Aug. 7, 2021
Job presentation stereotypes.
In many cases you cannot show yourself in a sincere way in work interview. The interviewers look at your clothes, the way you carry yourself, how you speak . They want a specific profile that fill-full their expectations, you know that and you give to them what they want, because you want success in your career and get your dream job.
Interviewers in charge selection process have different strategies or methods, but some of them are useless or outdated, because you can find them on the internet and you learn how used them. They have an old perception about clothes or tattoo linked to work. It is truth that your clothes speak about you, but that does not mean that formal or informal presentation makes you better professional or person. For example, the biggest corrupts are sophisticated and well look.
A lot of good workers or people lose the opportunity to show their capacities for superficial things. Maybe this kind of “weird” people are the most honest about, how are them and what they want. They are the kind of people that needs every organization and society for building something special with creativity and different perceptions of the world ,it is giving dynamism to the environment.
Are the clothes, the look, the posture enough for concluding someone capacity for a job?
Job presentation stereotypes.
In many cases you cannot show yourself in a sincere way in a work interview.
an indefinite article is needed before the noun
The interviewers look at your clothes, the way you carry yourself, and how you speak .
They want a specific profile that fill-fufulfills their expectations, you know that and you give to them what they want, because you want success in your career and to get your dream job.
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They have an old perception about clothes or tattoo linked to work.
It is truthe that your clothes speak about you, but that does not mean that formal or informal presentation makes you a better professional or person.
"To be true" is the correct phrase.
For example, the biggemost corrupted persons are sophisticated and well looklook well.
A lot of good workers or people lose the opportunity to show their capacities for superficial things.
Maybe thisese kinds of “weird” people are the most honest about, how are them who they are and what they want.
They are the kind of people that needs every organization and society needs for building something special with creativity and different perceptions of the world ,it is, giving dynamism to the environment.
Are the clothes, the look, the posture enough for concluding someone capacity for a job?
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The other correction gives you an idea of how a native English speaker might convey the same story, but my corrections focus only on grammar since your phrasing is still comprehensible (even if not in the same style as a native speaker). Good luck with your language journey!
Aug. 9, 2021
Thank you very much.
Job presentation sInterviews and Stereotypes.
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IThe interviewers in charge selection process have different strategies for methodpicking candidates, but some of them are useless or outdated, because you can find them on the internet and you learn how used them.
Alternative: instead of "because," you can also use "since."
They have an old perception abouta conservative attitude towards specific clothes or tattoo linked to works.
It is truth that your clothes speak about you, but that does not mean that formal or informal presentationWhile your clothes do show the world who you are, how you present yourself doesn't makes you a better or more professional or person.
For example, the biggest corrupts are sophisticated and well looklooks can be deceiving.
A lot of good workers or people lose thejob opportunity to show their capacities fories because of superficial thingreasons.
"workers or people" are repetitive, just workers is fine.
Maybe this kind of “weird” people are actually the most honest about, how are them who they are and what they want.
They are the kind of people that needs every organization and society for building something special withones that every society needs because of their creativity and different perceptions of the world ,it is giving dynamism to the environment. They make the world more interesting.
Are the clothes, the look, the posture enough for concludingappearances alone really enough to judge someone's capacbility for a job?
Aug. 8, 2021
Thank you.
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They want a specific profile that fill-full their expectations, you know that and you give to them what they want, because you want success in your career and get your dream job. They They want a specific profile that |
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Interviewers in charge selection process have different strategies or methods, but some of them are useless or outdated, because you can find them on the internet and you learn how used them.
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It is truth that your clothes speak about you, but that does not mean that formal or informal presentation makes you better professional or person.
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