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SummerTeaWater

Aug. 21, 2021

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Lakes in Mountains

I am currently watching YouTube about lakes in the mountains.

When I was young, my family used to travel to streams in the mountains.

There were clean and cold water, but not enough swimming.

One day, I heard that there are many beautiful streams in Rocky mountain.

One of the best scenes is lakes Louise on Rocky mountain, Canada.

When I had a chance to Canada, I visited there and it was totally blown away the scenes.

Of cource, the streams near the lake were also beautiful.

If I want to remind my memories there, I usually watch pictures and videos about Lake Louise.

If I have a chance, I will visit there again.

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SummerTeaWater

Aug. 22, 2021

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Lakes in Mountains


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I am currently watching YouTube about lakes in the mountains.


I am currently've been watching some YouTube about lakes in thevideos about mountain lakes. I've been watching some YouTube videos about mountain lakes.

"I've been watching..." sounds better when describing something you have done recently and continue to do.

When I was young, my family used to travel to streams in the mountains.


When I was young, my family used to travelake trips to streams in the mountains. When I was young, my family used to take trips to streams in the mountains.

"take trips" is sometimes more colloquial than "travel.

There were clean and cold water, but not enough swimming.


There wereas clean and cold water, but notit was not deep enough for swimming. There was clean and cold water, but it was not deep enough for swimming.

"was" instead of "were" because water is singular.

One day, I heard that there are many beautiful streams in Rocky mountain.


One day, I heard that there are many beautiful streams in the Rocky mMountains of Canada. One day, I heard that there are many beautiful streams in the Rocky Mountains of Canada.

One of the best scenes is lakes Louise on Rocky mountain, Canada.


One of the best scenmost beautiful places is lLakes Louise on, in the Rocky mMountain, Canadas. One of the most beautiful places is Lake Louise, in the Rocky Mountains.

"Scene" is a word more commonly used to describe a scene in a movie, not a scene in nature. In nature you can say "scenery" (for example, "The scenery in the countryside is very beautiful") but not scene.

When I had a chance to Canada, I visited there and it was totally blown away the scenes.


When I had athe chance to visit Canada, I visitedwent there and it was totally blown away by the scenesry. When I had the chance to visit Canada, I went there and was totally blown away by the scenery.

Of cource, the streams near the lake were also beautiful.


Of courcse, the streams near the lake were also beautiful. Of course, the streams near the lake were also beautiful.

If I want to remind my memories there, I usually watch pictures and videos about Lake Louise.


If I want to remind my memoriesself of my trip there, I usually watchlook at pictures andor videos aboutfrom Lake Louise. If I want to remind myself of my trip there, I usually look at pictures or videos from Lake Louise.

If I have a chance, I will visit there again.


If I have athe chance, I will visit there again. If I have the chance, I will visit there again.

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