May 24, 2024
Joel dicker
Today I've finished the book of Joel Dicker " La vérité sur l'affaire d'Harry Quebert" , from now on this book is the best I have ever read. From the start to the end it has kept me captivated by the story.
The author's writing is so good and I really appreciate that there is suspense until the last page. This Book is a story about two men they are both author and one day Harry will be accused of murder his friend Marcus who had probem because he has to write a new book but he didn't have any aspiration went to the city where Harry lives to help him.
In spite of all the rumors he will believe his friedn and starts to invistigate the case to find the real murder and the true about this history.
I'm too bad at explaining a story but this book s very incredible.
Many people told me that after reading this book they were not able to read another bokk without copared them to it.
Today I've finished the book of Joel Dicker " La vérité sur l'affaire d'Harry Quebert" , from now on this book is the best I have ever read.
Use the past simple tense (“I finished”) not the present perfect simple tense (“I’ve finished”) because it happened at a specific time in the past (“Today”)
This Bbook is a story about two men theywho are both author and os. One day, Harry will beis accused of murder and his friend Marcus who had a problem because he has to write a new book but he didn't have any aspiration so he went to the city where Harry lives to help him.
Don’t capitalize “book”. There is more than one “author” so add an “s”. And you need to use some connectives like “and” and “so”.
In spite of all the rumors he will believe his friednd and starts to inviestigate the case to find the real murderer and the trueth about this history.
Please write “murderer”, not “murder” and “truth”, not “true”.
I'm too bad at explaining a story but this book ’s very incredible.
Don’t forget the apostrophe :)
Many people told me that after reading this book they were not able to read another bokok without compareding them to it.
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This was great! I want to read this book now too! It sounds very exciting :) Nice English!
Joel dicker
Today I've finished the book of Joel Dicker " La vérité sur l'affaire d'Harry Quebert" , from now on this bookthis is the best I habook I've ever read.
mostly grammatically correct, just tweaking it a bit to make the sentence efficient. Also, see if you could translate the book's title to English
This Bbook is a story about two men, they are both author and os. One day, Harry will be accused of murder, and his friend Marcus who hads a problem because he has to write a new book, but he didn't have any aspiration, went to the city where Harry lives to help him.
lowercase "b' on book, since you've already mentioned the book remove "a story" and just put "is", plural on "authors'. Added a few commas
In spite of all the rumors he will believe his friednd, and starts to inviestigate the case in order to find the real murderer and the trueth about this history.
"friend", comma after friend, "murderer" as they are finding the person who committed the murder, replace "true" with "truth"
I'm too bad at explaining a story but this book is very incredible.
missed an "i" with "is"
Many people told me that after reading this book they were not able to read another bokok without compareding them to it.
"book" with two "o's" and one "k", change "copared" to "comparing"
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A good foundation, remember to see how and if a word should change depending on the context written, and always make sure to read your paragraphs twice before submitting.
Today I've finished the book of Joel Dicker " La vérité sur l'affaire d'Harry Quebert" , from now onby the author Joel Dicker, this book is the best book I have ever read.
Your vocabulary fits but it sounds to clanky and the phrases itself don't fit very well together.
From the start to the endfinish it hasd kept me captivated by the storyline.
You had a nice try but you need to keep everything in the past and you might need to learn positive and negatives of the same vocabulary i.e good, bad
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From the start to the end it has kept me captivated by the story. From the start to You had a nice try but you need to keep everything in the past and you might need to learn positive and negatives of the same vocabulary i.e good, bad |
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The author's writing is so good and I really appreciate that there is suspense until the last page. |
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This Book is a story about two men they are both author and one day Harry will be accused of murder his friend Marcus who had probem because he has to write a new book but he didn't have any aspiration went to the city where Harry lives to help him. This lowercase "b' on book, since you've already mentioned the book remove "a story" and just put "is", plural on "authors'. Added a few commas This Don’t capitalize “book”. There is more than one “author” so add an “s”. And you need to use some connectives like “and” and “so”. |
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Today I've finished the book of Joel Dicker " La vérité sur l'affaire d'Harry Quebert" , from now on this book is the best I have ever read. Today I've finished the book Your vocabulary fits but it sounds to clanky and the phrases itself don't fit very well together. Today I've finished the book of Joel Dicker " La vérité sur l'affaire d'Harry Quebert" , mostly grammatically correct, just tweaking it a bit to make the sentence efficient. Also, see if you could translate the book's title to English Today I Use the past simple tense (“I finished”) not the present perfect simple tense (“I’ve finished”) because it happened at a specific time in the past (“Today”) |
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In spite of all the rumors he will believe his friedn and starts to invistigate the case to find the real murder and the true about this history. In spite of all the rumors he will believe his frie "friend", comma after friend, "murderer" as they are finding the person who committed the murder, replace "true" with "truth" In spite of all the rumors he will believe his frie Please write “murderer”, not “murder” and “truth”, not “true”. |
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I'm too bad at explaining a story but this book s very incredible. I'm too bad at explaining a story but this book is very incredible. missed an "i" with "is" I'm too bad at explaining a story but this book Don’t forget the apostrophe :) |
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Many people told me that after reading this book they were not able to read another bokk without copared them to it. Many people told me that after reading this book they were not able to read another bo "book" with two "o's" and one "k", change "copared" to "comparing" Many people told me that after reading this book they were not able to read another bo |
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