July 8, 2023
Jogging again
3 days ago was my birthday.
If I remember correctly last time I jogging was at January.
So, I stop jogging almost six months.
Yesterday, I start jogging again.
I usually jog about 10k.
Since I haven’t did more than half year.
I know the whole journey must be hard.
As result, I can’t complete the whole journey and my legs was so tired.
But I didn’t give up.
Today, I jog again the same distance, my legs still feel the pain.
At the end, I manage to complete the whole journey.
I will rest one and start the day after.
I really need to keep this habit to become stronger.
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the comma (,) separates the prepositional phrase from the independent clause
So, I stopped jogging almost six months ago.
past tense needs to be carried through the whole sentence.
Yesterday, I started jogging again.
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I usually jog about 10k.
you could say that you jog a 10k or you could say that you jog 6.2 miles (or whatever it is in km), but you can’t mix the two
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I will rest one day and start the day afteragain the next.
Feedback
Overall pretty good! There was just some phrases that were combined that don’t make sense. Also remember to keep using the same tense (past, present or future) throughout the whole sentence.
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to go jogging (e.g., "he goes jogging every day", "I went jogging yesterday")
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connected to previous sentence to reduce repetition
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AtIn the end, I managed to complete the whole journeyg.
I will rest one day and start again the day after.
Feedback
I am really unfit, so well done for jogging even a little bit :)
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3 days ago was my birthday.
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If I remember correctly last time I jogging was at January. If I remember correctly, the last time I went jogging was to go jogging (e.g., "he goes jogging every day", "I went jogging yesterday") If I remember correctly, the last time I went jogging was the comma (,) separates the prepositional phrase from the independent clause |
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So, I stop jogging almost six months.
connected to previous sentence to reduce repetition
past tense needs to be carried through the whole sentence. |
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I usually jog about 10k. I usually jog a you could say that you jog a 10k or you could say that you jog 6.2 miles (or whatever it is in km), but you can’t mix the two |
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Since I haven’t did more than half year. Since I ha can also say "Since I hadn't been jogging in more than half a year" Since I haven’t d |
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I know the whole journey must be hard. I kn connected to previous sentence I know the |
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As result, I can’t complete the whole journey and my legs was so tired. As result, I c
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Today, I jog again the same distance, my legs still feel the pain. Today, I jog Today |
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At the end, I manage to complete the whole journey.
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I will rest one and start the day after. I will rest one day and start again the day after. I will rest one day and start |
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I really need to keep this habit to become stronger. |
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