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In order for title to matter, it should match other elements like salary, beneficials, mandates etc. There is no point at giving a high title, if his/her salary does not keep up with the accountabilitities. Because the ttile is final stage of a role. If it is not made up of necessary requirements. Companies cut corners giving employees high and important titles not to grant them salary which indicates how important job the employee do. To put it another way, salary and title must match.

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Job tTitles

In order for a title to matter, it should match other elements like salary, beneficials, mandates etc.

There is no point at giin having a high title, if his/herprestigious title, if the accompanying salary does not keep up with the accountaresponsibilitities.

Because the ttitle is final stage of a role.

If it is not made up of necessary requirements.

Companies cut corners giving employees high and important titles not, so that they don't have to grant them a better salary, which indicates how important jobthe job of the employee dois.

To put it another way, the salary and title must match.

Job tTitles

Proper capitalization in your title.

In order for a job title to matter, it should match other elements like salary, beneficials, mandatts, responsibilities, etc.

Add “a job title” for clarity.
Replace “beneficials” with “benefits.”
Replace “mandates” with “responsibilities” for natural phrasing.

There is no point atin giving a high title, if his/ther salary does not keep up with the accountaresponsibilitities.

Use “in giving” instead of “at giving.”
"Responsibilities" is mostly used when referring to a job.
Remove “his/her” for smoother phrasing.

Because tThe ttitle is the final stage of a role.

Remove “Because”
Fix spelling “ttile” → “title.”
Add “the” before “final stage.”

If it idoes not made up ofeet the necessary requirements.

“Made up of” is awkward here and “meet the necessary requirements” is clearer.

Companies cut corners, giving employees high and important titles not towithout granting them salary which indicates how important job the employee do.ies that reflect how important their jobs are.

Restructure for clarity and fix grammar. Please correct me if you meant another thing.

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Corrections are mostly about word choice, spelling, and sentence flow. Good job, keep writing! 🤍

It looks like more responsibility, but stagnant salary 😂

Job titles

In order for a title to matter, it should match other elements like salary, beneficialts, mandates, etc.

"Beneficial" is an adjective, but not a noun. Did you mean "benefits"?

There is no point atin giving a high title, if his/her salary does not keep up with the accountabilitities.

Recently, singular "they" has become popularly accepted as a way of talking about a single person who's gender is unknown. So you could say, "There is no point in giving a high title if their salary does not...", and people will know that you are talking about a single person (of unknown gender) despite using "they" or "them". Personally, this is what I would say myself, though there may still be groups of people who consider it to be bad grammar.

Because the ttitle is the final stage of a role.

What exactly do you mean by the "final stage of a role?"

If it is not made up of necessary requirements.

This sentence and the next should probably be connected.

Cthen companies will cut corners, giving employees high and important titles but not to granting them a salary which indicates how important of a job the employee does.

To put it another way, salary and title must match.

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Generally, you're on the right track. Though you may want to review definite ("the") and indefinite ("a"/"an") articles. But either way, good work!

Job tTitles

Title case is usually used for titles but not always, especially if it's a casual piece of writing.

In order for the title to matter, it should matcalign with other elements like salary, beneficialts, mandates etc responsibilities.

There is no point at giving a high title, if his/her salary does not keep up with the accountabilitities.

Typo

Because the ttitle ishould be the final stage ofin defining a role.

If it is not made up of necessary requirements.,

Connect this clause to the next clause with a comma to deliver your conclusion.

To put it another way, salary and title must matchbe aligned.

Match implies an exact similarity (eg. two blue socks) while align suggests being in agreement.

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Great writing. I could easily understand your points.

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Job tTitles

Title case is usually used for titles but not always, especially if it's a casual piece of writing.

Job tTitles

Proper capitalization in your title.

Job tTitles

In order for title to matter, it should match other elements like salary, beneficials, mandates etc.


In order for a title to matter, it should match other elements like salary, beneficialts, mandates, etc.

"Beneficial" is an adjective, but not a noun. Did you mean "benefits"?

In order for the title to matter, it should matcalign with other elements like salary, beneficialts, mandates etc responsibilities.

In order for a job title to matter, it should match other elements like salary, beneficials, mandatts, responsibilities, etc.

Add “a job title” for clarity. Replace “beneficials” with “benefits.” Replace “mandates” with “responsibilities” for natural phrasing.

In order for a title to matter, it should match other elements like salary, beneficials, mandates etc.

There is no point at giving a high title, if his/her salary does not keep up with the accountabilitities.


There is no point atin giving a high title, if his/her salary does not keep up with the accountabilitities.

Recently, singular "they" has become popularly accepted as a way of talking about a single person who's gender is unknown. So you could say, "There is no point in giving a high title if their salary does not...", and people will know that you are talking about a single person (of unknown gender) despite using "they" or "them". Personally, this is what I would say myself, though there may still be groups of people who consider it to be bad grammar.

There is no point at giving a high title, if his/her salary does not keep up with the accountabilitities.

Typo

There is no point atin giving a high title, if his/ther salary does not keep up with the accountaresponsibilitities.

Use “in giving” instead of “at giving.” "Responsibilities" is mostly used when referring to a job. Remove “his/her” for smoother phrasing.

There is no point at giin having a high title, if his/herprestigious title, if the accompanying salary does not keep up with the accountaresponsibilitities.

Because the ttile is final stage of a role.


Because the ttitle is the final stage of a role.

What exactly do you mean by the "final stage of a role?"

Because the ttitle ishould be the final stage ofin defining a role.

Because tThe ttitle is the final stage of a role.

Remove “Because” Fix spelling “ttile” → “title.” Add “the” before “final stage.”

Because the ttitle is final stage of a role.

If it is not made up of necessary requirements.


If it is not made up of necessary requirements.

This sentence and the next should probably be connected.

If it is not made up of necessary requirements.,

Connect this clause to the next clause with a comma to deliver your conclusion.

If it idoes not made up ofeet the necessary requirements.

“Made up of” is awkward here and “meet the necessary requirements” is clearer.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Companies cut corners giving employees high and important titles not to grant them salary which indicates how important job the employee do.


Cthen companies will cut corners, giving employees high and important titles but not to granting them a salary which indicates how important of a job the employee does.

Companies cut corners, giving employees high and important titles not towithout granting them salary which indicates how important job the employee do.ies that reflect how important their jobs are.

Restructure for clarity and fix grammar. Please correct me if you meant another thing.

Companies cut corners giving employees high and important titles not, so that they don't have to grant them a better salary, which indicates how important jobthe job of the employee dois.

To put it another way, salary and title must match.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

To put it another way, salary and title must matchbe aligned.

Match implies an exact similarity (eg. two blue socks) while align suggests being in agreement.

To put it another way, the salary and title must match.

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