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Mushroom Diary – After a Rain
Yesterday was rainy, all the day was rainy and cool.
Today a series of small, round mushrooms grew from the grass. Those mushrooms were yellow and brown.
The top of the mushroom was like an umbrella's peak, where the color was deepest, just like brown tree. From the top to the bottom, the color was
more and more lighter.
The color on the edge of the mushrooms was just pale.
Wet and soft, but also crispy，those mushrooms.
昨天下雨了，下了一天，凉丝丝。
今天草丛里长出一嘟噜，一嘟噜矮矮的黄棕色圆蘑菇。蘑菇伞尖尖的颜色最深，接近木棕色，由中心向伞边颜色渐浅，到边沿的地方近似米白色。
是润润的，又感觉脆脆的小蘑菇，
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Mushroom Diary – After a Rain
Yesterday was rainy,; all the day it was rainy and cool.
Yesterday was rainy; all day it was rainy and cool.
Today a series of small, round mushrooms grew [up] from the grass. Today a series of small, round mushrooms grew [up] from the grass.
Those mushrooms were yellow and brown.
The mushrooms were yellow and brown.
Using "those" sounds like you were comparing them to some other nearby mushrooms
The top of the mushroom, where the color was deepest, was like an umbrella's peak, where t. The color was deepest, just like the brown of a tree.
The top of the mushroom, where the color was deepest, was like an umbrella's peak. The color was just like the brown of a tree.
This is a surprisingly complicated sentence! It's easier to read if you break it up like this.
From the top to the bottom, the color wasgot
From the top to the bottom, the color got
more and morelighter and lighter.
lighter and lighter.
The color on the edge of the mushrooms was just pale.
WThey were wet and soft, but also crispy，those mushrooms.
They were wet and soft, but also crispy.
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Mushroom Diary – After a Rain This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Yesterday was rainy, all the day was rainy and cool.
Yesterday was rainy |
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Today a series of small, round mushrooms grew from the grass. Today a series of small, round mushrooms grew [up] from the grass. Today a series of small, round mushrooms grew [up] from the grass. |
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Those mushrooms were yellow and brown.
Th Using "those" sounds like you were comparing them to some other nearby mushrooms |
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The top of the mushroom was like an umbrella's peak, where the color was deepest, just like brown tree.
The top of the mushroom, where the color was deepest, was like an umbrella's peak This is a surprisingly complicated sentence! It's easier to read if you break it up like this. |
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From the top to the bottom, the color was
From the top to the bottom, the color |
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more and more lighter.
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The color on the edge of the mushrooms was just pale. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Wet and soft, but also crispy，those mushrooms.
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