Jan. 24, 2022
We spent yesterday Sunday morning in a travel by cable car, above the docks. In Barcelona there are two cable cars. The Montjuïc Cable Car is the shorter and go up by the Montjuïc mountain to the castle at the top. The port cable car is the longer of two, connecting the "Barceloneta" neighborhood with Miramar, in the Montjuïc mountain. Could seem that the two cable cars are connected, but they are not. The two, have independent routes. There are two towers made in iron making up in a big and strong structure. The cabins are painted in a vivid red colour. We had began the travel in the "Sant Sebastià" tower at the beginning of the route. The cable car crosses the "Jaume I" tower which is at halfway, but at present it is closed and does't stop. The trip follow to finish in Miramar station, in Montjuïc mountain. All this tour last about ten minutes. Then we was walking by the park and went to botanic garden that is close, at side. About three hours later we went back to the cable car to do the return travel to "Sant Sebastià" tower and this way, to finish the trip. The experience is it worth.
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The Cable Car Journey
We spent yesterday Sunday morning in a travel by cable car,ing above the docks by cable car.
We spent Sunday morning traveling above the docks by cable car.
In Barcelona there are two cable cars.
The Montjuïc Cable Car is the shorter of the two and goes up by the Montjuïc mountain to thea castle at the top.
The Montjuïc Cable Car is the shorter of the two and goes up by Montjuïc mountain to a castle at the top.
The port cable car is the longer of two, connecting the "Barceloneta" neighborhood with Miramar, in the Montjuïc mountain.
The port cable car is the longer of two, connecting the "Barceloneta" neighborhood with Miramar in the Montjuïc mountain.
CouldIt might seem that the two cable cars are connected, but they are not.
It might seem that the two cable cars are connected, but they are not.
The two, have independent routes.
The two have independent routes.
There are two towers made inof iron making up in, and they create a big and strong structure.
There are two towers made of iron, and they create a big and strong structure.
The cabins are painted in a vivid red colour.
We had began theour travel ins at the "Sant Sebastià" tower at the beginning of the route.
We began our travels at the Sant Sebastià tower at the beginning of the route.
The cable car cropasses the "Jaume I" tower which is atat the halfway point, but at present it is closed and the cable car does' not stop there.
The cable car passes the Jaume I tower at the halfway point, but at present it is closed and the cable car does not stop there.
The trip follow tothen finish ines at Miramar station, ion Montjuïc mountain.
The trip then finishes at Miramar station, on Montjuïc mountain.
All tThis tour last about ten minutes.
This tour last about ten minutes.
Then we was walking bylked through the park and went to a botanical garden that is close, at side by, beside the park.
Then we walked through the park and went to a botanical garden that is close by, beside the park.
About three hours later, we went back to the cable car to domake the return travel to "ip to the Sant Sebastià" tower and this way, to finish the trip.
About three hours later, we went back to the cable car to make the return trip to the Sant Sebastià tower.
The experience iwas it worth.
The experience was it worth.
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The Journey by Cable Car Journey
The Journey by Cable Car
We spent yYesterday Sunday, we spent the morning in a travelling by cable car, above the docks.
Yesterday Sunday, we spent the morning travelling by cable car, above the docks.
In Barcelona there are two cable cars.
The Montjuïc Cable Car is the shorter and goes up byalong the Montjuïc mountain to the castle at the top.
The Montjuïc Cable Car is the shorter and goes up along the Montjuïc mountain to the castle at the top.
The port cable car is the longer of the two, connecting the "Barceloneta" neighborhood with Miramar, in the Montjuïc mountain. The port cable car is the longer of the two, connecting the "Barceloneta" neighborhood with Miramar, in the Montjuïc mountain.
CIt could seemappear that the two cable cars are connected, but they are not.
It could appear that the two cable cars are connected, but they are not.
The two, have independent routes.
The two have independent routes.
There are two towers made in iron making up init a big and strong structure.
There are two towers made in iron making it a big and strong structure.
The cabins are painted in a vivid red colour.
We had began the travel infrom the "Sant Sebastià" tower at the beginning of the route.
We began the travel from the "Sant Sebastià" tower at the beginning of the route.
The cable car crosses the "Jaume I" tower which is at halfway, but at present it is closed and the cable car does' not stop. there.
The cable car crosses the "Jaume I" tower which is at halfway, but at present it is closed and the cable car does not stop there.
The trip follow to finishs in Miramar station, in Montjuïc mountain.
The trip finishs in Miramar station, in Montjuïc mountain.
All thisThe whole tour last about ten minutes.
The whole tour last about ten minutes.
Then we was walking bylked to the park and went to botanic garden that is close, at side.are next to each other.
Then we walked to the park and to botanic garden that are next to each other.
About three hours later we went back to the cable car to do the return travelreturn to "Sant Sebastià" tower and this way, to finish the trip.
About three hours later we went back to the cable car to return to "Sant Sebastià" tower and this way, finish the trip.
The experience is itwas worth it.
The experience was worth it.
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Well done. Well explained.
We spent yesterday Sunday morning in a travelling by cable car, above the docks.
We spent yesterday morning travelling by cable car, above the docks.
In Barcelona, there are two cable cars. In Barcelona, there are two cable cars.
The Montjuïc Cable Car is the shorter and go up byof the two and runs up the Montjuïc mountain to the castle at the top.
The Montjuïc Cable Car is the shorter of the two and runs up the Montjuïc mountain to the castle at the top.
The port cable car is the longer of two, connecting the "Barceloneta" neighborhood with Miramar, which in the Montjuïc mountain. The port cable car is the longer of two, connecting the "Barceloneta" neighborhood with Miramar, which in the Montjuïc mountain.
CouldIt might seem that the two cable cars are connected, but they are not.
It might seem that the two cable cars are connected, but they are not.
The two, have independent routes.
The two have independent routes.
There are two iron towers made in iron making up inthat make up a big and strong structure.
There are two iron towers that make up a big and strong structure.
We had began the traveling in the "Sant Sebastià" tower at the beginning of the route.
We began traveling in the "Sant Sebastià" tower at the beginning of the route.
The cable car crosses the "Jaume I" tower which is at the halfway, point but at present it is closed and doesn't stop.
The cable car crosses the "Jaume I" tower which is at the halfway point but at present is closed and doesn't stop.
The trip follow to finishended in Miramar station, in the Montjuïc mountain.
The trip ended in Miramar station in the Montjuïc mountain.
All thisThe whole tour lasted about ten minutes.
The whole tour lasted about ten minutes.
Then we was walkinglked by the park and went to the botanic garden that is close, at to its side.
Then we walked by the park and went to the botanic garden that is close to its side.
About three hours later we went back to the cable car to do the return travelreturn to "Sant Sebastià" tower and this way, to finish, so that we could end the trip.
About three hours later we went back to the cable car to return to "Sant Sebastià" tower, so that we could end the trip.
The experience is it worth it.
The experience is worth it.
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Very good!
We spent yesterday Sunday morning in a travel bying in a cable car, above the docks.
We spent yesterday morning traveling in a cable car above the docks.
No need to say Sunday AND yesterday here, just one is enough. No comma needed before "above the docks" either.
In Barcelona there are two cable cars.
The Montjuïc Cable Car is the shorter and goone and it goes up by the Montjuïc mountain to the castle at the top.
The Montjuïc Cable Car is the shorter one and it goes up by the Montjuïc mountain to the castle at the top.
The port cable car is the longer of the two, connecting the "Barceloneta" neighborhood with Miramar, in the Montjuïc mountain. The port cable car is the longer of the two, connecting the "Barceloneta" neighborhood with Miramar, in the Montjuïc mountain.
CIt could seem that the two cable cars are connected, but they are not.
It could seem that the two cable cars are connected, but they are not.
The two,y both have independent routes.
They both have independent routes.
No comma needed here either
There are two iron towers made in iron making up in a big and strong structure.
There are two iron towers making up a big and strong structure.
You can use the word "iron" to describe the towers.
The cabins are painted in a vivid red colour.
We had began the traveljourney in the "Sant Sebastià" tower at the beginning of the route.
We began the journey in the "Sant Sebastià" tower at the beginning of the route.
I think journey sounds more natural here.
The cable car crosses the "Jaume I" tower which is at the halfway, but at pres point, but currently it is closed and doesn't stop.
The cable car crosses the "Jaume I" tower which is at the halfway point, but currently it is closed and doesn't stop.
The trip follow to finishes up in Miramar station, in Montjuïc mountain.
The trip finishes up in Miramar station, in Montjuïc mountain.
All thisThe entire tour lasts about ten minutes.
The entire tour lasts about ten minutes.
Then we wasere walking by the park and went to botanical garden that is closenearby, at side.
Then we were walking by the park and went to botanical garden that is nearby, at side.
About three hours later we went back to the cable car to do the return travelreturn to "Sant Sebastià" tower and this way, to finish the trip.
About three hours later we went back to the cable car to return to "Sant Sebastià" tower and finish the trip.
This sounds a little more natural to me.
The experience is it worth it. The experience is it worth it.
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Great text, just a couple of small things. Well done :) Sounds like a fun day.
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We spent yesterday Sunday morning in a travel by cable car, above the docks.
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The Montjuïc Cable Car is the shorter and go up by the Montjuïc mountain to the castle at the top.
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The port cable car is the longer of two, connecting the "Barceloneta" neighborhood with Miramar, in the Montjuïc mountain. The port cable car is the longer of the two, connecting the "Barceloneta" neighborhood with Miramar, in the Montjuïc mountain. The port cable car is the longer of the two, connecting the "Barceloneta" neighborhood with Miramar, in the Montjuïc mountain. The port cable car is the longer of two, connecting the "Barceloneta" neighborhood with Miramar, which in the Montjuïc mountain. The port cable car is the longer of two, connecting the "Barceloneta" neighborhood with Miramar, which in the Montjuïc mountain. The port cable car is the longer of the two, connecting the "Barceloneta" neighborhood with Miramar, in the Montjuïc mountain. The port cable car is the longer of the two, connecting the "Barceloneta" neighborhood with Miramar, in the Montjuïc mountain.
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The cable car crosses the "Jaume I" tower which is at halfway, but at present it is closed and does't stop.
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