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alexwong2164

July 8, 2023

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Jogging again

3 days ago was my birthday.

If I remember correctly last time I jogging was at January.

So, I stop jogging almost six months.

Yesterday, I start jogging again.

I usually jog about 10k.

Since I haven’t did more than half year.

I know the whole journey must be hard.

As result, I can’t complete the whole journey and my legs was so tired.

But I didn’t give up.

Today, I jog again the same distance, my legs still feel the pain.

At the end, I manage to complete the whole journey.

I will rest one and start the day after.

I really need to keep this habit to become stronger.

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But I didn’t give up.


Jogging again


Jogging aAgain Jogging Again

3 days ago was my birthday.


3Three days ago was my birthday. Three days ago was my birthday.

numbers smaller than 100 are written out

If I remember correctly last time I jogging was at January.


If I remember correctly, the last time I went jogging was atin January., If I remember correctly, the last time I went jogging was in January,

to go jogging (e.g., "he goes jogging every day", "I went jogging yesterday")

If I remember correctly, the last time I went jogging was atin January. If I remember correctly, the last time I went jogging was in January.

the comma (,) separates the prepositional phrase from the independent clause

So, I stop jogging almost six months.


So, I stop joggingwhich is almost six months. ago! which is almost six months ago!

connected to previous sentence to reduce repetition

So, I stopped jogging almost six months ago. I stopped jogging almost six months ago.

past tense needs to be carried through the whole sentence.

Yesterday, I start jogging again.


Yesterday, I started jogging again. Yesterday, I started jogging again.

Yesterday, I started jogging again. Yesterday I started jogging again.

past tense again

I usually jog about 10k.


I usually jog about 10k. I usually jog a 10k.

you could say that you jog a 10k or you could say that you jog 6.2 miles (or whatever it is in km), but you can’t mix the two

Since I haven’t did more than half year.


Since I havedn’t didjogged in more than half a year., Since I hadn’t jogged in more than half a year,

can also say "Since I hadn't been jogging in more than half a year"

Since I haven’t didone for more than half of a year. Since I haven’t done for more than half of a year.

I know the whole journey must be hard.


I knoew the whole journey mustg would be hard. I knew the whole jog would be hard.

connected to previous sentence

I know the whole journey mustwill be hard. I know the journey will be hard.

As result, I can’t complete the whole journey and my legs was so tired.


As result, I caouldn’t complete the whole jrourneyte and my legs wasere so tired. As result, I couldn’t complete the whole route and my legs were so tired.

As resultIn the end, I caouldn’t complete the whole journey and my legs wasere so tired. In the end, I couldn’t complete the whole journey and my legs were so tired.

Today, I jog again the same distance, my legs still feel the pain.


Today, I jog againged the same distance, m again. My legs still feel the painhurt. Today, I jogged the same distance again. My legs still hurt.

Today, I jogged again the same distance, and my legs still feel the pain. Today I jogged again the same distance and my legs still feel the pain.

At the end, I manage to complete the whole journey.


AtIn the end, I managed to complete the whole journeyg. In the end, I managed to complete the whole jog.

AtIn the end, I managed to complete the whole journey. In the end, I managed to complete the whole journey.

I will rest one and start the day after.


I will rest one day and start again the day after. I will rest one day and start again the day after.

I will rest one day and start the day afteragain the next. I will rest one day and start again the next.

I really need to keep this habit to become stronger.


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