Feb. 11, 2020
Right now i'm watching a photo that i searched in google image and in that there's a woman with long hair and with her's hands raised towards a pc,
She are dressing a yellow shirt and had the free hair in one side of her body, to be precise she had the hair in the left side of her body.
Who is she? (present)
I suppose she is human resources employee, She look like happy because is smiling maybe is writing a important document or is chatting with someone important person even i thought she is writing with her boyfriend.
What were she doing?(past)
I don't know, i'm not sure, but i suppose she were writing. That is looking like
Where were she?(past)
It was look like her job because she is dressing nice clothes as be working in her home. Exist the possibility she was in a coworking space.
Why are she doing that? (future)
Because it's her job, she want to finish it because she is planning a travel with theirs friends. I think she is gonna buying the tickets to trip toward California or other american city or maybe she'll travel to europe, australia, there's soo many places to know. Is a good idea learn a new language and then go to a country where people talk with.
When will she travel? (future)
She'll travel maybe in her holidays when finish with all her works. She gonna try to finish so many fast how she'll can for after take time and prepare all the task she had to finishing before the travel.
Practicing the writing with a useful technicque: The 5 "w"W"s
Practicing writing with a useful technique: The 5 "W"s
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Right now, I'm looking at a photo that I found/looked up on Google Images. In the photo, there's a woman with long hair, and her hands are raised toward a PC.
She are dressis wearing a yellow shirt, and had the free hair in one side of her body, to be precise she had the hair iner hair falls to the left side of her body.
She is wearing a yellow shirt, and her hair falls to the left side of her body.
Who is she?
(present)
I suppose she is a human resources employee,. She look likeseems happy because she is smiling mayb. Maybe she is writing an important document or is chatting with someone important person even i thought she is. I even think that she might be writing withto her boyfriend.
I suppose she is a human resources employee. She seems happy because she is smiling. Maybe she is writing an important document or is chatting with someone important. I even think that she might be writing to her boyfriend.
What wereas she doing?
What was she doing?
(past)
I don't know, i'm not sure, but iI suppose she wereas writing.
I'm not sure, but I suppose she was writing.
That is looking's what it seems like.
That's what it seems like.
Where wereas she?
Where was she?
(past)
It was looked like her jobshe was at her job rather than at home because she iwas dressed ing nice clothes as be working in her home.
It looked like she was at her job rather than at home because she was dressed in nice clothes.
ExistThere is also the possibility that she was in a coworking space.
There is also the possibility that she was in a coworking space.
Why areis she doing that?
Why is she doing that?
BShe's doing it because it' is her job, s. She wants to finish it because she is planning ato travel with theirsher friends.
She's doing it because it is her job. She wants to finish it because she is planning to travel with her friends.
I think she is gonna buying theing to buy tickets tofor a trip toward California or another aAmerican city, or maybe she'll travel to eEurope, a or Australia, t. There's are soo many places to knowshe could go.
I think she is going to buy tickets for a trip to California or another American city, or maybe she'll travel to Europe or Australia. There are so many places she could go.
It is a good idea to learn a new language and then go to a country where people talk withspeak that language and talk to them.
It is a good idea to learn a new language and then go to a country where people speak that language and talk to them.
When will she travel?
(future)
SMaybe she'll travel maybe during her holidays, when she finish withes all her works.
Maybe she'll travel during her holidays, when she finishes all her work.
She's gonnaing to try to finish so many fast how she'll can for after take time and prepareing all the task she had to finishing before the travels that she must do before traveling very quickly.
She's going to try to finish preparing all the tasks that she must do before traveling very quickly.
Practicing the writing with a useful technicque: The 5 "w"
Practicing the writing with a useful technique: The 5 "w"
Right now i'm watchinglooking at a photo that i searched ion google images and in thait there's a woman with long hair and with her's hands raised towards a pc,.
Right now i'm looking at a photo that i searched on google images and in it there's a woman with long hair and her hands raised towards a pc.
You can only "watch" something that's moving, like a video or a person, not a picture.
She areis dressing a yellow shirt and had the free hair is her hair down on one side of her body, to be precise she had the hair ion the left side of her body.
She is dressing a yellow shirt and has her hair down on one side of her body, to be precise on the left side of her body.
I'm not sure what you mean by "had the free hair." My correction means that her hair falls down over one side of her body.
Who is she?
(present)
I suppose she is a human resources employee, She look likes happy because she is smiling m. Maybe she is writing a important document or is chatting with someone important person. I even i thought she iwas writing with her boyfriend.
I suppose she is a human resources employee, She looks happy because she is smiling. Maybe she is writing a important document or chatting with someone important. I even thought she was writing with her boyfriend.
I changed "is" to "was" in the last sentence because even if she still is writing, if "I thought" is in past tense the rest of the sentence usually needs to be in past tense too.
What wereas she doing?
What was she doing?
"were" is plural, but she's only one person.
(past)
I don't know, i'm not sure, but i suppose she wereas writing.
I don't know, i'm not sure, but i suppose she was writing.
Having both "I don't know" and "I'm not sure" works, but most of the time you would only use one of those.
That's what ist lookings like.
That's what it looks like.
I can't really tell what you mean here. This correction means that it looks like the last sentence is true.
Where wereas she?
Where was she?
(past)
It was looks like her job because she iwas dressinged in too nice clothes asto be working in her home.
It looks like her job because she was dressed in too nice clothes to be working in her home.
Exist theIt's possibilityle she was in a coworking space.
It's possible she was in a coworking space.
This phrase "There exists the possibility" exists, but it's very rare.
Why arewill she doing that?
Why will she do that?
I assume you want future tense here
(future)
Because it's her job, she will want to finish it because she is planning a travel with theirsher friends.
Because it's her job, she will want to finish it because she is planning a travel with her friends.
I think she is gonna buying the tickets to trip towardvisit California or another aAmerican city, or maybe she'll travel to eEurope, aor Australia, there's soo many places to knowgo.
I think she is gonna buy tickets to visit California or another American city, or maybe she'll travel to Europe, or Australia, there's soo many places to go.
I didn't correct this, but California isn't a city. Some big cities in California are San Francisco and Los Angeles.
It's a good idea learn a new language and then go to a country where people talspeak with.
It's a good idea learn a new language and then go to a country where people speak it.
Every sentence in English needs a subject. If it doesn't seem like there would be a subject, use "it."
When will she travel?
(future)
SMaybe she'll travel maybe in her holidays when she finishes with all her works.
Maybe she'll travel in her holidays when she finishes with all her work.
She is gonna try to finish aso many fast howas she'll can for afterso she can take time after and prepare all the tasks she hads to finishing before the travelip.
She is gonna try to finish as fast as she can so she can take time after and prepare all the tasks she has to finish before the trip.
Feedback
You made some mistakes with grammar, but I can understand almost all of it. Your vocabulary is good, and this seems like a helpful exercise. Good job!
Practicing the writing with a useful technicque: The 5 "w"W"s
Practicing writing with a useful technique: The 5 "W"s
Right now, i'm watchinglooking at a photo that iI searched in gGoogle iImage and in that there's. It is a woman with long hair and with her's hands raisstretched towards a pc,PC.
Right now, i'm looking at a photo that I searched in Google Images. It is a woman with long hair and with her hands stretched towards a PC.
She areis dressed ing a yellow shirt and had the freer hair iwas on one side of her body, t. To be precise she had the hair i, it was on the left side of her body.
She is dressed in a yellow shirt and her hair was on one side of her body. To be precise, it was on the left side of her body.
Who is she?
(present)
I suppose she is a human resources employee,. She look likes happy because she is smiling m. Maybe she is writing an important document or is chatting with someone important person even i though, but I think that she is writing withto her boyfriend.
I suppose she is a human resources employee. She looks happy because she is smiling. Maybe she is writing an important document or is chatting with someone important, but I think that she is writing to her boyfriend.
What wereas she doing?
What was she doing?
(past)
I don't know, iI'm not sure, but iI suppose she wereas writing.
I don't know, I'm not sure, but I suppose she was writing.
That is looking like
Where wereas she?
Where was she?
(past)
It was looks like she is at her job because she is dressed ing nice clothes, as bcompared to what she would be dressed in if she were working in her home.
It looks like she is at her job because she is dressed in nice clothes, as compared to what she would be dressed in if she were working in her home.
working in her home. → working from home.
works as well
Exist the possibilityIt is possible that she was in a co-working space.
It is possible that she was in a co-working space.
Why areis she doing that?
Why is she doing that?
(futurepresent)
(present)
(future) only when you talk about the trip to California
Because it's her job, and she wants to finish it because she is planning a travel with theirsher friends.
Because it's her job, and she wants to finish it because she is planning a travel with her friends.
I think she is gonnaing to buying the tickets to trip towardfor California or some other aAmerican city or m. Maybe she'lls travelling to eEurope, aAustralia, or even somewhere else - there's stoo many places to know.
I think she is going to buy the tickets for California or some other American city. Maybe she's travelling to Europe, Australia, or even somewhere else - there's too many places.
gonna is spoken/informal language, which does not fit in this passage.
It is a good idea to learn a new language and then go to a country where people talk wuse ith.
It is a good idea to learn a new language and go to a country where people use it.
When will she travel?
(future)
She'll may travel maybe in her holidays when she is finished with all her works.
She may travel in her holidays when she is finished with all her work.
She gonna try to finish so many fast how she'll can for after take time and prepare all the tis probably going to finish as fast ask she had to finishingcan before the travel.
She is probably going to finish as fast as she can before the travel.
Feedback
Well done! Work on your tenses, especially "to (base form of verb)" and is/are/was/were plural/singular
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Right now i'm watching a photo that i searched in google image and in that there's a woman with long hair and with her's hands raised towards a pc,
Right now, i'm
Right now i'm You can only "watch" something that's moving, like a video or a person, not a picture.
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She are dressing a yellow shirt and had the free hair in one side of her body, to be precise she had the hair in the left side of her body.
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She I'm not sure what you mean by "had the free hair." My correction means that her hair falls down over one side of her body.
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I suppose she is human resources employee, She look like happy because is smiling maybe is writing a important document or is chatting with someone important person even i thought she is writing with her boyfriend.
I suppose she is a human resources employee
I suppose she is a human resources employee, She look I changed "is" to "was" in the last sentence because even if she still is writing, if "I thought" is in past tense the rest of the sentence usually needs to be in past tense too.
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What were she doing?
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I don't know, i'm not sure, but i suppose she were writing.
I don't know,
I don't know, i'm not sure, but i suppose she w Having both "I don't know" and "I'm not sure" works, but most of the time you would only use one of those.
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That is looking like
That's what i I can't really tell what you mean here. This correction means that it looks like the last sentence is true.
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It was look like her job because she is dressing nice clothes as be working in her home.
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Exist the possibility she was in a coworking space.
This phrase "There exists the possibility" exists, but it's very rare.
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Why are she doing that?
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Because it's her job, she want to finish it because she is planning a travel with theirs friends.
Because it's her job, and she wants to finish it because she is planning a travel with
Because it's her job, she will want to finish it because she is planning a travel with
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I think she is gonna buying the tickets to trip toward California or other american city or maybe she'll travel to europe, australia, there's soo many places to know.
I think she is go gonna is spoken/informal language, which does not fit in this passage.
I think she is gonna buy I didn't correct this, but California isn't a city. Some big cities in California are San Francisco and Los Angeles.
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Is a good idea learn a new language and then go to a country where people talk with.
It is a good idea to learn a new language and
It's a good idea learn a new language and then go to a country where people Every sentence in English needs a subject. If it doesn't seem like there would be a subject, use "it."
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She'll travel maybe in her holidays when finish with all her works.
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She gonna try to finish so many fast how she'll can for after take time and prepare all the task she had to finishing before the travel.
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