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A bad day

Depression prepared me from going to uni until a years ago. I drank medicines and received counseling. My condition is recovering few and few so stopped go to clinic . Today I would go uni. I was makeup spend for long time and wear my favorite outfits in order to feeling up but l arrived station and many people are place where caused nausea and panic. And then I couldn't go uni. It was so sad, my feeling was down.
After I went to clinic and received some medicines. I could go a weeks ago. Why I can’t go to uni. I want to grow myself and skills.I want to try Many things by graduation. I want to do my best for dream . But it’s unsuccessful. Mind and body can’t keep up. I’m so frustrating because it’s much difference between my ideal and my real. I’m gonna cry.

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A bad day


Depression prepared me from going to uni until a years ago.


Depression preparvented me from going to university until a few years ago. Depression prevented me from going to university until a few years ago.

Depression preparvented me from going to uni until a few years ago. Depression prevented me from going to uni until a few years ago.

Depression preparvented me from going to uni until a years ago. Depression prevented me from going to uni until a years ago.

Other words you might use here could be: "stopped", "prohibited"

Depression preparvented me from going to uUni until a few years ago. Depression prevented me from going to Uni until a few years ago.

Depression preparvented me from going to uni until a years ago. Depression prevented me from going to uni until a years ago.

Prepare is like 整える Prevent in this case is like 阻む

I drank medicines and received counseling.


I drantook medicines and received counseling. I took medicines and received counseling.

I drantook medicines and received counseling. I took medicine and received counseling.

I drantook medicinesation and received counseling. I took medication and received counseling.

"To drink medicine" is grammatically correct but uncommon. It is more common to say "to take medication"

I dranktried medicineations and received counseling. I tried medications and received counseling.

I drantook medicines and received counseling. I took medicines and received counseling.

We normally say "took medicine" rather than "drank medicine" in English.

My condition is recovering few and few so stopped go to clinic .


My condition is recovering few and few soslowly and I have gradually stopped going to the clinic . My condition is recovering slowly and I have gradually stopped going to the clinic.

My condition is recovering few and fewlittle by little, so I stopped going to clinic . My condition is recovering little by little, so I stopped going to clinic .

My condition is recovering few and fewimproving bit by bit so I stopped going to the clinic . My condition is improving bit by bit so I stopped going to the clinic.

"Little by little" or "bit by bit" is the correct phrase rather than "few by few". "Little/bit" refers to an amount (cannot be counted, e.g. a little water, a bit of bread) whereas "few" refers to a quantity (can be counted, e.g. a few friends). Also, you would use "recovering" in the context of a person (e.g. I am recovering) rather than a condition, which you might say is "improving" (e.g. his health is improving).

My condition is recovering few and fewwas not improving steadily so I stopped go toing to the clinic . My condition was not improving steadily so I stopped going to the clinic .

My condition is recovering few and fewslowly but surely so I stopped go to clinic . My condition is recovering slowly but surely so I stopped go to clinic .

few is about quantity. I think "slowly but surely" fits the piece better.

Today I would go uni.


Today, I would go uni/ will go to university. Today, I would/ will go to university.

Today I would gas supposed to go to uni. Today I was supposed to go to uni.

Today I would gas going to go to uni. Today I was going to go to uni.

I presume from your story that you didn't make it to uni. So, your intention was to go to university.

Today I would gam going to uUni. Today I am going to Uni.

Today I decided I would go to uni. Today I decided I would go to uni.

Today I would go to uni makes it sounds like a statement saying that in the (distant) past it would be challenging, but today you're confident it would be different. I think reading the later parts of this piece, you're describing a single occasion?

I was makeup spend for long time and wear my favorite outfits in order to feeling up but l arrived station and many people are place where caused nausea and panic.


I was makeup spend for long timespent a long time doing my makeup and wearore my favorite outfits in order to feeling up but better, but when l arrived at the station and, many people awere there place where. This caused me to be nauseaous and I panic.ked. I spent a long time doing my makeup and wore my favorite outfit in order to feel better, but when l arrived at the station, many people were there place. This caused me to be nauseous and I panicked.

I was makeup spend for long timespent a long time doing my makeup and wearore my favorite outfits in order to so I could feeling up but l arrived station and many people are placto the task. However, when l arrived at the train station, there was a lot of people whereich caused nausea and panicme to panic and feel nauseous. I spent a long time doing my makeup and wore my favorite outfit so I could feel up to the task. However, when l arrived at the train station, there was a lot of people which caused me to panic and feel nauseous.

I was makeup spend for long time and wearspent a long time doing makeup and wore one of my favorite outfits in order to feeling up but l arrived station andto it. But when I arrived at the station, there were so many people are placthere whereich caused nausea and panicme to panic and feel nauseous. I spent a long time doing makeup and wore one of my favorite outfits in order to feel up to it. But when I arrived at the station, there were so many people there which caused me to panic and feel nauseous.

I wasdid my makeup spend for a long time and wearore my favorite outfits in order to feeling up good, but l arrived station and many people are place where causedat the station. The station was crowded and caused a sense of nausea and panic. I did my makeup for a long time and wore my favorite outfits in order to feel good, but l arrived at the station. The station was crowded and caused a sense of nausea and panic.

I was makeup spend for long timespent a lot of time applying makeup and wearore my favorite outfits in order to feeling up but better, but when l arrived at the station and many people awere place where causedthere it made me nauseaous and panic.ked I spent a lot of time applying makeup and wore my favorite outfit in order to feel better, but when l arrived at the station and many people were there it made me nauseous and panicked

I took a guess at the intended meaning, the grammar here was kind of unclear. Some points: "spent a lot of time" is a standard staying for something taking a lot of time but it isn't used as a suffix. An outfit is a collection of clothes you wear together. When you're talking about something you're wearing, then all the clothes you're wearing together count as one outfit. "outfits" would be more used if you're looking at different sets of clothes in your wardrobe and deciding which to wear. In English, we don't really describe her personal emotions passively. It sounds more normal to describe the affect on you in the first person rather than just saying the situation caused certain feelings.

And then I couldn't go uni.


And then, I couldn't go unito university. And then, I couldn't go to university.

And then I couldn't go to uni. And I couldn't go to uni.

Don't forget to include the "to" after "go". Also, you might want to combine this with the previous sentence rather than have a new one.

And then I couldn't go uUni. I couldn't go Uni.

And then I couldn't go to uni. And then I couldn't go to uni.

You "go to X" for locations, you "go Y" for activities. Uni counts as a location. You could say "I couldn't go swimming" for example, but "I couldn't go to the beach".

It was so sad, my feeling was down.


It was so sad, I amy feeling was down. It was so sad, I am feeling down.

It was so sad, my feeling was and I felt really down. I was so sad and I felt really down.

It was so sad, myI feeling wast really down. It was so sad, I felt really down.

You might say "I felt really down" rather than "my feeling was down"

It was so sad, my feeling was downdevastated, my mood was ruined. It was devastated, my mood was ruined.

It was so sad, myI was feeling was down. It was so sad, I was feeling down.

After I went to clinic and received some medicines.


After wards, I went to the clinic and received some medicines. Afterwards, I went to the clinic and received some medicines.

After this experience, I went to clinic and received some medicines. After this experience, I went to clinic and received some medicine.

After wards I went to the clinic and received some medicinesation. Afterwards I went to the clinic and received some medication.

Remember to add an article ("a" or "the") after "to" and before "clinic" depending on whether you want to say you visited a specific clinic ("the") or just a random one ("a"). You also might want to specify the type of clinic: mental health clinic, pharmacy, GP (general practitioner).

After , I went to a clinic and received some medicineore medications. After, I went to a clinic and received some more medications.

After that I went to the/a clinic and received some medicines. After that I went to the/a clinic and received some medicines.

You need an article before most locations for words like "went to" / "go to". There's a small set of locations where you can omit an article because they're also treated as general concepts (school, work, uni) but most will need a "the" or "a".

I could go a weeks ago.


I could go a few weeks ago. I could go a few weeks ago.

I could go a few weeks ago. I could go a few weeks ago.

I could go a few weeks ago. I could go a few weeks ago.

Here you would add "few" before "weeks" since you could go to university a number of weeks ago and a number can be counted ("few" not "little").

I could go a weeks ago. I could go a week ago.

Why I can’t go to uni.


Why I can’t go to uni.the university? Why I can’t go to the university?

Why I can’t't I go to uni.? Why can't I go to uni?

Why I can’t I go to uni. Why can’t I go to uni.

When using question words, the "subject" goes after "can" but in a normal sentence, it comes before. For example: "What can I do? You can do this."

Why I can’t go to uUni.? Why I can’t go to Uni?

Why I can’t go to uni.? Why I can’t go to uni?

I want to grow myself and skills.I want to try Many things by graduation.


I want to growimprove myself and my skills. I want to try Mmany things byefore (my) graduation. I want to improve myself and my skills. I want to try many things before (my) graduation.

I want to grow myself and skills. I want to try Mso many things byefore graduation. I want to grow myself and skills. I want to try so many things before graduation.

I want to grow myself andand develop my skills. I want to try Mmany things byefore graduation. I want to grow and develop my skills. I want to try many things before graduation.

You don't need to say "myself" here as "grow" refers to "I". I included "develop" for skills since it is more common to say "develop skills" than "grow skills". It's also more correct to say "before graduation" rather than "by graduation".

I want to grow myself andas a person and improve my skills.I want to try Mmany things by the time I graduatione. I want to grow as a person and improve my skills.I want to try many things by the time I graduate.

I want to grow myself and my skills. I want to try Mmany things by graduation. I want to grow myself and my skills. I want to try many things by graduation.

I want to do my best for dream .


I want to do my best for my dream s. I want to do my best for my dreams.

I want to do my best forto accomplish my dream .s, I want to do my best to accomplish my dreams,

I want to do my best forto achieve my dream s. I want to do my best to achieve my dreams.

I want to do my best forto accomplish my dream s. I want to do my best to accomplish my dreams.

I want to do my best for my dream s. I want to do my best for my dreams.

But it’s unsuccessful.


Bbut it’sI'm unsuccessful. but I'm unsuccessful.

But it’I was unsuccessful. But I was unsuccessful.

But it’sI have been unsuccessful. But I have been unsuccessful.

But it’sI'm unsuccessful. But I'm unsuccessful.

Mind and body can’t keep up.


My mind and body can’t keep up. My mind and body can’t keep up.

My mind and body can’t keep up. My mind and body can’t keep up.

My mind and body can’t keep up. My mind and body can’t keep up.

My mind and body can’t keep up. My mind and body can’t keep up.

I’m so frustrating because it’s much difference between my ideal and my real.


I’m so frustratinged because it’s muchthere's a big difference between my ideal and my real self. I’m frustrated because there's a big difference between my ideal and real self.

I’m so frustrating because it’there is msuch a big difference between my ideal and my reality. I’m so frustrating because there is such a big difference between my ideal and my reality.

I’m so frustrating because it’there's msuch a difference between my ideal and my real. I’m so frustrating because there's such a difference between my ideal and my real.

I would say generally that "my real" doesn't usually work in this context. But, it's very poetic and rhymes with "ideal", so if that's what you are going for, I say it works!

I’m so frustratinged because it’s mucha big difference between my ideal vision and my reality. I’m so frustrated because it’s a big difference between my ideal vision and my reality.

I’m so frustrating because it’s much difference between my ideal and my real. I’m so frustrating because it’s much difference between my ideal and my real.

If something is frustrating, it is causing frustration for you someone else. If you want to describe the experience of feeling frustration, you use "frustrated".

I’m gonna cry.


I’m gonna cry. I’m gonna cry.

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