate degree.
I had to study for it and it would take me three years to get a degree.
It was during my second year of studying that I decided to run some business becausees. I didn't think it was a smart way to take an exam waiting for three yearsto wait three years to take an exam.
It was during my second year of studying that I decided to run some businesses. I didn't think it was smart to wait three years to take an exam.
Therefore, I did it. Therefore, I did it.
Unclear what "I did it" refers to. Does "it" refer to therefore you started a business? Or does "it" refer to therefore you took the exam?
Two years later, when I got themy degree, I took the exam immediately, and I passed it in the first shot, though it was very difficult to get.
Two years later, when I got my degree, I took the exam immediately and I passed it in the first shot, though it was very difficult.
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I remember I told you I was really poor in the early years and I thought I had to do something to change the situation. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The first thought that came to me was to get a lawyer's qualification and to be a lawyer because I know that lawyers have high incomes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At that time, as long as you have an undergraduate degree, you can take the national judicial examination.
At that time, as long as you ha |
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But at that point, I didn't have an undergraduate degree. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I had to study for it and it would take me three years to get a degree. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was my second year of studying that I decided to run some business because I didn't think it was a smart way to take an exam waiting for three years.
It was during my second year of studying that I decided to run some business |
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Therefore, I did it. Therefore, I did it. Therefore, I did it. Unclear what "I did it" refers to. Does "it" refer to therefore you started a business? Or does "it" refer to therefore you took the exam? |
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Two years later, when I got the degree, I took the exam immediately, and I passed it in the first shot, though it was very difficult to get.
Two years later, when I got |
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