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Moments of frustration

After a tiresome day of English exam, I come back to my room and throw myself onto my bed, tired and yet somewhat relieved. Troubling doubts are still lingering in my head but I try to forget how I did in the exam; there's no use of thinking back what I did right or wrong - it would only worsen my overthinking. I just comfort myself by saying I can do better in the next exam.
But "WHEN?" I ask myself back. I have been giving the same excuses for many times, saying I would try hard next time. I would be more discipline next time. I would follow my routine next time. However, that "next time" never come and I have been stuck in this endless circle. This sudden realization makes me feel so miserable. The truth is just too painful to accept.
Promptly, I get up from the bed. I still have math test tomorrow. And I have two option to decide - right now or next time. I repeat to my self: there's no reason to be doubting myself or regretting what can't be fixed. I should do right now if I don't want to feel like this in the future.
I took my open my laptop and clicked Youtube. When I scroll down to select a calm playlist to listen, a song pops up on the screen. It says "you are ready to move on(Playlist)". It is perfect. Yes, what is need right now is "to move on", not from relationship problems or a miserable job like others, but from my habits of procrastination and anxiety. If I want to escape from this distressing loop of "next time", I have to start right now. There is no another time.

# I seem to be repeating the phrase "right now " for many times. Can you suggest me alternative words?
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I just comfort myself by saying I can do better in the next exam.

But "WHEN?"

I ask myself back.

I would follow my routine next time.

The truth is just too painful to accept.

Promptly, I get up from the bed.

It is perfect.

If I want to escape from this distressing loop of "next time", I have to start right now.

There is no another time.

# I truly appreciate your corrections.

They really help me to improve my writing.

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And I have two option to decide - right now or next time.


And I have two options to decide on - right now or next time. And I have two options to decide on - right now or next time.

(1) "Two" is plural, so it should be "options". (2) The expression is "decide on an option". Alternatively: "And I have two options to choose from".

And I have two options to decide - right now or next time. And I have two options to decide - right now or next time.

I repeat to my self: there's no reason to be doubting myself or regretting what can't be fixed.


I repeat to my self: there's no reason to be doubting myself or regretting what can't be fixedundone. I repeat to myself: there's no reason to be doubting myself or regretting what can't be undone.

"Fixed" is understandable, but in this context, "undone" might be a better choice of word.

I repeat to my self: there's no reason to be doubting myself or regretting what can't be fixed. I repeat to myself: there's no reason to be doubting myself or regretting what can't be fixed.

I repeat to my self: there's no reason to be doubting myself or regretting what can't be fixed. I repeat to myself: there's no reason to be doubting myself or regretting what can't be fixed.

Promptly, I get up from the bed.


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Promptly, I get up from the bed. Promptly, I get up from bed.

I still have math test tomorrow.


I still have a math test tomorrow. I still have a math test tomorrow.

A determiner is expected here.

I still have my math test tomorrow. I still have my math test tomorrow.

This sudden realization makes me feel so miserable.


The truth is just too painful to accept.


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Moments of frustration


Moments of fFrustration Moments of Frustration

It might be good to obey title capitalisation rules, though this is just a minor issue.

After a tiresome day of English exam, I come back to my room and throw myself onto my bed, tired and yet somewhat relieved.


After a tiresome day of the English exam, I come back to my room and throw myself onto my bed, tired and yet somewhat relieved. After a tiresome day of the English exam, I come back to my room and throw myself onto my bed, tired and yet somewhat relieved.

After a tiresome day ofwith an English exam, I come back to my room and throw myself onto my bed, tired andbut yet somewhat relieved. After a tiresome day with an English exam, I come back to my room and throw myself onto my bed, tired but yet somewhat relieved.

(1) Alternatively: "After a tiresome day of English exams", if there was more than one exam. (2) I'd recommend the use of "but" here, since "yet" suggests that you're introducing a contrasting clause.

After a tiresome day of English exam,s I come back to my room and throw myself onto my bed, tired and yet somewhat relieved. After a tiresome day of English exams I come back to my room and throw myself onto my bed, tired and yet somewhat relieved.

Troubling doubts are still lingering in my head but I try to forget how I did in the exam; there's no use of thinking back what I did right or wrong - it would only worsen my overthinking.


Troubling doubts are still lingering in my head but I try to forget how I did in the exam; there's no use of thinking back (about) what I did right or wrong - it would only worsen my overthinking. Troubling doubts are still lingering in my head but I try to forget how I did in the exam; there's no use of thinking back (about) what I did right or wrong - it would only worsen my overthinking.

Troubling doubts are still lingering in my head but I try to forget how I did in the exam; there's no use of thinking back on what I did right or wrong - it would only worsen my overthinking. Troubling doubts are still lingering in my head but I try to forget how I did in the exam; there's no use of thinking back on what I did right or wrong - it would only worsen my overthinking.

(1) Alternatively: "I try to forget about my performance in the exam". (2) The phrase is "think back on".

Troubling doubts are still lingering in my head but I try to forget how I did in the exam; there's no use of thinking back what I did right or wrong - it would only worsen my overthinking. Troubling doubts are still lingering in my head but I try to forget how I did in the exam; there's no use of thinking back what I did right or wrong - it would only worsen my overthinking.

"it would only make my overthinking worse" sounds more natural

I just comfort myself by saying I can do better in the next exam.


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But "WHEN?"


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But "WHEN?" I ask myself. But "WHEN?" I ask myself.

I ask myself back.


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I ask myself back.

I have been giving the same excuses for many times, saying I would try hard next time.


I have been giving the same excuses for many times, saying I would try hard next time. I have been giving the same excuses many times, saying I would try hard next time.

I have been giving the same excuses for many times, saying I would try harder next time. I have been giving the same excuses many times, saying I would try harder next time.

I have been giving the same excuses for many times, saying that I would try hard next time. I have been giving the same excuses many times, saying that I would try hard next time.

I would be more discipline next time.


I would be more disciplined next time. I would be more disciplined next time.

I would be more disciplined next time. I would be more disciplined next time.

"Discipline" is a noun. "Disciplined" is the adjective.

I would be more disciplined next time. I would be more disciplined next time.

I would follow my routine next time.


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However, that "next time" never come and I have been stuck in this endless circle.


However, that "next time" never comes and I have been stuck in this endless cirycle. However, that "next time" never comes and I have been stuck in this endless cycle.

(1) 'That "next time"' is singular, so it should be "comes" and not "come". (2) Alternatively: "I have been stuck in this vicious cycle." "Vicious cycle" is a common expression as well.

However, that "next time" never comes and I have been stuck in this endless circle/ vicious cycle. However, that "next time" never comes and I have been stuck in this endless circle/ vicious cycle.

However, that "next time" never comes and I have been stuck in this endless circle. However, that "next time" never comes and I have been stuck in this endless circle.

I should do right now if I don't want to feel like this in the future.


I should do something/it right now if I don't want to feel like this in the future. I should do something/it right now if I don't want to feel like this in the future.

The object in the phrase "I should do" is missing.

I should do something right now if I don't want to feel like this in the future. I should do something right now if I don't want to feel like this in the future.

I should do this right now if I don't want to feel like this in the future. I should do this right now if I don't want to feel like this in the future.

I took my open my laptop and clicked Youtube.


I took myake and open my laptop and clicked (on) YoutTube. I take and open my laptop and click (on) YouTube.

(1) You've been writing in the present tense this whole time, so for consistency, "took" and "clicked" should also be in the present tense. (2) "YouTube" is the proper capitalisation.

I took my open my laptop and opened, clicked on Youtube. I took my laptop and opened, clicked on Youtube.

I took my opened my laptop and clicked Youtube. I opened my laptop and clicked Youtube.

When I scroll down to select a calm playlist to listen, a song pops up on the screen.


When I scroll down to select a calm playlist to listen to, a song pops up on the screen. When I scroll down to select a calm playlist to listen to, a song pops up on the screen.

When I scrolled down to select a calm playlist to listen, to a song popsped up on the screen. When I scrolled down to select a calm playlist to listen to a song popped up on the screen.

When I scroll down to select a calm playlist to listen to, a song pops up on the screen. When I scroll down to select a calm playlist to listen to, a song pops up on the screen.

It says "you are ready to move on(Playlist)".


It says "you are ready to move on(P (playlist)". It says "you are ready to move on (playlist)".

It saysid "you are ready to move on(Playlist)". It said "you are ready to move on(Playlist)".

It says "you are ready to move on (Playlist)". It says "you are ready to move on (Playlist)".

It is perfect.


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It iwas perfect. It was perfect.

Yes, what is need right now is "to move on", not from relationship problems or a miserable job like others, but from my habits of procrastination and anxiety.


Yes, what ismy need right now is "to move on", not from relationship problems or a miserable job like others, but from my habits of procrastination and anxiety. Yes, what my need right now is "to move on", not from relationship problems or a miserable job like others, but from my habits of procrastination and anxiety.

Yes, what isI need right now is "to move on", n." Not from relationship problems or a miserable job like others, but from my habits of procrastination and anxiety. Yes, what I need right now is "to move on." Not from relationship problems or a miserable job like others, but from my habits of procrastination and anxiety.

Yes, what isI need right now is "to move on", not from relationship problems or a miserable job like others, but from my habits of procrastination and anxiety. Yes, what I need right now is "to move on", not from relationship problems or a miserable job like others, but from my habits of procrastination and anxiety.

The phrase is "what I need", similar to "what I require", "what I want", "what I said", etc. Perhaps you meant to write "what is needed right now is...", but since this phrase doesn't tell us who is the one with said need, it's still better to clarify with "I".

If I want to escape from this distressing loop of "next time", I have to start right now.


If I want to escape from this distressing loop of "next time"," I have to start right now. If I want to escape from this distressing loop of "next time," I have to start right now.

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There is no another time.


There is no "another time." There is no "another time."

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# I seem to be repeating the phrase "right now " for many times.


# I seem to be repeating the phrase "right now " for many times. # I seem to be repeating the phrase "right now " many times.

# I seem to be repeating the phrase "right now " for" many times. # I seem to be repeating the phrase "right now" many times.

# I seem to be repeating the phrase "right now " for" many times. # I seem to be repeating the phrase "right now" many times.

Can you suggest me alternative words?


Can you suggest me (some) alternative words? Can you suggest me (some) alternative words?

"At the moment", "currently", "this time" are some options that I can think of right now lol.

Can you suggest me alternative words? Can you suggest alternative words?

Can you suggest to me alternative words? Can you suggest to me alternative words?

Strictly speaking, "suggest me" is ungrammatical, though it may be slowly becoming acceptable due to growing usage. For now, though, I'd still recommend writing with unequivocally correct grammar.

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They really help me to improve my writing.


They really help me to improve my writing. They really help me improve my writing.

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However, that "next time" never came and I have been stuck in this endless circle.


When I scroll down to select a calm playlist to listen, a song pop up on the screen.


It was perfect.


Troubling doubts are still lingering in my head but I try to forget how I did in the exam; there's no use of thinking back what I did wrong or right - it would only worsen my overthinking.


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